Competition: Part II: Teenage Years

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Part II: Teenage Years

Prompt:

Smells like teen spirit...

In this fiction, depict one key moment from your character's teenage years. Then, explain how this moment helped make them the character they are today. A teenager is species dependent so I won't put a number on it, but anytime from pre-teen years to anytime before your character is young adult.

For some inspiration:

"With the lights out, it's less dangerous

Here we are now, entertain us

I feel stupid and contagious

Here we are now, entertain us"

Smells like Teen Spirit

Note: This is the second part of the Core Memories Trilogy, so feel free to write each part with a trilogy in mind. I will be grading each part of the trilogy separate from the others, but it would be a great writing exercise to weave the three parts together like a real trilogy.

Grading: This will be based on the official Voice Fiction Grading Rubric. https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1ORZSSPj1_-15s-zHfyyqTuIBrC1s_DyvXkRoDcnzkDI/edit?pref=2&pli=1#gid=0

Rules: Write a minimum of 500 words that cover the fiction prompt. PDF submissions are preferred but you can also use word format(.doc or .docx) or pages format. You may also use the submission box.

Reward: Crescents for 1st, 2nd, and 3rd place

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Core Memories
Organized by
Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
Running time
2016-08-05 until 2016-09-05 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Second Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
23 subscribers, of which 10 have participated.
Results
Member
Governor Tierra Suha'sen
Submission
Governor Tierra Suha'sen opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
1st place
2nd place
Darth Renatus
Member
Darth Renatus
File submission
11708-AtraVentus-PartIITeenageYears.pdf
Textual submission

Please find attached my submission for the competition.

- Atra "Xue Long" Ventus, #11708

Placement
2nd place
Member
Proconsul Diyrian "Diy" Grivna
Submission
Proconsul Diyrian "Diy" Grivna opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
3rd place
Member
Rosh Nyine
File submission
Core_Memories_-_Teenage_Years.pdf
Textual submission

Enjoy!

Placement
No placement
Member
General Stres'tron'garmis
File submission
TeenageYears.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
A deleted dossier
File submission
Teenage_Years_Andrelious.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Moff Alethia Archenksova
File submission
CoreMemoriesIITeenageYears.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Kookimarissia Mimosa-Inahj
File submission
Teenage_Years.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Lord Marick Tyris Arconae
File submission
TeenageYearsMarickArconae_Entry.pdf
Textual submission

I think the ending of the story reflects how far Marick has come since an awkward teenager. He has fine clothing, a soft bed, a partner and pretty much lives in a giant mansion built into the side of a mountain (Arcona Citadel). The tie to the data-cd and the music he listened to when he was younger comes back to how Marick often never takes time for himself.

I don't think this event particularly defined Marick as he is today, but it does show why Marick lives a very minimalist lifestyle and doesn't go for overt showings of wealth, despite having a very healthy bank account. Credits and worrying about his next meal never occur to him anymore, but he never forgets the rags that he wore and where he came from.

Placement
No placement
Member
Qyreia Arronen
File submission
TeenageYears__QA14369.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
A deleted dossier
File submission
Mandalore.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Battlelord Mateus Kelborn
File submission
PartIITeenageYears.pdf
Placement
No placement