Competition: [GJW XV Phase II] Fiction - Hunt Or Be Hunted

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[GJW XV Phase II] Fiction - Hunt Or Be Hunted
This competition is in the [GJW XV Phase II] Fiction Bin. Participating in a competition in this bin for the first time awards 3 points for your Clan. Cumulatively, the placements in this competition are worth 13.0% of placement points in this Phase. See the parent competition for detailed rules.

Sitrep

Don’t worry, dear. The fun is just beginning.
— The Seer

The Children of Mortis continue to press their attack against the Clans of the Brotherhood, their powerful asteroids now seeping life from the worlds they crashed into. The Children’s horrible might is on full display.

While the Council rushes to consolidate the research done on the Children’s crystals, the time has come for the Clans to push back and attempt to free their homes from the growing grip of the Children’s will.

Options

Participants must use one of the following prompts to craft their entry:


Option 1: AMONGST THE FLOOD

Write from the perspective of your main or alternative characters as they find themselves alone in your Clan’s Theater of War. Hunted by a pack of the enemy’s crystalline raptors (and worse), you need to find your way back to your allies before you meet a horrible end. Traverse the dangers of open warfare and survive to fight another day.


Option 2: INTO THE FIRE

Under assault from the Children’s advanced war machines, you have been tasked to lead an assault through the enemy lines and destroy a collection of their siege weaponry. Time is limited as the constant bombardment is breaking through your clan’s defensive line.


Rules

  • Entries must be submitted in .pdf or .txt format or using the submission box on the Brotherhood website.
    • No GoogleDoc links or .DOC files, please download as a .pdf using "File" -> "Download as" "PDF Document (.pdf)" and submit through the website
    • If your entry is not PG-13, please make sure to hide your entry by unchecking the “Allow people to view your submission after the competition has been judged” box
  • Entries must be a minimum of 500 words. Any entries that are under 500 words will be disqualified and ineligible for participation or placement.
  • Your story should be centered on your main character or one of your alternative characters. Wikipedia NPCs, or other characters that you create or invent to tell your story are encouraged. However, your narrative should focus around your character.
  • You must select and submit a snapshot of your main character or alternative character with your entry.
  • This competition will award up to four (4) bonus Clusters of Ice at a rate of 1 per 500 words, in addition to the normal clusters awarded for fiction competitions

Grading

Submitted entries will be graded using the Voice Fiction Rubric

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Great Jedi War XV: Ascension
Organized by
Lord Idris Adenn, Lord Dacien Victae
Running time
2022-06-19 until 2022-07-06 (18 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Novae and regular and bonus Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
38 subscribers, of which 26 have participated.
Results
Member
General Zentru'la
File submission
GJW_2022_phase_2.pdf
Textual submission

Option 1: AMONGST THE FLOOD

Placement
1st place
Member
Combat Master "Aequitas" Anderson
File submission
The Father part 3.pdf
Placement
2nd place
Member
Lord Muz Ashen Keibatsu
File submission
Option 2.pdf
Placement
3rd place
Member
Aedile Tali Sroka
File submission
Half a League Onward.pdf
Textual submission

Theirs was not to reason why
Theirs was but to do and die

Placement
5th place
Member
Qyreia Arronen
Submission
Qyreia Arronen opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
6th place
Member
Brigadier General Revak K'Urr
Submission
Brigadier General Revak K'Urr opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
7th place
Member
Thran Occasus-Palpatine
File submission
HuntorHunted.pdf
Placement
8th place
Member
TuQ’uan Varick di Plagia
File submission
AMONGST THE FLOOD.pdf
Placement
9th place
Member
Master Selika Roh di Plagia
Submission
Master Selika Roh di Plagia opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
10th place
Member
Warlord Kai Movar
Submission
Warlord Kai Movar opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Elyon de Neverse
File submission
Elyon - Hunt Or Be Hunted.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Nora Olen
Textual submission

Hunt or Be Hunted

As I rounded the corner, I stopped dead in my tracks as I heard the sound of growling up ahead. Only I would be the one to get lost in Aliso City while on the way to fight the Children of Mortis. In all fairness, I was new to the Brotherhood and I could only learn so much information at once.

Though I should know the ways around our base, considering we were in the middle of a war. I could hear my Master’s words of disappointment in my head, as I slowly looked towards a pack of crystalline raptors in front of me. You better not disappoint me Olen.

I needed to find a way out of here, and fast, or else I would be their next meal.

Scouting the area, I noted at least six raptors in front of me. A few of the raptors were fighting over a dead carcass, while the others patrolled close by. This was going to be tricky.

Crouching down close to the ground, I grabbed a small stone, folding it in my hand. What I could do was make some sort of distraction. If I threw the stone, I could make a run for it in the opposite direction. Sure, they might catch up to me eventually. At least I will have a bit of a head start. Peaking around the corner once again, I found the perfect spot. It was close to the raptors, but also the opposite side of where they were.

Winding my arm back, I quickly hurled the stone as hard as I could towards the area and waited. Just as expected, the raptors immediately stopped what they were doing and looked towards that area. After a few seconds, they moved towards it. Suckers!

Now was my turn to run! As fast as my legs could carry me, I swiftly ran towards the opposite end of where the Raptors currently sat. Although I wasn’t a hundred percent sure I was going in the right direction, I was pretty confident.

If I ran straight, I should reach a high platform to jump up to, from there I could jump across the rooftops to safety. It was just about getting there undetected, that was the problem though.

I continued running as fast as I could, trying my best to be as quiet as possible. I made it quite far before I heard the sound of growling and loud stomps coming from behind me. Glancing over my shoulder for a brief second, I noticed only one Crystalline raptors started to follow me. This one looked different from the previous ones I saw before.

It was probably hiding, waiting for the chance to hunt, or perhaps I lured it out while running in the streets. Whatever the reason, I didn’t want to stick around and find out. I needed to get out of here, and fast.

Along the way, I decided to throw back whatever object I could see in my path as a distraction. I know it probably wouldn’t stop it forever, but even to hinder it for a little while was nice.

Before I knew it, I was at the high platform. I quickly grabbed a hold of the stones, climbing my way up the wall to safety. Just before I was fully up, the Crystalline Raptor almost took a bite of my leg. I had enough time to kick it in the face, before fully pulling myself onto the platform. I sighed in relief. That was a close one.

Time to catch up with the rest of my allies.

Placement
No placement
Member
Tasha'Vel Versea
File submission
Tasha'Vel and the War Machines.pdf
Textual submission

I went with Option 2 Into the Fire.

Placement
No placement
Member
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
File submission
Startouched (but the one I can submit).pdf
Textual submission

Oh hey an incomplete. #justiceforSaira

Placement
No placement
Member
General Socorra Tenebrosa Nhar’qual Erinos
Submission
General Socorra Tenebrosa Nhar’qual Erinos opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Raistline Taldrya Majere
File submission
raptors.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Koda Kendis
File submission
Robin Rose_ Amongst the Flood.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Ric "Blade" Hunter
File submission
Untitled document (1).pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Sera Kaern
File submission
To Fight.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Nikora Rhan
Submission
Nikora Rhan opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Dr. Aru Law
File submission
Hunt or be Hunted.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Ghost Luka Zarkot
File submission
[GJW XV Phase II] Fiction - Hunt Or Be Hunted (1).pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Centam Javik
File submission
Hunt or Be Hunted.pdf
Textual submission

Option 1

Placement
No placement