Competition: [TEB Week 1] Fiction

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[TEB Week 1] Fiction

Compose a fiction of at least 500 words created from one of the two prompts provided below. The official Voice Fiction Grading Rubric will be used to grade this event with particular consideration given to how your character reacts in a chaotic situation.

PROMPTS

PROMT A: You thought it would be another ordinary evening or R&R in Aliso City. Things seemed as peaceful as they ever do on Aliso and you finally had some time to unwind. How could you be so naive? All of a sudden you hear explosions in the distance and moments later, B1 Battle Droids start swarming all over the place. In the chaos, everyone looks for you to take charge of the situation and engage the droids in battle.

PROMPT B: While on a routine assignment you thought would just be another boring night of guard duty, Aliso is rocked by the shockwave of a not-to-distant explosion. The droid attack has begun. Whatever it is that you've been assigned to guard (a power station, slave holding area, etc) has not reacted well to this explosion, and things have gone from bad to worse. It is up to you to restore order/restore power/prevent secondary detonations using whatever methods you can.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
[PLA] The Enemy Below
Organized by
Master Selika Roh di Plagia, Grand Inquisitor Arden Karn di Plagia, Abadeer Taasii
Running time
2017-03-20 until 2017-03-26 (7 days)
Target Unit
Clan Plagueis
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Third Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
15 subscribers, of which 13 have participated.
Results
Member
General Ronovi Tavisaen
File submission
PLATheEnemyBelowWeekOneFictionPromptA.pdf
Placement
1st place
Member
A deleted dossier
File submission
TEB_Week_One_Fiction_-_Aliso_City.docx
Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Silas Manx
Member
Silas Manx
File submission
_TEB_Week_1__Fiction.pdf
Textual submission

I altered Prompt B a bit by changing my mission from "guard duty" to maintenance since Pollus likes to build, fix, and repair stuff.

Placement
3rd place
Member
Envoy Taranae Rhode
File submission
Prompt_A.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Silent
File submission
The_Ale_Hole.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Savant Zuser Whuloc
File submission
TEB_Week_1.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Teylas Ramar
Submission
Teylas Ramar opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Reaver Tra'an Reith di Plagia
File submission
TEB_Week_1_Fiction_Traan_Reith.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Furios Morega di Plagia
File submission
Fuios_TEB_Fiction_Week_1.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Battlelord Ra'gnar
Submission
Battlelord Ra'gnar opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Obsidian
File submission
Obsidians_R_R.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Azmodius Equesinfernum
File submission
The_Bromance_is_Strong_in_This_One.pages
Textual submission

The Bromance is Strong in This One
Prompt A
 
After having spent months in The Circle, orbiting Aliso, Azmodius was somewhat relieved to be called back to the planet’s surface. As he stepped off the shuttle with his top 2 trainees, Mears and Obsidian, the taskmaster felt a mixture of emotions. The last time he was in Aliso City, it had just been rediscovered and nature had taken over, creating a quiet and peaceful environment. At the same time, he couldn’t help but feel impressed with the progress in just a few months.

“Alright guys, go ahead and check out your rooms at The Pinnacle. After that you’re free to do as you please. If you need anything come find me”, he ordered.

“Where will…” Mears began before he was interrupted by Obsidian, “The cantina, where else?”

As the two made their way to The Pinnacle as instructed, Azmodius turned in the direction of the market sector and proceeded to the cantina at the far end. The city was now full of life. The warrior could barely hear his own thoughts over the bartering of the shopkeepers and their rehearsed sales pitches.

“Get out! Go you mangy mutt! You’re scaring away my customers!” a nearby food cart merchant barked at a mid-sized stray dog that had been begging for some scraps. The dog bowed his head as the merchant kicked it away.

“Stop!” Azmodius boomed as he approached the angry merchant.

“You too, peasant. No money, get out and take that beast with you before I call the security forces!” the merchant yelled, noting the exposing Dathomiri robes and ragged binding across the eyes of the Warrior.

