Competition: A New Haiku

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A New Haiku

A Haiku is "a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five, traditionally evoking images of the natural world"

Write a Haiku advertising your Clan to a brand new member of the DJB or What makes your clan great.

Text box submissions only.
Entries that don't follow the 5-7-5 format will be DQ'ed
Entries will be graded according to this rubric: 50% creativity, 25% poetic structure, 25% spelling and grammar.

Competition Information

Organized by: Ghost Edgar Drachen
Running time: 2019-03-15 until 2019-03-24 (10 days)
Target Unit: Entire DJB
Competition Type: Poetry
Awards: Second Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants: 14 subscribers, of which 13 have participated.

Results

1st place

Tasha'Vel Versea

Member: Tasha'Vel Versea
Textual submission: If you like some fun
Come hang out with some cool folks
Naga Sadow, yeah!
Placement: 1st place

2nd place

Diyrian "Diy" Grivna

Member

Diyrian "Diy" Grivna

Textual submission

__Arcona__

Watchers, Defenders,
The shadow-bred protectors
Of morality?

Placement

2nd place

3rd place

Magik

Member: Magik
Submission: Magik opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement: 3rd place

Seer Xolarin

Member

Seer Xolarin

Textual submission

Naga Sadow will
Empower and enable
Masters of their fate.

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(if I can use multiple stanzas...)

Naga Sadow will
Empower and enable
Members to succeed

Fate will no longer
Dictate the lives of our clan
But will be controlled

Your adventure starts
With a simple answered call
To Sadow's true path

Placement

No placement

Bentre Stahoes

Member: Bentre Stahoes
Textual submission: oh Naga Sadow
you are such cool space wizards
legends and a Muz
Placement: No placement

Deacon Rale

Member: Deacon Rale
Textual submission: Vanity is unknown
Galaxy of Tradition
Only the Worthy
Placement: No placement

Kerlos Yeff Surik

Member: Kerlos Yeff Surik
Submission: Kerlos Yeff Surik opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement: No placement

Hilgrif

Member: Hilgrif
Textual submission: all that are the new
welcome to Naga Sadow
Home of the Sadows
Placement: No placement

Trideo Arkson

Member: Trideo Arkson
Textual submission: Friends and Clan Unite
To Share in fun and revels
A light in the Dark
Placement: No placement

Aurora "Aura" Ta'var

Member: Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
Submission: Aurora "Aura" Ta'var opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement: No placement

Ghost Edgar Drachen

Member: Ghost Edgar Drachen
Textual submission: Odan-Urr has Hoth
The Best House of the D,B.
Odan-Urr has Hoth
Placement: No placement

Dr. Ben

Member: Dr. Ben
Textual submission: Shadow Familia
With us, Invicta, we stand
First clan once again!
Placement: No placement

Lord Idris Adenn

Member: Lord Idris Adenn
Textual submission: The Empire rules all,
Foundation is Galactic,
Palpatine is bae.
Placement: No placement