Competition: Write the Next Hit Song!

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Write the Next Hit Song!

Overview:

Help Zax Keevo workshop the newest lyrics for his song.

Prompt:

Write the lyrics for the next hit song for Zax Keevo. You may utilize an existing song and modify the lyrics or write wholly new lyrics. The song needs at least two verses and a refrain

Reference Materials:

Zax Keevo’s music choice is Acid Fizzz. Which, is like Cosmic Girl by Jamiroquai.

An example of this song structure is below:

*Somewhere over the rainbow
Way up high
There's a land that I heard of
Once in a lullaby

Somewhere over the rainbow
Skies are blue
And the dreams that you dare to dream
Really do come true

Someday I'll wish upon a star
And wake up where the clouds are far behind me
Where troubles melt like lemon drops
Away above the chimney tops
That's where you'll find me

Somewhere over the rainbow
Bluebirds fly
Birds fly over the rainbow
Why then, oh, why can't I?

Somewhere over the rainbow
Bluebirds fly
Birds fly over the rainbow
Why then, oh, why can't I?

If happy little bluebirds fly
Beyond the rainbow
Why, oh why can't I?*

Below are several images to help you set the stage.

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Rules & Grading: Will be judged based upon creativity, originality, and ‘catchiness’ of the tune.

  • Participants must submit entries in .pdf, .doc, or .docx format, or use the submission text field (markdown capable).
  • Any entries written in a GoogleDoc must be exported as a PDF for submission.
  • It is highly recommended to submit in a PDF format.
  • There is no maximum word cap.
Competition Information
Parent Competition
[CSP] The Great Hutt Expansion - Prologue
Organized by
Master Kamjin "Maverick" Lap'lamiz
Running time
2023-03-01 until 2023-03-12 (12 days)
Target Unit
Clan Scholae Palatinae
Competition Type
Other
Awards
Third Level Crescents
Participants
4 subscribers, of which 3 have participated.
Results
Member
Thran Occasus-Palpatine
File submission
Kammythemoocher.pdf
Placement
1st place
2nd place
Ellac Conrat
Member
Ellac Conrat
File submission
My honey and me.pdf
Placement
2nd place
Member
Empress Rayne Palpatine
Textual submission

You are the dancing monarch, here on stage.
Dancing monarch, feel the beat from the synthtone. (Oh yeah)
You can walk through the door, you can walk through the door, having the time of your life.

I was sick and tired of everything,
When I called you last night from backstage.
All I do is dance and eat and sleep,
Wishing that my one will come.

Gimme! Gimme! Gimme somebody, not just anybody!
I really want to walk through the door!
Gimme! Gimme! Gimme somebody, not just anybody!
Won't somebody help me walk through the door!

Zax Keevo, I was defeated, you won the war.
Zax Keevo, promise to love me forever more.
Zax Keevo, couldn't escape if I wanted to.
Zax Keevo, knowing my fate is to be with you.
Oh-oh-oh-oh-oh Zax Keevo!
Finally facing Zax Keevo.

Gimme! Gimme! Gimme! somebody, not just anybody,
Won't somebody help me walk through the door!

(This is a mash-up and alterations of a bunch of ABBA songs. https://www.song-lyrics-generator.org.uk/ got me started with more editing. lol)

Placement
3rd place