Competition: A New Haiku - Dark Jedi Brotherhood

Competition: A New Haiku

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A New Haiku

Haiku: "a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five, traditionally evoking images of the natural world"

Write a Movie review in Haiku form about how "A New Hope" made you feel when you watched it.

Text box submissions only.
Entries will be graded according to this rubric: 50% creativity, 25% poetic structure, 25% spelling and grammar.

Competition Information

Parent Competition: Haiku Movie Reviews
Organized by: Edgar Drachen
Running time: 2018-03-08 until 2018-03-15 (8 days)
Target Unit: Entire DJB
Competition Type: Poetry
Awards: Second Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants: 12 subscribers, of which 8 have participated.

Results

1st place

Member: Lord Halcyon
Textual submission: It all began here
The light against the darkness
A Saga of Hope
Placement: 1st place

2nd place

Blade Mistress Shadow Nighthunter

Member: Blade Mistress Shadow Nighthunter
Textual submission: A new hope rises
New heroes bring a new age
Epic story starts
Placement: 2nd place

3rd place

Member: Lucine Vasano
Textual submission: An epic movie.
Imagination captured.
A new geek was born.
Placement: 3rd place

Member: Grot
Textual submission: Like a gentle summer wind,
Simply perfection.
Twin suns set in the desert.
Placement: No placement

General Ronovi Tavisaen

Member: General Ronovi Tavisaen
Textual submission: Hello, Skywalker
Welcome to your adventure
The saga begins
Placement: No placement

Member: Benn Nevis
Textual submission: Farm boy blows stuff up
Princess kisses her brother
Han shot Greedo first.
Placement: No placement

Member: Edgar Drachen
Textual submission: What is this all about
Laser swords and spaceships
That's not a space station
Placement: No placement

Master Bentre Stahoes

Member: Master Bentre Stahoes
Textual submission: wow just let me say
the death star run was awesome
childhood favorite
Placement: No placement