Competition: [Imperium] Build a Bad Guy #1

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[Imperium] Build a Bad Guy #1
"Everyone is the good guy in their own story."
Context:

As we move into more emphasis on member engagement and inclusiveness, one of our focuses will be on the direct means and methods of this initiative. With this in mind, the Imperium Summit would like to invite the membership to submit their own concept and design for a future enemy of our House. Of important notice; this is a three-part test, which if successful - will become a standard event for Imperium as we develop our story and lore together as a team after the Great Jedi War.

Competition Details:

Below in the subscriber details of this competition, a prompt is provided that gives a brief outline of a type of enemy the summit is looking to use. This future enemy is to be featured in an upcoming House Fiction Update and has the potential to be used for further storylines of the house or subunits. What we are looking for: is for participants to create a character that follows the outline that is given. We are looking for such things as:

  • Name
  • Physical Desciption
  • Potential Aspects
  • Summary of Skills/Force Powers
  • Their Backstory
Grading:

Grading will be based upon the Voice's Fiction Rubric, with the focus being upon the most interesting character backstory.

Bad Guy Outline:

This will be a short-lived character, lasting one Fiction Update, a competition as the main nemesis, and a concluding fiction. However, this character will be a recognized lore entry, tying into the conclusion of Battleteam Shadow Guard. Must be mid level equite, however what Path/Alignment you chose for the character does not matter. Will be responsible for Shadow Guard's destruction, so must have the means/resources/connections available to do so. Gender is up to you. At the time of this NPC's entry into House Lore, this individual will be attached to the Brotherhood fleet that attacked our own planet; how they found themselves in that situation will be up to you.

Competition Information
Organized by
Watchman Lontra Boglach
Running time
2017-09-22 until 2017-10-13 (22 days)
Target Unit
House Imperium
Competition Type
Other
Awards
Fourth Level Crescents
Participants
6 subscribers, of which 2 have participated.
Results
Member
Kylex Sanguris
Textual submission

Name: Marlique Anataris
Desc: Human male, 6'6", Dark long glossy hair that reaches down to his shoulders, piercing blue eyes. Marlique has very pale skin, and his face bones are very prominent, making many to mistake him as a ghost. His tall and slender figure is misleading as to his physical prowess, as many of his bones can be seen through his skin, making him appear malnourished.
Aspects: Gen1: Anything You Can Do, I Can Do Better
Gen2: Due Diligence
Personal1: Lone Wolf
Personal2: The Finer Things In Life
Combat1: Puppeteer
Combat2: Dark Arts: Something about using force concealment and cloak.
Skills and so on: Rank EQ3
+4: Pmartialarts, Athletics, intelect
+3: Intimidation, Resolve, Smartialarts
+2: Perception, psaberform, endurance
+1: Might, Lore, Empathy, Linguistics
Force:
+4: Concealment, Force Cloak, Blackness
+3: Terror, Force Lightning, Amplification
+2: Precog, Sense, TK
+1: Blinding, self control, farsight, healing
Backstory: eh

Placement
No placement
Member
Alara Deathbane
Textual submission

Alaric Nordstrom
Nordic type viking human thing.
Dovahkiin

... Backstory: Dovahkiin gone bad.

Placement
No placement