Sweat poured down both fighters’ faces as their weapons clashed again and again, sparks continuing to fly as neither gained a clear advantage. At first, Ringer intentionally aimed for Tarvitz’s injured right arm, but as the battle progressed, his accuracy quickly gave way to increased speed and power as adrenaline pumped through his muscular body. Utilizing aspects of his lightsaber training, the Wookiee stayed in constant motion, nimbly jumping at Tarvitz from different directions. With each swing, he came a little closer to penetrating his opponent’s defenses as Tarvitz began to struggle to keep up with Ringer’s Marauder intensity, and he could tell that the repeated blocks were beginning to pain the human’s already hurt arm. The Wookiee still had to respect Tarvitz’s impressive endurance; although obviously fatigued, the Equite could still definitely control his breathing. In addition, Tarvitz kept pelting Ringer from all sides with bits of trash that had been left around the amphitheater, preventing the Wookiee from truly sinking into a comfortable rhythm.
Forced to do something to change the tide of the onslaught, Tarvitz lashed out with his sword, nicking Ringer’s right quad, drawing a pained grunt from the Wookiee. Tarvitz leapt backwards to disengage, though not quite quickly enough to completely dodge the last brutal horizontal swing from Ringer’s staff, which had already been in motion when Tarvitz had launched his own attack. The electrified tip caught him on the left shoulder, and although the staff was on the lowest setting, the jolt still caused him to let out a cry of pain as he spun away.
Ringer was paying the price for the intensity of that last exchange as the adrenaline ebbed away, leaving him temporarily exhausted as his body struggled to compensate. He knew he wasn’t going to last much longer at this pace, especially with the cut on his leg. He examined the wound and, finding it to be somewhat shallow, willed the skin to close. It would still throb for a while until he had the strength to treat it properly, but this would keep it from widening through further exertion. He noticed Tarvitz holding his elbow, obviously doing the same thing for his own injury.
No matter the outcome of this match, Ringer was going to be satisfied with having gone toe-to-toe with his experienced opponent. But he did have one gambit left to try as he planned for the next bout.
“Ready to call it?” Ringer could hear the smile in the human’s words, both combatants knowing that neither would give up until they were obviously defeated. You know what happened the last time I “yielded,” Ringer communicated directly to Tarvitz’s mind, flashing his own grin. Both fighters readied their weapons, having rested enough to come together one more time.
Ringer again initiated the battle, flipping forward to land a few feet in front of Tarvitz. The flip had been more than just for show, though. When his body was at just the right angle to shield the action from his opponent, the Wookiee retrieved a small object from his robes. As he landed, he lifted the item, his Inquisitor comlink, and let out a roar as he activated it. As he had hoped, Tarvitz flinched a lot worse than would be expected from the roar. The human’s hands flew to his ears in an involuntary attempt to block them from the roar issuing from his own comlink, embedded in his helmet. The Equite’s grip on his sword was compromised enough for Ringer to easily slam it out of his hands as the roar ceased.
Yield? the Wookiee asked, his staff held at the ready. Tarvitz held up a hand as he removed his helmet with the other.
“I yield. Good thing you can speak to my mind, because I don’t think I’ll be able to hear well for a while,” the human replied, massaging his temples to relieve what must have been a brutal headache. After a moment, he stepped forward, extending a hand to shake. Ringer clasped it with a nod.
“Nice move. I’ll have to remember to switch off my comlink next time I fight. I know the Inquisitorius tells us to keep us to keep them on all the time, but it becomes at the very least a distraction mid-battle, if not worse.” Ringer acknowledge the compliment with a nod and the two fighters exited the amphitheater.
Syntax
Repetition of "blow" without enhancing the story. Using the same noun or verb in quick sequence can be tiring for a reader, mentally. Should change it up to keep it varied.
Story
This was a suitable opening post and gets things going well. You set up the reason for the match, though not necessarily the individual motivations of the combatants themselves. While you spend a lot of time granting a personality to your own character, your opponent's character is given less of a treatment. It's the type of situation where you could swap Tarvitz out with another character and the story itself really wouldn't change much (assuming it's another Odan-Urr character). Still, you interspersed some nice character history to explain the actions being taken. It's a good effort to make the action engaging and interesting.