Competition: Bi-Weekly Poetry Beta reassesment

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Bi-Weekly Poetry Beta reassesment

Same as last time. I give a subject, you give me a poem based on that subject. This time, the subject is The Force

No specific requirements for the poem. Will accept gdocs .docx, or submission box. (Note gdoc links will be kept until judging ends, submissions marked to allow others to read them will be posted to the fiction chat on telegram)

Grading will be based on composition, adherence to the subject, and creativity in equal parts.

Competition Information
Organized by
blackhawk
Running time
2016-09-05 until 2016-09-19 (15 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Third Level Crescents
Participants
16 subscribers, of which 9 have participated.
Results
Member
Grand Inquisitor Morax Darkblade
Submission
Grand Inquisitor Morax Darkblade opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
1st place
Member
Adept Tahiri Thorn Morte Tarentae
Textual submission

In darkness and in light,
Neither alive nor dead.
Unseeing and unfeeling,
Yet felt and observed by every creature.
Weaving its essence through the universe,
Making it balanced and whole.
Gifted are those who weave and wield it,
Either dark or light may use its power.
By fear or by love,
It may be used to help or hinder.
Let it free you and become one,
For it flows though you and is you.
In light or in darkness it guides,
Keep to your path or you will fall.

Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Remurr Hijaa
Member
Remurr Hijaa
Submission
Remurr Hijaa opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
3rd place
Member
Ernordeth Puer-Irae
Textual submission

Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
The Force surrounds and penetrates you.

Placement
4th place
Member
Lucifer Scorpio Romanov
Textual submission

The Force brings Darkness,
The Force brings Light,
Though it brings both,
Only what is hidden deep within shall be revealed from thy heart.

Placement
5th place
6th place
Mauro Wynter
Member
Mauro Wynter
Textual submission

Invisible it
Flows effortlessly through
All things truly

Placement
6th place
7th place
Armad
Member
Armad
Textual submission

Flowing through everything
Old and young alike
Radiating from the few
Concentration brings the best
Energizes us all

Placement
7th place
Member
A deleted dossier
Textual submission

Gentle Call

A lone, gentle call
From a distance unseen realm
Peace at heart, I smile

Placement
8th place
Member
Master Bentre Stahoes
Submission
Master Bentre Stahoes opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
9th place
Member
Howlader Taldrya
Textual submission

Thrones
Hate
Excitement

Furious
Other
Rage
Chafed
Excitement

Placement
10th place