Competition: The Haiku Strikes Back - Dark Jedi Brotherhood

Competition: The Haiku Strikes Back

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The Haiku Strikes Back

Haiku: "a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five, traditionally evoking images of the natural world"

Write a Movie review in Haiku form about how "The Empire Strikes Back" made you feel when you watched it.

Text box submissions only.
Entries will be graded according to this rubric: 50% creativity, 25% poetic structure, 25% spelling and grammar.

Competition Information

Parent Competition: Haiku Movie Reviews
Organized by: Edgar Drachen
Running time: 2018-03-01 until 2018-03-08 (8 days)
Target Unit: Entire DJB
Competition Type: Poetry
Awards: Second Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants: 11 subscribers, of which 8 have participated.

Results

1st place

Member: Dr. Rhylance
Textual submission: No one could have guessed
Four words could change everything
"I am your father"
Placement: 1st place

2nd place

General Ronovi Tavisaen

Member: General Ronovi Tavisaen
Textual submission: Harsh and rasping breaths
beneath a dark mask of steel.
"Hey, Luke, I'm your dad."
Placement: 2nd place

3rd place

Member: Benn Nevis
Textual submission: Leah and Han smooch
Luke cries Nooo to dad Vader
Han in carbonite
Placement: 3rd place

Member: Grot
Textual submission: A harrowing adventure,
A stunning display.
Like a firework, forever
Placement: No placement

Adept Tahiri Thorn Morte Tarentae

Member: Adept Tahiri Thorn Morte Tarentae
Textual submission: Freezing cold world base,
Tauntaun warmth and Empire strike,
Do, there is no try.
Placement: No placement

Ernordeth Puer-Irae

Member: Ernordeth Puer-Irae
Textual submission: Die you rebel scum
Find the master who plays dumb
He's our only hope
Placement: No placement

Member: Nikora Rhan
Submission: Nikora Rhan opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement: No placement

Member: Lord Halcyon
Textual submission: I love you; I know
No. I am your Father; Noooooo
The perfect movie
Placement: No placement