Competition: Part III: Young/Emerging Adult Core Memory

Finished
Part III: Young/Emerging Adult Core Memory

Prompt:

In this fiction, depict one key moment from your character's young adult years. You could also define young adult as an emerging adult. After reading this fiction, I should be able to understand how your depicted memory will make your character who they are today. Do your best to ensure this happens. A young adult is species dependent so I won't put a number on it, but anytime after the teen years is acceptable.

To commemorate this moment in life, here is a great example of when you finally started getting adult privileges:

Adult privileges

Note: This is the last part of the Core Memories Trilogy, so feel free to write this part as if its the end of a trilogy. I will be grading each part of the trilogy separate from the others, but it would be a great writing exercise to weave the three parts together.

Grading: This will be based on the official Voice Fiction Grading Rubric. https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1ORZSSPj1_-15s-zHfyyqTuIBrC1s_DyvXkRoDcnzkDI/edit?pref=2&pli=1#gid=0

Rules: Write a minimum of 500 words that cover the fiction prompt. PDF submissions are preferred but you can also use word format(.doc or .docx) or pages format. You may also use the submission box.

Reward: Crescents for 1st, 2nd, and 3rd place

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Core Memories
Organized by
Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
Running time
2016-09-08 until 2016-10-09 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Second Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
7 subscribers, of which 2 have participated.
Results
Member
General Stres'tron'garmis
File submission
Nimban.pdf
Placement
1st place
Member
Grand Inquisitor Morax Darkblade
Submission
Grand Inquisitor Morax Darkblade opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
2nd place