Competition: [GJW XII Phase II] Miscellaneous - We Regret to Inform You

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[GJW XII Phase II] Miscellaneous - We Regret to Inform You

This competition is in the Phase II Miscellaneous Bin. Participating in a competition in this bin for the first time awards 2 points from participation to your unit. [GJW XII Phase II] Miscellaneous - Blast from the Past, and [GJW XII Phase II] Miscellaneous - Puzzle: GJW Edition 2 - Electric Boogaloo are also in this bin.

Participating in at least one competition in each Phase II bin will earn a member 2 additional participation points . See the parent competition for detailed rules.

This competition is worth a relatively low proportion of placement points for Phase II. Cumulatively, the placements in this competition are worth 7% of placement points in Phase II.

The Master At Arms serves as the Grand Master’s top adjutant as the head of administrative bureaucracy, in addition to his duties to award members with rank promotions and medals of all types, he also is in charge of issuing letters to the families of deceased members and are responsible for handling death, burial, and the last will and testaments of those that serve the Brotherhood.

Specifics

You are to write a letter from the Master at Arms' Office to the family of a deceased member of the Brotherhood or member of the Iron Legion. In your entry, please make sure to include:

  • The mechanism (cause) of death,
  • The accommodates, triumphs and awards of the Brotherhood/Iron Legion member.

If you are going to use a character that is not yours (and not an NPC), please be sure to get permission prior to doing so.

Platform

Microsoft Word is preferred, but any readable file format is acceptable. Google Drive (or other links) are not acceptable.

Minimum word count: 250 words

Maximum word count: 500 words

Details

You will be judged on originality, creativity, adherence to Star Wars and Brotherhood canon.

Entries may be of a serious or satirical nature.

This competition does not award Clusters of Ice.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Great Jedi War XII
Organized by
Howlader Taldrya
Running time
2017-11-04 until 2017-11-20 (17 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Other
Awards
Novae
Participants
53 subscribers, of which 39 have participated.
Results
1st place
Lord Halcyon
2nd place
Nikora Rhan
Member
Nikora Rhan
File submission
Designated_citizen_of_the_Brotherhood.docx
Textual submission

Apologies, there are words beneath the censor bars if you wish to see what was hidden from the recipient.

Placement
2nd place
4th place
Mauro Wynter
Member
Mauro Wynter
File submission
Regret_to_Inform_You.docx
Placement
4th place
Member
Master Selika Roh di Plagia
File submission
We_Regret_to_Inform_You.pdf
Placement
5th place
Member
Lord Muz Ashen Keibatsu
File submission
condolenceletter.png
Textual submission

Since the graphic is in Aurekbesh (realism!), here is the translated text:

General Headquarters
Collective Command
Office of the Lord Superior

Dear Sir and Madam,

I have been sadly alerted by the Liberation front of the untimely passing of your son, Byak Neelo on the field of battle on Nancora. I knew your son well, and am humbled by his sacrifice. Perhaps some measure of comfort may come from the knowing that he died in the service of a cause he deeply felt, and in the promise of a peaceful galaxy.

I truly believe that his devotion, to the exclusivity of even his own life, will precipitate the dawn of that glorious future that we have all yearned for, free from the yoke of oppressive masters and hypocritical monastic orders. I truly hope that I stand as strong as Byak did when and if my time also comes.

I understand the sense of loss that you must feel, the weakness of spirit, the desperation that is taking root in your heart. I also know that any of my words will not give you solace or attempt to distract you from that pain. Yet still, I reach out to you and offer my deepest felt condolences and the gratitude of our Collective. I hope that in time your anguish will subside, leaving but the fond memories of the loved, as well as the solemn pride that is yours for having laid such a heavy sacrifice on the promise of a brighter future for us all.

Truly,

(signed) Rath Oligard

War Department
Armed Forces of the Iron Throne
Desk of the Master At Arms

Mrs. Suutla'baaki,

Vaxera'baaki died in combat yesterday. His effects and back pay can be collected at the Iron Legion Headquarters in Eos city for the next three weeks. Please refer to serial number 876158793922.

