Competition: The Return of the Haiku - Dark Jedi Brotherhood

Competition: The Return of the Haiku

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The Return of the Haiku

Haiku: "a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five, traditionally evoking images of the natural world"

Write a Movie review in Haiku form about how "The Return of the Jedi" made you feel when you watched it.

Text box submissions only.
Entries will be graded according to this rubric: 50% creativity, 25% poetic structure, 25% spelling and grammar.

Competition Information

Parent Competition: Haiku Movie Reviews
Organized by: Edgar Drachen
Running time: 2018-02-22 until 2018-03-01 (8 days)
Target Unit: Entire DJB
Competition Type: Poetry
Awards: Second Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants: 11 subscribers, of which 9 have participated.

Results

1st place

Member: Bon Riverio
Textual submission: Full of awe and joy
The return of the Jedi
Finally light wins
Placement: 1st place

2nd place

Member: Lord Halcyon
Textual submission: I am a Jedi
Like my father before me
What a great movie!
Placement: 2nd place

3rd place

Adept Tahiri Thorn Morte Tarentae

Member: Adept Tahiri Thorn Morte Tarentae
Textual submission: Second Death star down
The Emperor is now dead
Don't speak of Ewoks
Placement: 3rd place

General Ronovi Tavisaen

Member: General Ronovi Tavisaen
Textual submission: Climactic ending:
"Tell your sister...you were right."
Ewoks were a thing.
Placement: No placement

Master Bentre Stahoes

Member: Master Bentre Stahoes
Textual submission: oh poor chewbacca
he did not get his medal
loved the movie though
Placement: No placement

Member: Nikora Rhan
Submission: Nikora Rhan opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement: No placement

Member: Edgar Drachen
Textual submission: Jabba gets choked out
Little Furry Ewok Dies
The Jedi are back
Placement: No placement

Member: Grot
Textual submission: Sitting at grandmas
V.C.R. whirring like mad
Can't hear it, so good
Placement: No placement

Member: Dr. Rhylance
Textual submission: Anakin redeemed.
The Force brought into balance!
That was it, Boba?
Placement: No placement