“”Oh really?” he mused as he approached the canine, ignoring the ranting of the shopkeeper. The dog backed from Azmodius, sensing the Taskmaster’s powerful aura. Azmodius crouched and communicated his intentions to calm the beast before approaching it and placing his hands on its side. “you should be ok, buddy”, he spoke softly. The shopkeeper grew enraged at being ignored and swung a metal pipe at the Warrior from behind. Azmodius effortlessly caught it in one hand, without moving any other part of his body. As he turned to stand and face the shopkeeper, the realization set in that this was no peasant.

“wh-wh-who a-are y-y-you?!” the terrified merchant stuttered as the warrior lifted him from the ground by the front of his shirt and brought him face to face.

“An Omen”, the Warrior spoke as he flung the merchant at his cart, smashing it in the process. “If I so much as hear of you mistreating the citizens of Aliso City”, Azmodus paused, turning his head to the dog, “I will return and you will face the full extent of my wrath.”

Leaving the merchant and dog behind, the taskmaster continued on his way to the cantina. Outside, he felt a familiar presence.

“Should have known he'd be here.” he thought to himself as he stepped inside and sat at the bar beside his former master, Furios.

“R&R assignment? Wonder what inspired that”, the Epicanthix joked as he poured a shot of vodka in a second glass.

“You knew I was here”, Azmodius spoke, placing the empty glass down on the counter.

“From the moment your shuttle landed”, his master responded, the edges of his mouth curling slightly.

The two Obelisk shared drinks and reminisced for about an hour before they felt the ground shake from what could only be explosions in the distance. As the two made their way towards the site as fast as they could, another charge went off nearby, burying them in the rubble.

a few moments passed, and Azmodius awoke to a slobbering tongue on his face.

“We came as soon as we could.” Mears began, “We were ordered to meet with you before pushing back the droids.”

“We wouldn't have found you if it wasn't for this dog barking at the pile of rubble you were under”, Obsidian continued, “seems you've made a friend in the hours since our arrival.”

“Az, take these two through the market sector and push from the south, Ill engage directly and hold them there until you arrive”, Furios ordered before taking off an incredible speed towards the location of the bombing.

“You heard him, looks like this R&R has turned into live combat training”, the Warrior mused, giddy with excitement.

The three made their way through the market sector as quickly as they could, ordering any remaining civilians to safety. As they approached the rendezvous point, they could see the towering epicanthix carving a clear path through the swarm of droids while Ascendant Forces picked off the remainders with heavy blaster fire.

“hang back and assist the troops, I want you both to take note of what you're about to see”, Azmodius spoke with a slight smile before rushing into the swarm.

“You ever think the taskmaster may be a bit overzealous?” Mears asked his fellow student. “All the time but, he does seem to know what he's doing. Furios was pretty intense as a master from what I hear”, Obsidian replied as the two made their way to the Ascendant troops.

Azmodius was thrilled. The months of statics in The Circle had made him anxious for a battle, even if they were B1 battle droids. Meeting up with his master, the two Obeslisk dispatched thousands of droids in moments. Their synchronicity, having developed over years of intense training and battles, proved far more than a match for the simple droids. When the fighting had quelled, the master and student turned towards each other and clasped their hands together, nodding to each other in respect and admiration of the other’s prowess.

Having witnessed the entire scene, Mears and Obsidian, exchanged looks of amazement and discomfort. “Those two sure have a strange relationship for Dark Jedi” Mears remarked.

“Most definitely”, Obsidian replied, “But you have to admit, that was quite an impressive display of carnage.”

Placement
No placement
Member
Kul'tak Drol
Textual submission

***Aliso***
***Plains Outside of Aliso City***

A cool afternoon breeze played with the loose edges of Kul’s cloak as he tried to place himself distant from his immediate surroundings. With legs crossed in traditional K’thri style, and eyes closed, he instead focused solely on the vibrant echoes of the Force as it embraced the plains around him. He was still close to the main city in case he was given a mission, but during his downtime often found himself enjoying the solitude with his faithful Massiffs. They were currently lounging about, but every so often would poke and prod at each other when bored. The bare ecology of Aliso left much to be desired in terms of hunting. Regardless, Kul still found this time to bond with his pets to be amicable and good reinforcement for his training.

