Competition: [VoD Week 1] Poetry

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[VoD Week 1] Poetry

Write a four-line rhyming poem detailing your character’s thoughts about the vacation spot Furios chose. You can use any rhyme scheme of your choice. Grading will be based on creativity and quality with some emphasis on accuracy to your character’s personality.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
[PLA] Vacation on Dagobah
Organized by
Warlord Furios Morega di Plagia
Running time
2018-01-07 until 2018-01-14 (8 days)
Target Unit
Clan Plagueis
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Fourth Level Crescents
Participants
21 subscribers, of which 21 have participated.
Results
Member
General Ronovi Tavisaen
Textual submission

That swampy bayou's our dream destination?
I'd rather stay on Aliso than go on this vacation.
But I suppose if I must, then Whyren's I trust
to numb me better than any pain medication.

Placement
1st place
2nd place
Misium
Member
Misium
Textual submission

Hardly a vacation, trudging around in the muck.
You have to watch where you step, to avoid getting stuck.
But Misium's lost in thought on this murky little romp.
He wonders, "how many bodies would fill the whole swamp?"

Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Creon Neverse
Member
Creon Neverse
Textual submission

Bugs and muck are everywhere,
A horrid smell is in the air,
No signs of cities anywhere,
Please get me out of this nightmare.

Placement
3rd place
Member
A deleted dossier
Textual submission

The blasted Quaestor Furios
Made me so damn curious
But now I find we're in a bog
Everything covered in bloody fog.

Placement
No placement
Member
Lord Dacien Victae
Textual submission

A fetid bog overrun by strangling life
Twisting vines and swamp creatures, but Dark Jedi smell worst
A mad plan bringing Plagueis strife
Let's pack up and head back to space, Furios' name be cursed!

Placement
No placement
Member
Malice
Textual submission

We like this marchy place
All wet and full of foam.
There's lots of things to chase!
It feels a lot like home.

Placement
No placement
Member
Mandalorian Dral Falgorth
Textual submission

Swamp and sticks,
Still better than my home,
But the odor just simply stinks,
Wonder if there is a catacomb,

Placement
No placement
Member
Grand Inquisitor Arden Karn di Plagia
Textual submission

I'm going punch Furios in the jaw
Because he drug us out here to Dagobah
Had he gotten this thing right
I would be tanning in Canto Bight.

Placement
No placement
Member
Kul'tak Drol
Textual submission

Furios, oh Furios, wherefore art thou mind?
To bring us stamping through the mire and slime?
The saving grace that with the creatures I will be,
And hopefully lasting it out without a tragedy.

Placement
No placement
Member
Azmodius Equesinfernum
Textual submission

A planet untouched by technology,
Breeding rich biology (ecology).
From north to south and west to east,
I hear the voice of every beast

Placement
No placement
Member
Vivackus Kavon di Plagia
Textual submission

There once was a clan named Plagueis
In everything they always were serious.
Then just one day, with the Consul away,
They went on vacation planned by Furio.

Placement
No placement
Member
Doku Rivendare
Textual submission

Such an interesting place they’ve chosen.
Better then always feeling frozen.
Might actually enjoy my time.
Would be better if everything didn’t taste like slime.

Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Tracinya Beviin Entar
Textual submission

The Mandalorian sighed,
bogged down in the swamp.
Flicking leeches to the sky,
a silent dream of Coruscant.

Placement
No placement
Member
Silent
File submission
vacation.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Envoy Taranae Rhode
Textual submission

The rain, the bog, the steaming air,
I really feel it wasn't fair,
To send us to this sponge of a place.
It's not a vacation it's a karking disgrace!

Placement
No placement
Member
Iios Singuard
Textual submission

Through the murk I will tromp,
the time is short, I must move faster;
My target, here, in this swamp,
will soon have a taste from my blaster.

Placement
No placement
Member
Dralin Fortea
Textual submission

You want a four-line rhyming poem? Enjoy an englyn cyrch!

Dralin hates dirt and grime
Native to Dagobah's clime.
So to deal with the trouble
He'll drink double next tea time.

Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Tahiri Thorn Morte Tarentae
Textual submission

Used to being in odd places,
However this one is odder still.
New place to explore and have fun,
Though hopefully not too much trouble.

Placement
No placement
Member
Marcus Armani
Submission
Marcus Armani opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Battlelord Ra'gnar
Submission
Battlelord Ra'gnar opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Dr. Giyana Jurro
Submission
Dr. Giyana Jurro opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
TuQ’uan Varick di Plagia
Textual submission

The air is humid
And oxygen rich
From trees deep rooted
I should just ditch

Placement
No placement