Competition: The Revenge of the Haiku - Dark Jedi Brotherhood

Competition: The Revenge of the Haiku

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The Revenge of the Haiku

Haiku: "a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five, traditionally evoking images of the natural world"

Write a Movie review in Haiku form about how "The Revenge of the Sith" made you feel when you watched it.

Text box submissions only.
Entries will be graded according to this rubric: 50% creativity, 25% poetic structure, 25% spelling and grammar.

Competition Information

Parent Competition: Haiku Movie Reviews
Organized by: Edgar Drachen
Running time: 2018-02-01 until 2018-02-08 (8 days)
Target Unit: Entire DJB
Competition Type: Poetry
Awards: Second Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants: 13 subscribers, of which 10 have participated.

Results

1st place

Member: Dr. Rhylance
Textual submission: Skywalker's Demise
Republic now Empire
Darth Vader Arise!
Placement: 1st place

2nd place

Adept Tahiri Thorn Morte Tarentae

Member: Adept Tahiri Thorn Morte Tarentae
Textual submission: Light is fading fast,
The Dark side getting stronger,
The younglings must die.
Placement: 2nd place

3rd place

Master Zsarion Bloodfyre

Member: Master Zsarion Bloodfyre
Textual submission: Lightsaber battles.
Vader is born from lava.
My heart is aflame.
Placement: 3rd place

Member: Grot
Textual submission: Whirlwind of fierce action.
Stale and hollow emotion.
It was a good trick.
Placement: No placement

Member: Lord Halcyon
Textual submission: At least it ended
And we can forget it all.
Death by sadness? Ugh!
Placement: No placement

Member: Nikora Rhan
Submission: Nikora Rhan opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement: No placement

Aurora "Aura" Ta'var

Member: Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
Textual submission: ooo saber fight time
Anakin you're my hero
scratch that, maybe not
Placement: No placement

Member: Lucine Vasano
Textual submission: Whiny Anakin,
Who fell for plot purposes,
Grated on my nerves.
Placement: No placement

Master Bentre Stahoes

Member: Master Bentre Stahoes
Textual submission: the story is told
how Vader became a Sith
bit of a let down
Placement: No placement

General Ronovi Tavisaen

Member: General Ronovi Tavisaen
Textual submission: Seriously, the
reason Ani went dark was
his wife? That's so lame.
Placement: No placement