Trying to ignore the incessant snapping of fabric being pulled too and fro, Kul finally sighed and opened his eyes. His pets noticed the agitation riding at the edge of his thoughts and glanced over. He waved a reassuring hand.

*Assurance. Follow. We return.*

Kul rose to his feet and threw his hood back over his horns. He noticed one of his Massiffs perk up with his short ears prickling and turn towards Aliso City. Thinking they were excited to return to the hustle and bustle of Willing at work, the Zabrak chuckled inwardly.

*Patience. We return now.*

Shar’kala, the female, came up to him and nudged at his legs.

*Correction. Warning. Scent of smoke. Direction of masters’ caves.*

The Massiffs had never really understood the term “building,” instead labeling them all as caves. They also had no terms for the many races of the galaxy, instead referring to them as masters, while emphasizing his own role as Master through their mental speech patterns. Their nned to simplify most things made more complex statements difficult, but emotions worked just as well, most times.

Kul shifted his gaze to Aliso City, and saw that his pet was indeed correct. The city was burning. Or at least part of it. He thought he could hear the sound of rumbling coming from that direction, as well. He was not sure exactly what the cause was, but the scale seemed to indicate an attack of sometime. He quickly snatched up his gear he’d set to the side and began running towards his waiting Delta-class T-3c shuttle.

“Shar’kala, Shor’kir, follow.”

Within the folds of his paraphernalia, a sharp beeping was emanating with the vigor, and annoying habit, of a klaxon. Still moving, Kul struggled with the mess of items until he pulled out his comlink and activated it.

“Drol here.”

“Ah, lord Drol. We’ve been trying to reach you. The Dread Lord has called for full mobilization of Plagueis’ forces. Aliso City is under attack from a droid army of unknown origin.”

“Lieutenant Grifen? I am pleased to see the attack has not claimed you. Tell HQ I’m on my way.”

“Thank you milord. I was hoping to find you alive and well. Actually, we have a set of coordinates ready for you. Apparently, the Quaestor of Ajunta Pall is in need of assistance.”

Kul frowned.

“Uscot? Copy that, send me the coords and I’ll head over.”

“Affirmative, Commander. Good luck.”

As Kul arrived at his shuttle, he huffed loudly.

“This battle won’t be decided by luck.”

***Aliso***
***Aliso City***

Another droid fell its chest sizzling as it melted away. Laren quickly shifted his aim, never slowing, in order to maximize his firing rate. His mind clocked slightly on overdrive with the aid of adrenaline, his eyes swiftly determined friend or foe and he pulled the trigger accordingly. What had once been a strong front holding the line had deteriorated into madness as droids emerged from places behind the defensive lines. His casualties had shot up since then, with only a handful of squads operating at effective levels. What wounded they could grab they had stashed within a small complex near one of the intersections of the street, along with a multitude of civilians. He’d received word that reinforcements were inbound, but with the seemingly never-ending tide of droids threatening to wash them all away, he wasn’t sure it would matter.

Another eruption pelted his group with shrapnel and dust, forcing them down. One of the buildings down the street suddenly began to creak. A rumbling shook the ground, and finally the building gave way and tumbled down. The screams of the civilians left inside pierced the air even as the raucous scene threatened to deafen them all. Laren turned away, remembering his focus was on the task at hand. He threw a few rounds of hot plasma in the general direction of the droids, but the thick dust had yet to settle and his vision was too impaired to pick a specific target.

*How had it come to this? Surprised by an army of relics from a time long past. How did they slip past our sensors and defenses?*

He was pulled out of his reverie when a hand clasped itself on his shoulder. He turned to find a soldier standing at attention, having removed his hand and snapped it to salute.

“Quaestor, we have a problem!”

The soldier was clearly trying not to panic, but having a hard time fighting the emotion. The mercenary waved the man down behind cover.

“Down man, do you want to die?! Now spit it out, what’s the problem?”