Cordially,
Howlader

Placement
6th place
Member
Master Zsarion Bloodfyre
File submission
Beef756.docx
Placement
7th place
8th place
Kaz Raith
Member
Kaz Raith
Submission
Kaz Raith opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
8th place
9th place
Rian Taldrya
Member
General Kenath Zoron Ad Vizsla
File submission
Regret-Zoron.docx
Placement
10th place
Member
Aul Celsus
File submission
celsus-condolence.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Junazee
File submission
We_Regret_to_inform_you..._(1).pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Zeline Nemesis
Textual submission

Dear Georgia and Isabelle,
I would ask you to stay strong because i am in the most unpleasant place to announce to you the loss of your lovely Zeline Nemesis.No words in this version of reality can describe your pain,but from the bottom of my heart i am deeply sorry for your loss.I want you to remain as strong as you can to give you more details about your beloved one.Zeline died during a battle with a dark Jedi because of her wounds.She fought with tremendous passion because this is what great Jedis do in order to protect their beloved ones and their partners.Her last will before she closed her eyes was to say to you girls that the way she loved you no other creature in this world can do it and that in every version of reality she would find you and she would choose you.The brotherhood will take care of her burial and arrange everything that has to do with it because of her work all the time that she was a devoted member.We lost too an exceptional member,a real person who loved everybody, a unique person who was filled with joy and tremendous courage and hope for life.All she wanted was to help others and vanish evil Jedis from this world.Within the walls of the heart her memory will never die.Hold into the memories of the good times,laugh but remember do not be sad.She made the ultimate sacrifice.So i truly hope you to feel compasion and warmth from a grateful Brotherhood.At the end i would like to mention her triumphs and awards.Acolyte Zeline Nemesis had earned 7 clusters of Fire and 11 Trophies
I am sincerely sorry for your loss
Master of Arms

Placement
No placement
Member
Tribune Kanal O'neill
File submission
we_regret.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Angel Snow
Submission
Angel Snow opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Tasha'Vel Versea
File submission
We_Regret_to_Inform_You.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Colonel Len Iode
Submission
Colonel Len Iode opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
File submission
DeathLetter_GJW.pdf
Textual submission

Image Credit: Used Howie's warbanner for the letter stamp

Placement
No placement
Member
Master Bentre Stahoes
File submission
GJW_XII_We_Regret_to_Inform_You_14185.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
File submission
GJW_regrettoinformyou.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Captain Aryn "Jade" Erinos-Magnuri
Submission
Captain Aryn "Jade" Erinos-Magnuri opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Aedile Tali Sroka
File submission
Casualty_Report_NC_A_QD_397c_bis.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
General Kell Palpatine Dante
File submission
Army_of_the_Iron_Throne.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Xantros
File submission
Augur_Xantros__11518__We_regret_to_inform_you.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Darth Renatus
Submission
Darth Renatus opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Vosiri Lightscrest
File submission
Vosiri_4993.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Braecen Kaeth
File submission
GJW12.Phase2Misc.WeRegret.Brae4520.docx
Textual submission

NPC Captain Varan Sepsom, Commanding Officer of Alpha Company 3rd/502nd

https://wiki.darkjedibrotherhood.com/view/3rd_Battalion,_502nd_Infantry#Alpha_Company

Placement
No placement
Member
Keirdagh Taldrya Cantor
Submission
Keirdagh Taldrya Cantor opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
General Daniel Stephens
File submission
We_regret_to_inform_you.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Raiheaux
File submission
GJW_-_Regret_to_Inform.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Ric "Blade" Hunter
File submission
deepest_regrets_3160.doc
Textual submission

3160 entry

Placement
No placement
Member
TuQ’uan Varick di Plagia
File submission
We_Regret_To_Inform_You_TuQuan.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Grot
File submission
The_Santorini_Letter.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Ghost Rulvak Qurroc
File submission
We_Regret.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Qyreia Arronen
File submission
Dear_Keira_Viru__QA14369.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Alara Deathbane
File submission
We_Regret_to_Inform_You__(1).pdf
Textual submission

I was inspired by this particular comic:
![Imgur](http://i.imgur.com/Hx1e9ko.jpg)

I do not take credit for the art of this comic other than adding the nose, the black eyes, and the ears.

Placement
No placement
Member
Advisor Reiden Palpatine Karr
File submission
GJW_XII_Regret_to_Inform_You_(10106).pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Edgar Drachen
File submission
GJW_12_Death_Letter.pdf
Placement
No placement