Competition: [MoA Week 1] Through the Eyes of an Alisoan (Poetry)

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[MoA Week 1] Through the Eyes of an Alisoan (Poetry)

Write a poem from the perspective of a non-Force sensitive on Aliso, documenting their observations of the planet and how it is affected by Plagueis proceedings. The narrator of the poem should be an entirely original character - not an already established NPC or member of the clan - and can either be a traveler to Aliso or a resident of the planet.

The poem should be at least 14 lines long and can be in any form (rhyming, free/blank verse), and it should contain highly descriptive language that amplifies the five senses: Sight, hearing, touch, taste, and smell. Try not to write a biography; instead, focus on the experiences that your narrator deals with during an average day on Aliso.

Grading will be based on creativity and quality, with an emphasis on accurately depicting Aliso’s landscape, climate, and culture based on DJBWiki articles and official Plagueis fiction.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Mysteries of Aliso
Organized by
General Ronovi Tavisaen, Grand Inquisitor Arden Karn di Plagia, TuQ’uan Varick di Plagia
Running time
2018-05-21 until 2018-05-27 (7 days)
Target Unit
Clan Plagueis
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Third Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
10 subscribers, of which 6 have participated.
Results
Member
Azmodius Equesinfernum
Submission
Azmodius Equesinfernum opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
1st place
Member
Warlord Furios Morega di Plagia
Textual submission

Spending a slow night at Hak's
Drinking near a bowl of snacks
Cooling off after a day at the yards
None here but me and two guys playing cards
My whiskey's half gone and the ice slowly melts
When two Force-users walk in, sabers on belts
You can often spot them by their way of dress
Showing up to get drunk almost daily no less
At times I envy their lives of great power
But alcohol's all their misdeeds won't sour
Though that's the cost for the stability we get
And safety from the next murderous threat
It reminds me my life's not a waste
But this beer has a metallic taste

Placement
2nd place
Member
Envoy Taranae Rhode
Textual submission

I happened upon a planet today,
a smaller one along my way.
From space it seemed so beautiful and green,
It hid the wonders of what was to be seen.

I guided my craft to the surface below,
and watched through my screen as the view began to grow,
of rolling grasses both tall and short,
and plains of a very interesting sort.

There were hills and valleys, the typical fare,
but certain things not of the world were there.
A tall shiny complex of towers and such,
Were a blot on the landscape, a more alien touch.

A bustling town I happened to find,
Aliso City which muddled the mind.
A sprawling place with fares from far and wide,
a frontier city, no doubt, and I headed inside.

Construction yards and docks gave a stench,
causing people at some times to retch,
bustling streets, the smell of the wares,
the scurrying creatures underfoot unawares.

I meandered out through the gates once again,
headed back to the places i'd already been,
and happened across more valleys and plains,
And looked for more things for my knowledgeable gains.

A monastery i saw in the distance too,
in a sheltered cove mainly hidden from view,
rock spires and structures so elegant and tall,
I knew that this could never be all.

The planet seemed marred with old structures and new.
It had temperate weather and oceans of blue,
But I realise now as I depart this place,
Aiiso is a marvel, an oasis in space.

Placement
3rd place
Member
Dr. Giyana Jurro
Submission
Dr. Giyana Jurro opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Marcus Armani
File submission
Home.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Silent
File submission
poem.docx
Placement
No placement