The soldier never had time to respond as a spray of bolts peppered the area from the direction the building had gone down. One of the bolts struck his back and the soldier fell dead. A few of the more seasoned soldiers saw the new threat and began to engage. Laren’s eyes grew wide as he realized the new threat was another wave of droids came clambering out from below the building’s foundation. So that was it! They were using tunnels under the city. But droids did not dig of their own accord, so who commanded them to? Those were thoughts better left to a more luxurious moment, however. Laren quickly sprinted, bent over to lessen the chance of the crossfire clipping him, and joined the new defense. He quickly gazed over their makeshift barrier of debris and enemy corpses (and some allied here and there, gazing pleadingly for vengeance with their open-eyed stares) and counted as many as he could in a short span.

*One...five...yep. There’s a kriffton.*

With the lines buckling on all sides, Laren needed to make a decision: hold until help arrived, or try and move to a more established defense. He could not be certain there was a more established defense, though. The assault had surprised the entire Plagueis military. What hope was left was dwindling with the defender’s numbers.

The dull hum of a shuttle’s boosters roared overhead. Laren looked up to see a shadow cross over the thinning dust cloud. What appeared to be a black shuttle opened its rear hatch, and a squad of jump troopers began to rocket down, raining blaster fire into the droids’ advancing lines. The shuttle itself began to rotate and its laser cannons opened fire, obliterating the frontline of droids advancing from the collapsed building. It passed over Laren’s position while continuously pelting what droids it could find. It began to lower and on the ramp Laren could make out a familiar form. Kul dropped from the hatch and landed on bent knees. He surveyed the wreckage around him while pulling his lightsaber from its clip and approaching the Quaestor.

“Fine mess, you’ve made here, Uscot.”

“When they told me they were sending reinforcements, I didn’t think they meant trash cleanup. Best get to work then.”

Kul huffed and activated his saber. Without waiting for Laren he leaped over the barricade and waded into the debris, slicing anything metallic that came near him. The shuttle passed over again, and this time two medium sized furballs came charging out quickly trying to catch up with their Master. They hit the ground rolling, but fixed themselves and dove for the combat. Using their weight they could crash into the droids’ knee joints and topple them over, then remove their weapons by snatching them with jaws. The squad of troopers that arrived with Kul formed up and finished off ones that had fallen or picked off any from their shuffling formation. Laren gave out orders to his remaining squads, and they reformed on the flanks to strengthen the line. Not as many droids were left in the open street, so the original attackers must have broken off from a different emergence tunnel and made their way here originally. Their main focus would be to keep that new tunnel contained.

Sweeping his saber side to side, Kul deflected bolts with his saber as he advanced. The droids had realized their predicament now, and so they had begun to retreat slightly to get behind cover. Behind their lines, Kul noticed a small insect-like creature hopping about. As his men pushed forward, it suddenly dived in the tunnel. It flapped some kind of translucent wings and had a bulbous head that stuck out weightily. Kul thought he knew the creature, but it would have been impossible for one to be here on Aliso of all places. Or was it? The Confederacy of Independent Systems had utilized this planet for some time. It wasn’t too far of a stretch to imagine they had brought others. But for what purpose?

“Uscot. Did you see that?”

“See what, Drol? The teeming scores of droids I’ve been dealing with for the past hour or so?”

“No...it was...A Geonosian, I think.”

Laren paused at that, a perplexed look shadowing his face.

“A Geonosian? They’re extinct aren’t they? Killed off by the Empire.”

Kul pointed his left hand towards the tunnel entrance.

“Apparently not all of them. They must be the one’s controlling the droids. I just don’t know why.”

Laren blasted a droid off to the side as it emerged from a building. Then tossed a thermal detonator in when a few more popped their heads out. Their group pushed on and eventually reached the tunnel itself. Kul and Laren both peered into the gaping hole before glancing at one another. Laren shook his head as a wide grin began to spread across Kul’s face.

“Ohhhh no. I don’t need mind reading powers to know what you’re thinking, Drol. I am not going down there until we have a full grasp of the situation. We need to report to HQ and let them know what we’ve found, there are civilians and wounded left to escort…”

“Like that’s stopped you before, Uscot. Your caring attitude isn’t exactly one of your strong points. Besides, I didn’t give you a choice in the matter really.”

With that Kul pushed the Pantoran into the hole. As a string of life-threatening curses followed him down, Kul and his Massiffs joined him.

Placement
No placement
Member
Dr. Giyana Jurro
Submission
Dr. Giyana Jurro opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement