Competition: Haiku we do.

Finished

Haiku we do.

So lets kick this first week off with the wonderful Haiku. A haiku is a three lined poem. The first line has five syllables, the second has seven syllables, and the third has five. Here is an example:

"The Heart grows fonder

with you away, behind me

one day to come home."

The inspiration I want you guys to use is "Planets". Now that can be Earth, any of our solar systems planets, or maybe even a planet from the Star Wars Universe. The choice is up to you.

You will be scored on Originality, Creativity, Sticking to the rules of the poem, and how well you use the inspiration.

So ready, set , Haiku.

Competition Information

Parent Competition: A Poetic Month
Organized by: Dr. Rhylance, Bobecc Varga
Running time: 2016-03-01 until 2016-03-08 (8 days)
Target Unit: Entire DJB
Competition Type: Poetry
Awards: Third Level Crescents
Participants: 38 subscribers, of which 35 have participated.

Results

1st place

Aiden Dru

Member: Aiden Dru
Submission: Aiden Dru opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement: 1st place

2nd place

Kryy Vitaan

Member

Kryy Vitaan

Textual submission

Wookiees from Kashyyyk,

and Togrutas from Shili,

Wish they spoke basic

Placement

2nd place

3rd place

Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir

Member: Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
Textual submission: "Sunlight on a breeze
Soil tilled with blood and bright breath
On this land I grew."
Placement: 3rd place

4th place

Ringer Klang

Member: Ringer Klang
Textual submission: The Republic's home,
Coruscant glitters with lights,
yet conceals darkness
Placement: 4th place

5th place

Octavia Morgan Obrie

Member

Octavia Morgan Obrie

Textual submission

"Pluto" By Octavia Morgan Obrie

Are You a Planet?

Who Even Knows Anymore?

So Cold, Poor Pluto

Placement

5th place

6th place

Keirdagh Taldrya Cantor

Member

Keirdagh Taldrya Cantor

File submission

83_AidenBob_Haiku.png

Textual submission

Poem:
Alderaan was nice.
Twas both beautiful and clean.
Shame it went kaboom.

Background: http://swtor.wikia.com/wiki/File:CA_Alderaan_full.jpg

Placement

6th place

7th place

Korroth

Member: Korroth
File submission: Haikuwedo-Korroth_8488.pdf
Placement: 7th place

8th place

Master Zsarion Bloodfyre

Member

Master Zsarion Bloodfyre

Textual submission

There are no limits
To syllables in Haiku
Here, or Tatooine.

Some traditional
Others ignore the normal
Like troopers and droids.

So let me be frank
On Earth or on Tatooine
Haiku are the same.

Placement

8th place

9th place

Magness Dritch

Member: Magness Dritch
Textual submission: Remote in beauty,
Pale eye against a black sea,
Mute face in the dark.
Placement: 9th place

10th place

Junazee

Member: Junazee
Textual submission: “Swirling thru dark space
Colors of white, blue and green
This is our home, earth.”
Placement: 10th place

Benn Nevis

Member: Benn Nevis
Textual submission: "Dosuun, my lost home
My Master, I murdered there
Never to return"
Placement: No placement

Akaarn Tayl'cor

Member: Akaarn Tayl'cor
Textual submission: Generations pass.
What once belonged, now dismissed.
Pluto remembered.
Placement: No placement

Master Bentre Stahoes

Member: Master Bentre Stahoes
Textual submission: wife's home of Ryloth
Dry hot and yet beautiful
Even with all the sand
Placement: No placement

Tasha'Vel Versea

Member: Tasha'Vel Versea
Textual submission: Ryloth is very nice
Hot, rocky and exciting
A sweet paradise
Placement: No placement

Moff Alethia Archenksova

Member: Moff Alethia Archenksova
Textual submission: Vacation time again.
This year it's on Alderaan.
Is that a moon or-?
Placement: No placement

Corvus Corax

Member: Corvus Corax
Textual submission: Freakishly heated
Named after the goddess love,
Toxic atmosphere
Placement: No placement

Lord Halcyon

Member: Lord Halcyon
Textual submission: Hoth is really cold.
You can freeze your ass off there
And the Tauntauns smell
Placement: No placement

Qyreia Arronen

Member: Qyreia Arronen
Textual submission: Speeding through the sky
Messenger of the heavens
A speck in Sol's light
Placement: No placement

Maximus Alvinius

Member: Maximus Alvinius
Submission: Maximus Alvinius opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement: No placement

Howlader Taldrya

Member: Howlader Taldrya
Textual submission: Kylo hates dad
Order hates disorder
Hosnian Prime boom
Placement: No placement

General Kenath Zoron Ad Vizsla

Member: General Kenath Zoron Ad Vizsla
Textual submission: Karufr. Our Home.
No one knows we rule the place.
Taldryan is best.
Placement: No placement

Mako Henymory

Member

Mako Henymory

Textual submission

Title: New Tython

Spinning ball of Joy

Alone in space, so alone

Surface fire kills life

Placement

No placement

Sage Enzo Dek

Member: Sage Enzo Dek
Submission: Sage Enzo Dek opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement: No placement

Telona Murrage

Member: Telona Murrage
Textual submission: A giant up high.
Watching with a great red eye.
Jupiter beckons.
Placement: No placement

A deleted dossier

Member: A deleted dossier
Textual submission: The sun is unleashed
One heavenly dance, broken
The fall, absolute.
Placement: No placement

Kookimarissia Mimosa-Inahj

Member: Kookimarissia Mimosa-Inahj
Textual submission: Leia's Alderaan
Destroyed by a huge Death Star
Because she said "No!"
Placement: No placement

Lilith Alema'rha Versea-Stormwind

Member: Lilith Alema'rha Versea-Stormwind
Textual submission: Taris I fled from
Janos I met and fell for
Taris I returned
Placement: No placement

Qor Kith

Member: Qor Kith
Textual submission: Waters stained and rot,
as lands are dissolved, we cry,
It's time for a change.
Placement: No placement

Blade Master Nero Ashraven

Member: Blade Master Nero Ashraven
Submission: Blade Master Nero Ashraven opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement: No placement

Aul Celsus

Member: Aul Celsus
Textual submission: The little blue dot
Supporting little beings
Just to know itself
Placement: No placement

Quo-Wing-Tzun

Member: Quo-Wing-Tzun
Textual submission: Planet wide city
Artificial Jungle
Of concrete and steel
Placement: No placement

Saitou Tarentae

Member: Saitou Tarentae
Textual submission: Yridia II
Water, water ev'rywhere
Castle Tarentum
Placement: No placement

Dr. Giyana Jurro

Member: Dr. Giyana Jurro
Submission: Dr. Giyana Jurro opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement: No placement

Ranarr Kul-Tarentae

Member: Ranarr Kul-Tarentae
Textual submission: In Quelii Sector
My heart will always be on
My planet Cathar
Placement: No placement

Blade Mistress Shadow Nighthunter

Member: Blade Mistress Shadow Nighthunter
Textual submission: Home so far away
Yet here is where I must stay
farewell Coruscant
Placement: No placement

Mauro Wynter

Member: Mauro Wynter
Textual submission: Caina here we come
Wonder of the Cocytus
Desolate landscape
Placement: No placement