Competition: [Below Zero] Week 3 - Haiku

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[Below Zero] Week 3 - Haiku

The end has come, you have survived though perhaps only on the outside. For this competition, i wish you to create a Haiku.

Actual nature of the Haiku and the competition details will be presented in the subscriber's box.

Winner will be the one who creates the best Haiku and adheres to the correct format. This competition will be marked using the Voice Fiction Rubric.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Below Zero
Organized by
Duke Kojiro Keibatsu Sadow, Marcus Kiriyu
Running time
2017-08-20 until 2017-08-26 (7 days)
Target Unit
Clan Naga Sadow
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Third Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
4 subscribers, of which 4 have participated.
Results
1st place
Aul Celsus
Member
Aul Celsus
Textual submission

Cold, but I'm alive
Chilled, ferocity rising
Thawed, with new meaning

Placement
1st place
2nd place
Benn Nevis
Member
Benn Nevis
Textual submission

I wanted to fight
I was sitting on my ass
Now it has frostbite

Placement
2nd place
Member
Master Bentre Stahoes
Textual submission

quiet anger burns
for not all is well resolved
he has greater plans

Placement
3rd place
Member
Tribune Kanal O'neill
Textual submission

strong powerful warm
cold strained beat up feeling down
tired aching breathe

Placement
4th place