Competition: Tenixir Prison Break: NPC Creation

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Tenixir Prison Break: NPC Creation

Create a Prisoner

Tasked with venturing to the planet of Tenixir, you find yourself interacting with many of the prisoner population contained within the Principate’s supermax prison complex. This is your opportunity to help illustrate some of the criminal life contained there. You have been tasked with creating a dossier on an NPC Prisoner of your choice. There is a possibility that your NPC can become part of the lore and be featured in the Brotherhood’s storyline.

Using the provided NPC Template or your own preferred application of choice (Microsoft Word, Apple Pages, etc.) create an NPC Character Sheet.

Example: Kerwin Drake

Completed characters will feature up to six (6) unique traits (Aspects) and should detail their specializations (Discipline, Skills, Feats) and any other backstory or history you feel like adding.

Resources

C-D4WG - Character Sheet Reference — Allows you to view all the information on Aspects, Skills, Feats, and more.
You can use any of the pre-written Aspects here if you’re not comfortable creating Custom ones.
Character Sheet Sandbox - Enables you to experiment with builds/skills. You can take a screenshot and attach the build, or transcribe for your template submission. You can find it on your admin page at the bottom of the "Character Sheet Administration" page.

Rules

Created NPCs can be Force or Non-Force Users.
Created NPCs can be any rank between Journeyman 1 and Elder 1.
Created NPCs should include as much detail as possible while following and adhering to the Character Sheet Guide and Approval Guidelines.
Participants can optionally link an original or reference character image, just credit your source when doing so. Avatar creation tools like this one can be helpful.
Notes should include the prisoner's crime(s) and which faction (Principate, Brotherhood) they were a prisoner from.

How to Submit

Participants will submit entries in .pdf, .doc, or .txt format.
If using the Google Docs template: “File” → “Download as” → “PDF Document (.pdf).”

Alternatively, members can submit a plain text submission to the competition by copy/pasting the following template:

*Name:
*Age:
*Height:
*Weight:
*Species:
*Path/Order/Rank:
*NFU Discipline:
*Character Traits (Aspects):
*Skills:
*Feats:
*Languages:
*Lore:
*Notes/Extra:

You are responsible for checking your own formatting, this is just a starting point.

Grading

Entries will be graded on completion, syntax, originality, and the quality of the writing used to create an interesting and well thought-out character.
Characters that get selected to be added will be created by the Voice staff as official NPCs, per the DB Story Group’s discretion.
Qualifying NPCs that are added to the roster have the potential to be used in the future.

Competition Information

Parent Competition: Tenixir Prison Break
Organized by: Lord Idris Adenn
Running time: 2020-03-09 until 2020-04-06 (29 days)
Target Unit: Entire DJB
Competition Type: Other
Awards: First Level Crescents
Participants: 39 subscribers, of which 25 have participated.

Results

1st place

Tomora Nay'ek

Member: Tomora Nay'ek
File submission: DJB - Nervitt CS.pdf
Placement: 1st place

2nd place

Ciara Tearnan Rothwell Tarentae

Member: Ciara Tearnan Rothwell Tarentae
File submission: Tenixir NPC_ Zyft Yadar (1).pdf
Placement: 2nd place

3rd place

Dr. Rhylance

Member: Dr. Rhylance
File submission: NPC.pdf
Placement: 3rd place

4th place

Nikora Rhan

Member: Nikora Rhan
Submission: Nikora Rhan opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement: 4th place

5th place

Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir

Member

Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir

File submission

Kiaj Siff.pdf

Textual submission

I asked for opinions and Kord said "yandere"

so here you go.

I'm not sorry.

Placement

5th place

6th place

General Zxyl Bes'uliik

Member: General Zxyl Bes'uliik
File submission: tenixirprisonbreak_npc_9056.pdf
Textual submission: I created the "Death of the Force" aspect for the Collective NPC Nuy Vexus when Wally made him canon, so I'm using it again here. :P
Placement: 6th place

7th place

Lord Marick Tyris Arconae

Member

Lord Marick Tyris Arconae

File submission

Trephor_NPC_WallyEntry.pdf

Textual submission

PDF Attached for Initiate Trephor Mila'wenay, created in DJB CS Sandbox (praise James).

In case there are issues opening it, here is a Google Drive link to direct Print to PDF from the Sandbox: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1LecGmsc6DhHVWhj-0Zqcpa12OWJFFccF

Placement

7th place

8th place

Cymbre Kall

Member: Cymbre Kall
Submission: Cymbre Kall opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement: 8th place

9th place

Lucine Vasano

Member: Lucine Vasano
Submission: Lucine Vasano opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement: 9th place

10th place

Combat Master "Aequitas" Anderson

Member: Combat Master "Aequitas" Anderson
File submission: Tunis Di'Bal.pdf
Placement: 10th place

Aedile Tali Sroka

Member: Aedile Tali Sroka
File submission: Tenixir Prison NPC #2.pdf
Textual submission: Schumii, Schumii! What about Schumii?!
Wait, Schumii's me!
Then what about me?!
Placement: No placement

Sera Kaern

Member: Sera Kaern
File submission: Koren Kaern NPC Sheet.pdf
Placement: No placement

Qyreia Arronen

Member: Qyreia Arronen
Submission: Qyreia Arronen opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement: No placement

Lumyi Hicyl

Member

Lumyi Hicyl

Textual submission

*Name: Jhoq Royt

*Age: 34

*Height: 1.7 m

*Weight: 61 kg

*Species: Rodian

*Path/Order/Rank: Dark Path/Journeyman 4

*NFU Discipline: Infiltrator

*Character Traits (Aspects): (predefined) Mad World, You've Failed Me For The Last Time, Glass Half Empty, Natural-born Killer, Berserker, Dirty Fighter

*Skills: +1 Interrogation, Bladed Weapons, Primary Martial Arts, Might, Stamina; +2 Resolve, Blasters, Explosives, Perception, Subterfuge, Crafting; +3 Intimidation, Athletics

*Feats: Down Scope, Active Reload, True Colors, Assess The Situation, La Resistance, Trick Shots

*Languages: Galactic Basic, Rodese

*Lore: Lore and History of the Brotherhood; The history of the Galactic Civil War including the Alliance to Restore the Republic and the Galactic Empire; The history of the modern era including the New Republic and post-Galactic Concordance conflicts

*Notes/Extra: Crimes: Murder, Theft of private property, Attempted assassination; Prisoner of the Brotherhood

Placement

No placement

Tyga Orn Nilim

Member: Tyga Orn Nilim
File submission: Tenixir Prison Break - NPC Creation.pdf
Placement: No placement

Archpriestess Aay'han Agrona Beviin

Member: Archpriestess Aay'han Agrona Beviin
File submission: Ky'lyn Bosmer NPC.pdf
Placement: No placement

Kano Tor Tydex

Member: Kano Tor Tydex
File submission: NPC Prisoner - Kano.pdf
Placement: No placement

Mandalorian Dral Falgorth

Member: Mandalorian Dral Falgorth
Textual submission: 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
Placement: No placement

Obelisk Adherent Rrogon Skar Agrona

Member: Obelisk Adherent Rrogon Skar Agrona
Submission: Obelisk Adherent Rrogon Skar Agrona opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement: No placement