Competition: Aftermath: Week 3 Scene Writing 2

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Aftermath: Week 3 Scene Writing 2

Pravus cuts down the strong and weak alike. Write an obituary for your character as if they were killed by the Dark Lord in 300 words or less. Who did they leave behind? What did they accomplish? What kind of person were they? Grading will be by all three Clan Consuls, based on creativity, spelling and staying within the assigned word count.

As with all events of Aftermath, the event states "Entire DJB," but is only open to Arcona, Plagueis and Tarentum.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Aftermath: A Threeway Event
Organized by
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir, Teylas Ramar, Frosty Romanae Tarentae
Running time
2016-10-17 until 2016-10-24 (8 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Third Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
19 subscribers, of which 12 have participated.
Results
1st place
Darth Renatus
Member
Darth Renatus
Submission
Darth Renatus opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
1st place
Member
Envoy Taranae Rhode
Textual submission

Today we mourn the passing of Battlemaster Taranae Rhode, Taskmaster of Clan Plagueis and friend to most, unless her ire was raised. Born on Naboo, she was a kind soul until she was separated from her family and she leaves behind a loving sister, Vanessa and a devoted Mother. Her power grew as she trained in the Dark Side, and she became a force to be reckoned with as she climbed the hierarchy of the Clan without pause. Holding positions on the summit of the Clan, she helped new recruits soar to great heights, mentoring students as she went. Kul'tak Drol being her finest achievment. Battleteam leader, Aedile, Quaestor and Rollmaster; she achieved all of these positions and performed admirably, receiving recognition from the Clan Summit and the dark Council. Now, she has been cut down in the prime of her life and service to the Clan as she fought bravely to end the tyranny of Darth Pravus, the Grand master of the Broherhood.

We commend her body to the stars and wish her a safe journey a she becomes one with the Force. may the Force speed you, Taranae

Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Braecen Kaeth
Member
Braecen Kaeth
Textual submission

Kaeth, Braecen – With a brief moment of silence, we honor the fallen Dark Side Adept, Braecen Kaeth, born on Corellia in the first year after the Battle of Yavin. His journey took him from a playful youth Oceanside to a purposeful scholar of the Dark Arts of the Brotherhood. He is survived by his Apprentince, Alaris Jinn, and a cadre of dutiful lieutenants within House Galeres. Braecen worked with great enthusiasm on opening upstart Journeymen and Equites to their full potential in the Force. This work would start and stop within several Clans of the Brotherhood before he retired to focus on his work in Clan Arcona. His work served a great purpose, but was soon nullified in the conflict against the Grand Master as all were slain by the Grand Master and his Iron Legion. He enjoyed golf, bowling and his worship of the Lord, Wedge Antilles. A memorial service will be held in a fortnight aboard the Darkest Night, a flagship Braecen previously served aboard.

Placement
3rd place
Member
Obelisk Adherent Rrogon Skar Agrona
Submission
Obelisk Adherent Rrogon Skar Agrona opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
General Stres'tron'garmis
Textual submission

Here lies Kordath Bleu, the one Ryn to foolishly stand up to the Iron Throne.
He's survived by almost no one.
As the Ryn was not a front line fighter, it is believed that anyone he cared for or loved was killed before he himself was struck down.

Placement
No placement
Member
Archpriestess Aay'han Agrona Beviin
Textual submission

It is with regret that we announce the death of Nath Agrona member of Clan Arcona, House Galeres, she passed at the age of twenty five in service to her Clan.

Many knew of her but few knew her. Born on Iridonia she was found by the now deceased Zakath Agrona and brought into the fold of the Shadow Clan.

Diligent in her service, Nath has served both Galeres and Qel-Droma. In her time she has served within Dark Forge, Shadow Gate, Nighthawk, Soul Fire and most recently Tal'mahe'Ra.

Her pride however, are her Students Skar Agrona and Kordath Bleu d'Tana, whom she trained and have accomplished much within the Clan.

She also created ties in and outside Clan Arcona. Some had more substance than others but are of equal mention.

As her wish there will be no service held, her remains have been passed to Kalon Tsucyra Entar who will carry out her final wishes as laid out in her will.

It was also a part of her will to make known that there are those who will receive private messages, these will be delivered in short order.

*Death is just the next step.*

Placement
No placement
Member
Ghost Rulvak Qurroc
File submission
Aftermath-Week3Scene2.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Ranarr Kul-Tarentae
Textual submission

Major Ranarr (Itshim) Kul, 21, born in Kuzil on Planet Cathar, died in battle on Sunday, October 23th, on Antei. This young and eager Cathar, often stubborn and touchy, shall always be remembered for his devotion and loyalty to Clan Tarentum and its members. Founder of the Order of the Trident, current Rollmaster of Tarentum and active member of battleteam Grey Wolf. Although not leaving behind an actual family, he'll surely be missed by his 'Tarentum family'.

Placement
No placement
Member
Abadeer Taasii
Textual submission

Abadeer Taasii was a loyal servitor of Plagueis. He worked hard in his short time to better the Clan and lead those that he chose as his new family. He is remembered by House Karness Muur, who grieve for their fallen Aedile. Abadeer lost his life like so many others, at the hands of the Dark Lord, Darth Pravus, himself. Abadeer bravely took on the Sith Lord to protect his allies, allowing them a chance to get off planet when all hope was lost. His life was spent so that many more could live on. Though he has no family that remember him on his home planet of Shilli, he will be remembered by those that he considered family in the end.

Placement
No placement
Member
Silent
File submission
Death.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
A deleted dossier
Submission
The deleted member did not want their submission published.
Placement
No placement
Member
Battlelord Mateus Kelborn
Textual submission

Mateus Kelborn, slain by Grand Master Pravus during the assault on the Suffering.

Loyal son of Mandalore.

Devoted Shadesworn.

Unfortunately, not much else. Sucks to be the new guy, doesn’t it?

Placement
No placement