Competition: AFS: Native of Karufr

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AFS: Native of Karufr

Week One of Alaris' Fiction Series. The Voice's Fiction Rubric will be used for grading.

The culling of Karufr has affected more than just the members of Taldryan. Many civilian lives were impact directly that dark day. In a minimum of 250 words and a maximum of 750, tell us a story following a civilian who was thrown into the collateral damage of Jac Cotelin's wrath.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Alaris's Fiction Series
Organized by
Adept Alaris Jinn
Running time
2016-12-12 until 2016-12-18 (7 days)
Target Unit
Clan Taldryan
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Third Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
2 subscribers, of which 1 has participated.
Results
1st place
Raiheaux
Member
Raiheaux
File submission
AlarisFiction1.pdf
Placement
1st place
Member
A deleted dossier
File submission
Alaris_Fiction_1.docx
Placement
2nd place
Member
A deleted dossier
Textual submission

The bombing started without warming. Scarlet was having lunch with her family when the first wave of planetary bombardment started, followed by an even more sadistic and methodical hit by bombers to exterminate. For the space of a few seconds, she and her husband did not even understand what was happening. Sure they were warning of an oncoming invasion, but to face death in the face gives one a sense of reality. When the ground started to groan under the impact of bombs, when the cry of dying rent the air, and when the air itself began to get heavy from dust and debris, that is when Scarlet and her husband knew their time had come.
Quickly they grabbed their two children and emergency bags, and started running out on the main street towards the nearest designated bomb shelter.

“Is it this way?” cried Scarlet while carrying her younger kid, a bright-eyed and sweet girl of 4 years. Her air was already disheveled from dust and debris. But that’s not the worst part. Her kids were scared now. It was in their eyes.

Taking the other child, a boy of 8 along with the bags, her husband said “From the looks of the map those government guys gave, yes!” There were people around, hundreds of them. From the looks of it, all of them were running towards the emergency bomb shelter. His only fear was that it would fill up before his family could get there. To that end, he did not want help others by giving them directions to the shelter. He already lied to a few.
And that’s when it came. At first, it was only a loud shrill noise. Before they knew it, an incendiary bomb hit the street, burning away everything before it, flesh and metal.

Placement
3rd place