Competition: Shore Leave #2: The Beach!!

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Shore Leave #2: The Beach!!

Prompt:

Everyone needs a little shore leave from time to time. These moments are precious and let us enjoy those "slice of life" moments that we should all hold dear. This time, the Council has secured everyone a vacation at the beach. It is sunny, warm, and it has plenty of ocean to swim in should you wish to wash off the caked on dirt/sand. Your character finds themselves surrounded by at least 3 other Odanites (could be more! Family members do not count towards this total if they are NPCs.) What shenanigans go on? How does the group interact with each other? Does the sand get everywhere? ^^

Beach

Write a fiction, focusing on character interactions -at minimum 500 words - that depicts your character spending some valuable shore leave on the beach with at least 3 members of the Clan. Family members can be included but they don’t count towards this total if they are NPCs.. Sunshine, drinks and good food for everyone!!

Grading Criteria:

Grading will be based on the Fiction Rubric.

Competition Information
Organized by
Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
Running time
2017-03-15 until 2017-04-18 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Clan Odan-Urr
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Third Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
9 subscribers, of which 3 have participated.
Results
Member
Moff Alethia Archenksova
File submission
ShoreLeave2.pdf
Textual submission

A bit bare bones, but hopefully good for a laugh.

Placement
1st place
2nd place
Mako Henymory
Member
Mako Henymory
File submission
ShoreLeave2TheBeach-Mako.pdf
Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Adept Xantros
Member
Adept Xantros
File submission
Lt._Col._Lithar_Andaris__11518__Shore_Leave__2.doc
Placement
3rd place