Competition: [GJW XV Event Long] Fiction - TR-8R Co-Op Fiction

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[GJW XV Event Long] Fiction - TR-8R Co-Op Fiction

This competition is in the [GJW XV Event Long] Fiction Bin. Participating in a competition in this bin for the first time awards 5 points for your Clan. Cumulatively, the placements in this competition are worth 14.0% of placement points in this Phase. See the parent competition for detailed rules.

Objective

TR-8R, an advanced bipedal droid created by the Children of Mortis and capable of assuming the identity of others by projecting a holographic disguise and voice of someone else, has infiltrated the Dark Brotherhood pretending to be a member of your team and is performing a series of traitorous acts that are putting a target on their back and fracturing the trust of their comrades.

Up to two of the comrades of the “traitor” have been dispatched to track them down and stop them. As a team, write what sort of shenanigans and traitorous acts TR-8R has been conducting against your clan and the Brotherhood as a whole while disguised as one of your characters, and what you do in order to stop him.

Rules

This is a co-op fiction, meaning two to three (2-3) members will participate in writing a single, cohesive fiction.
This competition will award up to 4 bonus Clusters of Ice at a rate of 1 per 500 words, in addition to the normal clusters awarded for fiction competitions.

Submissions

Teams must submit two copies, one "clean" document (without comments or track changes) for reading in .PDF format as well as a second "annotated" version where all writers' contributions are clearly marked using comments/color coding by "Version History" in Google documents. Edits and comments in the "annotated" document must be clearly attributable to a team member.
- You must share the Google Drive document with the event organizers by clicking the blue "Share" button in the top-right corner of the screen and entering their email addresses. Be sure to give full "editing" access when sharing the document (you will see a dark grey pencil icon to the right of the email address entry box). Include a link to your Google doc at the beginning of your "clean" copy.

Teams

Teams must be made up of two (2) or three (3) people.
You must identify your team members by name and dossier number at the top of your document along with links to character sheet snapshots for each team member.
You can create and find manual snapshots by going to the "Possessions and Loadouts" link in your admin menu and selecting the "snapshots" tab.

Word Count

Each writer must contribute at least 500 words total and a roughly equal proportion of the total word count. For example, each member of a two-person team must contribute approximately 50% of the total word count, whereas each member of a three-person team must contribute approximately one-third of the total.
A writer's substantive edits and comments will be considered when evaluating whether they contributed a sufficient proportion of the document.

Grading

Submitted entries will be graded using the Voice Fiction Rubric

Competition Information

Parent Competition: Great Jedi War XV: Ascension
Organized by: General Zxyl Bes'uliik, Lord Idris Adenn
Running time: 2022-05-28 until 2022-07-06 (about 1 month)
Target Unit: Entire DJB
Competition Type: Fiction
Awards: Novae and regular and bonus Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants: 46 subscribers, of which 32 have participated.

Results

1st place

Empress Rayne Palpatine

Member: Empress Rayne Palpatine
Textual submission: Manually added by Master Idris Adenn
Placement: 1st place

1st place

Master Kamjin "Maverick" Lap'lamiz

Member

Master Kamjin "Maverick" Lap'lamiz

File submission

[GJW XV] The Bureau Bandits and the Case of the Haywire Daughter.pdf

Textual submission

[TR-8R Co-Op Fiction - WIP](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1X4c87qVEzZs9M3fWbfc0mXmwnqv183X7g6QnNP-4t68/edit?usp=sharing)

The clean copy is attached here and gDoc link above contains the Work-In-Progress copy. This submission was created by:

[Kamjin "Maverick" Lap'lamiz - 711](https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/711)
[Thran Occasus-Palpatine - 5101](https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/5101)
[Rayne - 8405](https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/8405)

Placement

1st place

Thran Occasus-Palpatine

Member: Thran Occasus-Palpatine
Textual submission: Manually added by Master Idris Adenn
Placement: 1st place

2nd place

Combat Master "Aequitas" Anderson

Member: Combat Master "Aequitas" Anderson
Textual submission: Manually added by Master Idris Adenn
Placement: 2nd place

2nd place

Aylin Sajark

Member: Aylin Sajark
Textual submission: Manually added by Master Idris Adenn
Placement: 2nd place

2nd place

General Zentru'la

Member

General Zentru'la

File submission

TR8R (5).pdf

Textual submission

Team members:
Zentru'la (712 words, yellow, snapshot attached)
Appius Taldrya Wight (587 words, red, snapshot: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/non_player_characters/83/snapshots/4573/7760 )
Aylin Sajark (679 words, blue, snapshot: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/15685/snapshots/4572/7756)

Google Doc here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AUSjSUDJW-Lu2r78RkR_E3Cbpx4-2qnSFkA-W9F7cDk/edit#

Placement

2nd place

3rd place

Lord Marick Tyris Arconae

Member: Lord Marick Tyris Arconae
File submission: A Droid In Socks Clothing.pdf
Textual submission: Editing Document: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yGYjfIfzKJTsel00I_suTv8fBLkTeCmgLnebWxWNF7c/edit?usp=sharing
Socks = 1731 words
Wally = 1947 words
Placement: 3rd place

3rd place

General Socorra Tenebrosa Nhar’qual Erinos

Member: General Socorra Tenebrosa Nhar’qual Erinos
Textual submission: Co-op team with Wally/Marick
Placement: 3rd place

