Competition: Legacy: The Ballad of..."

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Legacy: The Ballad of..."

In some places, heroes and villains end up having songs written about them during their moments of triumph or even moments where they made a last stand.

As the "bard" you're to write a ballad about your character for the Hall of Memories to hold, so that future assassins can listen to the tale of your greatness. Write at least five stanzas, and have some rhyming format. Grading will be based upon creativity, rhyming, and continuity. Realism isn't a huge factor, for even bards tend to exaggerate in their songs.

If you would like an example to listen to, here are two from Skyrim.

"Ragnar the Red" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nexk5FsBDTM "The Dragonborn Comes" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WWLCH4QpApo

Competition Information
Organized by
Blade Mistress Shadow Nighthunter
Running time
2016-10-07 until 2017-01-06 (3 months)
Target Unit
Battleteam Tacitus Athanasius
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Fifth Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
2 subscribers, of which 2 have participated.
Results
Member
Alara Deathbane
Textual submission

The lass, though young, broke free from her cage
She was merely 9 years of age
Despite the parents that gave her away
Alara Deathbane sent her captives to their grave

She takes orders from no one,
Save her young sis
Even Jedi in temple could not tame this miss
Her anger was too fierce, with kill in her kiss

The young born assassin became a young knight
She’s Sergeant to sister, she’s first in the fight
Many fear her eyes that hold strength and might
Alara Deathbane , the girl with fire in her eyes

The girl with thick heritage has more to face
More battles to fight, more to learn of her race
Her footing still quivers, but no matter the place
Alara Deathbane, Force Power she’ll embrace

And though trials she faces get harder with time
There’s no mountain summit that she won’t climb
She’s human and Sephi, muscle and cunning combined
This Knight has more to come, she’s still in her prime

Placement
1st place
Member
Kylex Sanguris
File submission
ThereoncewasamancalledMatt.docx
Textual submission

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Placement
2nd place