Competition: Bi-Weekly Poetry Beta reassesment

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Bi-Weekly Poetry Beta reassesment

Same as last time. I give a subject, you give me a poem based on that subject. This time, the subject is The Force

No specific requirements for the poem. Will accept gdocs .docx, or submission box. (Note gdoc links will be kept until judging ends, submissions marked to allow others to read them will be posted to the fiction chat on telegram)

Grading will be based on composition, adherence to the subject, and creativity in equal parts.

Competition Information

Organized by: blackhawk
Running time: 2016-09-05 until 2016-09-19 (15 days)
Target Unit: Entire DJB
Competition Type: Poetry
Awards: Third Level Crescents
Participants: 16 subscribers, of which 9 have participated.

Results

1st place

Grand Inquisitor Morax Darkblade

Member: Grand Inquisitor Morax Darkblade
Submission: Grand Inquisitor Morax Darkblade opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement: 1st place

2nd place

Adept Tahiri Thorn Morte Tarentae

Member: Adept Tahiri Thorn Morte Tarentae
Textual submission: In darkness and in light,
Neither alive nor dead.
Unseeing and unfeeling,
Yet felt and observed by every creature.
Weaving its essence through the universe,
Making it balanced and whole.
Gifted are those who weave and wield it,
Either dark or light may use its power.
By fear or by love,
It may be used to help or hinder.
Let it free you and become one,
For it flows though you and is you.
In light or in darkness it guides,
Keep to your path or you will fall.
Placement: 2nd place

3rd place

Remurr Hijaa

Member: Remurr Hijaa
Submission: Remurr Hijaa opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement: 3rd place

4th place

Ernordeth Puer-Irae

Member: Ernordeth Puer-Irae
Textual submission: Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
The Force surrounds and penetrates you.
Placement: 4th place

5th place

Lucifer Scorpio Romanov

Member: Lucifer Scorpio Romanov
Textual submission: The Force brings Darkness,
The Force brings Light,
Though it brings both,
Only what is hidden deep within shall be revealed from thy heart.
Placement: 5th place

6th place

Mauro Wynter

Member: Mauro Wynter
Textual submission: Invisible it
Flows effortlessly through
All things truly
Placement: 6th place

7th place

Armad

Member: Armad
Textual submission: Flowing through everything
Old and young alike
Radiating from the few
Concentration brings the best
Energizes us all
Placement: 7th place