Competition: [Summer Selen-bration] Summer Haiku

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[Summer Selen-bration] Summer Haiku

Write a 5/7/5 syllables Haiku that describes what your character thinks about summer on Selen.

We will be using the website below to count Haiku syllables during gradiing, so if you’re not certain about your syllables, use this website as your guide. Any haiku that doesn’t meet the 5/7/5 requirement will not be eligible for placement but will count for participation purposes.

http://www.haikusyllablecounter.com/

Competition Information
Parent Competition
[Arcona] Summer Sun Selen-bration
Organized by
Riverche, Larrik Dul'vak
Running time
2016-06-20 until 2016-07-05 (16 days)
Target Unit
Clan Arcona
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Third Level Crescents
Participants
18 subscribers, of which 18 have participated.
Results
Member
Krath Adherent Edema R'uh-Kalinor
File submission
Arcona_Summer_Haiku.doc
Placement
1st place
Member
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
Textual submission

Deep and mild, fat, warm;
swelled with good rain and growing,
Sleepy bees and song.

These and hazy sun
Drunken on heat and honey;
We all work merry.

Air smells constant of
turned earth and fertilizer
and berries and songs.

The crops all flourished.
Life was richly beautiful
and sweeter than good sighs.

The setting sun baked
her shoulders like wheat freshly
risen into bread

The sweaty comfort
of her small hand clutching tight
her father’s fingers.

In her chest sat a
Certain heaviness, puzzled,
Express and too sad.

She entertained then
The thought that she could collect
gravity in her.

Collect it in her
ribcage and sell it right with the
vegetables to

Whoever wanted
to keep their feet on the ground;
then she might just fly.

Now no longer do
My hands grow and turn good soil;
Now there is but blood.

I have seen such things
And flown farther than once dreamed
Into shadows, love.

I have become a
Weightless creature, unbound yet
Imprisoned willing

By oath and love deep
Deeper than my summers gone
More than gravity.

I do not plant now.
Now, I make jaunts and jesters
Spinning holidays

Knowing we must all
Celebrate while we can yet
Because like those crops

Like those gone summers,
We will reach beyond ourselves
And find what withers.

Laugh now in bright sun
Before your heartbeat fades fast
Smile, my dear darlings.

For even shadows
Fall and fade, their glimmer gone;
We are all stardust.

Placement
2nd place
Member
Proconsul Diyrian "Diy" Grivna
Textual submission

*Notes: Set up as a letter to her Father. ***Important Notes: This has multiple Stanzas, I checked with Zakath.
Haiku below this point:

New these rays of light
Pushing through the tree branches,
Familar to home.

First summer I've seen
On Selen, My Arcona
With which I belong.

Atti makes a point
To train outdoors in the sun,
Meditation dance.

These days make me think
Of afternoons in the shade
Eating food with you.

Papa, I'm okay.
Smile, smile to the memories.
I'll visit sometime.

Placement
3rd place
Member
Vivibelle Baenre
Textual submission

Fun in the hot sun / Thus water guns aplenty / A soaking wet duel

Placement
4th place
Member
Battlelord Mateus Kelborn
Textual submission

A burning ball of light
Booze, sleep and women plenty
Life, truly perfect.

Placement
5th place
Member
Larrik Dul'vak
Textual submission

Celebrate Summer
I don't know nothing on this
Celebrate Summer!

Placement
No placement
Member
General Stres'tron'garmis
Submission
General Stres'tron'garmis opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Magness Dritch
Textual submission

My glasses are dark
And though my eyes see nothing
My skin feels the warmth

Placement
No placement
Member
Braecen Kaeth
Textual submission

Summer sun up high
A jewel in the blue sky
Resting like a crown

Placement
No placement
Member
Consul Ikarri Itinen
Textual submission

Hot, Humid, Arid
Frivalous, Celebration
Wasteful Decadence

Placement
No placement
Member
Antonai 'PaRapRappa' Lanfear
Textual submission

Have to be outside

Roasting in heat, In I go

Behold all my fucks

Placement
No placement
Member
Lord Marick Tyris Arconae
Textual submission

Sunlight casts shadows
Shadows are good for hiding
Hide from Atyiru

Placement
No placement
Member
Ghost Rulvak Qurroc
Submission
Ghost Rulvak Qurroc opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Shawnathan Do'Urden
Textual submission

Hot, muggy, no shade
Dry and sunny in the glades,
This jedi now fades

Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Alaris Jinn
Textual submission

I suppose that I
can't complain about free food
Get what you pay for

Placement
No placement
Member
Celahir Erinos Arconae
Textual submission

Summer in Selen
Heat Celahir didn't like
Airco is broken

Placement
No placement
Member
Ernordeth Puer-Irae
Textual submission

Why is it so hot?
It makes me want to murder
A few sand people

Placement
No placement
Member
Ossk
Textual submission

No sign can foretell
The raging Barabel's roar
How soon it will kill.

Placement
No placement