Competition: [Tar WG] Two Sentence Horror Story: White Hell

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[Tar WG] Two Sentence Horror Story: White Hell

Inspired by this blog post about Two Sentence Horror Stories I've decided to turn this idea into a competition.

The gist is simple: write a two sentence (minimum and maximum) horror story about: "The White Hell". A story related or happening in a snow blizzard or a snowy planet.

Remember to write in two sentences, no more, no less. Grading will be done using this formula: 50% Story, 25% Spelling/Grammar and 25% Entertainment with an emphasis on scariness.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Tarentum Winter Games
Organized by
Frosty Romanae Tarentae
Running time
2017-01-13 until 2017-01-20 (8 days)
Target Unit
Clan Tarentum
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Fourth Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
2 subscribers, of which 2 have participated.
Results
Member
Minister Cor-Hatha Vow
Textual submission

I followed the footprints in the fresh now, all the way back home. I live alone.

Placement
1st place
2nd place
Sala Fe
Member
Sala Fe
Textual submission

The white, cold snow quietly fell on the corpse, broken ribs and cooking organs embracing the dark night sky. Children, rabid with hungry, giggled as they enjoyed their meal.

Placement
2nd place