4th place

Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir

Member

Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir

File submission

(Clean Copy) TR-8R Co-Op Fiction - RuQa.pdf

Textual submission

See here for the annotated copy or in the document: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1k7mePXk8KOza_goAbTNUf1MjmFA8yKKlniGM860hjU0/edit?usp=sharing

Snapshots:
Qyreia: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/14369/snapshots/4451/7559
Ruka: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/non_player_characters/4/snapshots/4497/7609

approx Word counts:
Qyreia: 4380
Atty: 4711

Placement

4th place

Qyreia Arronen

Member: Qyreia Arronen
Textual submission: Manually added by Master Idris Adenn
Placement: 4th place

5th place

Obelisk Adherent Rrogon Skar Agrona

Member: Obelisk Adherent Rrogon Skar Agrona
Textual submission: Manually added by Master Idris Adenn
Placement: 5th place

5th place

Aedile Tali Sroka

Member: Aedile Tali Sroka
File submission: Et tu Lekku (2).pdf
Placement: 5th place

5th place

Kaled Atros

Member: Kaled Atros
Textual submission: Manually added by Master Idris Adenn
Placement: 5th place

6th place

Creon Neverse

Member: Creon Neverse
Textual submission: Manually added by Master Idris Adenn
Placement: 6th place

6th place

Brigadier General Revak K'Urr

Member

Brigadier General Revak K'Urr

File submission

TR-8R Co-Op Fiction.pdf

Textual submission

Contributors

Creon de Neverse: 12097

Alethia Archenksova: 14287

Revak K'Urr: 12656

Placement

6th place

Moff Alethia Archenksova

Member: Moff Alethia Archenksova
Textual submission: Manually added by Master Idris Adenn
Placement: 6th place

7th place

Lynnyaria Meraudstar

Member: Lynnyaria Meraudstar
Textual submission: Manually added by Master Idris Adenn
Placement: 7th place

7th place

Aurora "Aura" Ta'var

Member: Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
File submission: GJWXV_Coop_Auratavar_Lynnyaria.pdf
Textual submission: By Aura Ta’var(10388) and Lynnyaria Meraudstar(13458)
Placement: 7th place

8th place

Adept Alaris Jinn

Member: Adept Alaris Jinn
Textual submission: Manually added by Master Idris Adenn
Placement: 8th place

8th place

Grand Inquisitor Arden Karn di Plagia

Member: Grand Inquisitor Arden Karn di Plagia
Textual submission: Manually added by Master Idris Adenn
Placement: 8th place

8th place

Master Selika Roh di Plagia

Member

Master Selika Roh di Plagia

File submission

TR-8R Co-Op Fiction.pdf

Textual submission

Composition URL: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1h7DrhN8D-6QeHgDFRLP8tOWKXHA361MzFNe7BpaExfM/edit?usp=sharing

Authors (and snapshots):
Master Selika Roh di Plagia
Adept Alaris Jinn di Plagia (https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/9426/snapshots/4442/7550)
Warlord Arden Karn di Plagia (https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/13299/snapshots/4479/7588)

Placement

8th place

9th place

Malisane Sadow

Member: Malisane Sadow
Textual submission: Manually added by Master Idris Adenn
Placement: 9th place

9th place

Adept DarkHawk Sadow

Member

Adept DarkHawk Sadow

File submission

Co-Op w_Malisane Competition_ [GJW XV Event Long] Fiction - TR-8R Co-Op Fiction (1).pdf

Textual submission

Here is the co=op submission for DarkHawk #264 and Malisane #6169

and here is our link to gdoc

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mpRk9n2XO9x4yJOS43oln24nio7szDYSYIk6V3u5-cg/edit?usp=drivesdk

Placement

9th place

10th place

Proconsul Mihoshi Yukiko Keibatsu

Member: Proconsul Mihoshi Yukiko Keibatsu
Textual submission: Manually added by Master Idris Adenn
Placement: 10th place

10th place

Nikora Rhan

Member: Nikora Rhan
Submission: Nikora Rhan opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement: 10th place

10th place

Captain Aryn "Jade" Erinos-Magnuri

Member: Captain Aryn "Jade" Erinos-Magnuri
Textual submission: Manually added by Master Idris Adenn
Placement: 10th place

Ashia Kagan Keibatsu

Member: Ashia Kagan Keibatsu
Textual submission: Manually added by Master Idris Adenn
Placement: No placement

Jaa Shif

Member: Jaa Shif
Textual submission: Manually added by Master Idris Adenn
Placement: No placement

Lord Muz Ashen Keibatsu

Member: Lord Muz Ashen Keibatsu
File submission: tr-8r clean.pdf
Textual submission: submitting for Ashia Kagan Keibatsu 6353 and Muz Ashen Keibatsu 3714
Placement: No placement

Master Bentre Stahoes

Member: Master Bentre Stahoes
File submission: clean TR-8R Co-Op Fiction 14185-14192.pdf
Textual submission: please email me or DM me on Discord if you have any issues with our entry. We have made strides to abide and adhere to the details in the competition. *-Bentre (14185) and Tasha'Vel (14192)*
Placement: No placement

Tasha'Vel Versea

Member: Tasha'Vel Versea
Textual submission: Manually added by Master Idris Adenn
Placement: No placement

Dr. Aru Law

Member: Dr. Aru Law
File submission: Coop Fiction Clean Version.pdf
Placement: No placement