Competition: [INQ] Counterpoints: Standard Fiction

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[INQ] Counterpoints: Standard Fiction
The following competition follows the events of [The Collective] Chapter 1: Counterpoints update found here.

“...The Inquisitorius is more than just a task force. It is more than any one Inquisitor, more than any individual ideology or singular motive. Together, we form the first line of defense against enemies that threaten our very existence. Enemies that will shape and bend propaganda to tailor their own narrative, their own illusion. We are the blade that will strike back against the Collective, and we will support the Iron Forces by providing them the knowledge they need to defeat any that threaten the Brotherhood.” — Marick Tyris, Voice of the Brotherhood


It is said that knowledge is power. Your character has, in one way or another, seen or heard the Voice’s message broadcast across all Dark Brotherhood channels to the Iron Forces and the six Clans.

Prompt

Write a story depicting how your character reacts to this declaration of intent. Do they care? Do they feel motivated to fight back against the common threat that The Collective represents? Or do they care more about protecting their own and letting the Brotherhood deal with its problems on its own.

Rules

  • Entries must be a minimum of 500 words. Any entries that are under 500 words will be marked as Disqualified.
  • There is no maximum word cap.
  • Your story should be centered on your Main or Alternative character. Slotted NPCs, Wikipedia NPCs, or other characters that you create or invent to tell your story are not only allowed, but encouraged. However, your narrative should focus around either your Main or Alternative character.
  • A snapshot of your Main or Alternative character loadout must be selected and submitted with your entry.
  • Members are free to pursue or combine multiple objectives at once if they so choose.

Grading

Grading will be done utilizing the Fiction Rubric.

Note: All entries that qualify will earn Bonus Cluster’s of Ice.

Helpful Resources

Competition Information
Organized by
Lord Marick Tyris Arconae
Running time
2018-09-17 until 2018-10-02 (16 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
First Level Crescents and regular and bonus Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
28 subscribers, of which 12 have participated.
Results
1st place
Darth Renatus
Member
Darth Renatus
File submission
11708_-_Atra_Ventus_-_Counterpoints_-_Standard.pdf
Textual submission

Please find attached my submission for the competition. Thank you.

Placement
1st place
2nd place
Nikora Rhan
Member
Nikora Rhan
Submission
Nikora Rhan opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
2nd place
Member
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
File submission
INQ_Standard_Collective.pdf
Placement
3rd place
4th place
Adept Xantros
5th place
Kul'tak Drol
Member
Kul'tak Drol
Textual submission

Humming a macabre tune she picked up from some slimy back alley on Nar Shaddaa, the small girl Reeka played with her braided hair while her father watched the transmission playing the commlink connected to his Inquisitorius channel. The voice of Marick Tyris drew the child’s attention, but she waited while the holorecording played before inquiring about its message. The sound echoed throughout the empty hold of Kul’s vessel, a Delta-class T-3c shuttle.

“...We are the blade that will strike back against the Collective, and we will support the Iron Forces by providing them the knowledge they need to defeat any that threaten the Brotherhood.”

As the message faded out and Kul closed the connection he gave a sideways glance at the child before huffing to himself. He had adopted the girl some time ago, but only recently had brought her back out into the world to continue her training. The timing of this message was another reminder to the Zabrak that his loyalties did not extend to just the Brotherhood anymore. Of course, he had no intentions of betraying either the Brotherhood or his clan, Plagueis, but with Tahiri and Reeka he knew that his physical weaknesses amounted to nothing when compared to the fear of what might happen should the enemies of the Inquisitorius discover them.

Kul leaned down and raised a gauntleted hand, laying it gently upon Reeka’s head. He lifted it several times in a gentle patting motion.

“You can take care of yourself, though, can’t you, little Reek?”

The tiny human girl lifted her face so that his fingers covered her eyes and she giggled.

“Of course, Father. But are you going somewhere?”

Lifting her hands away from her hair, Reeka clasped them around Kul’s forearm and waited. Smiling to himself, Kul flexed his fingers and tightened his grip on her skull. He stood carefully with her dangling and swinging her legs while she giggled ecstatically. Kul wasn’t sure why she enjoyed this particular game so much, but she was the only being in the galaxy who could claim to have remained alive after being gripped in such a manner by him.

“We shall see, little Reek. Just as the blade must obey its master, so too must I answer the call if need be. For now we shall be patient and gather information. Such is the basis for all successful missions. Knowledge in itself is power to a degree.”

He wasn’t sure where she pulled it from, but Reeka now had her left hand out to the side swinging one of her beloved vibrodaggers. Kul had never been one very talented in the ability to sense a being’s strength or presence using the Force, but he clearly felt the cold bloodlust that emanated from his daughter now. A growing feeling told him that if he had chosen to look into her eyes, he would have seen the disturbing lingerings of her shadows.

“But Father...can’t we just kill them now? Wouldn’t that fix the problem?”

Kul shut his eyes and felt the suspiration leave his lips in a heavy gust.

“And do you even know exactly who we would need to kill, little Reek?”

Kul jolted as he felt cold durasteel slice into his arm. He knew it was an accident more than anything, that his daughter had moments of intensity where her very being seemed to be a dark cloud bearing down on him. However, it was neither that nor the hungry look in her eyes as she spun her dagger that gave him concern.

“Why Father...we can just kill them all.”

Placement
5th place
Member
Marcus Armani
File submission
Consequences.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
File submission
Karma.pdf
Textual submission

See attached PDF.

Placement
No placement
Member
Creon Neverse
File submission
Inquisitive_Inquiry.pdf
Textual submission

The narrative is congruent with Member #14877 (Lucine Vasano).

Lucine Snapshot: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/14877/snapshots/1063/2164

Placement
No placement
Member
General Stres'tron'garmis
File submission
Counterpoints_(1).pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Lucine Vasano
File submission
Counterpoints__Standard_fiction.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Aedile Tali Sroka
File submission
INQ__Standard_Fiction.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Mauro Wynter
File submission
War_Declared.pdf
Placement
No placement