Competition: [Plagueis Vs Taldryan: Week One] Item Prototype

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[Plagueis Vs Taldryan: Week One] Item Prototype

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Objective

With the race underway, excursions into the Covenant has yielded interesting results so far, with one important revelation: There is more here than meets the eye within this fallen Venator.

Members of Clans Plagueis and Taldryan are to create a suitable item prototype that could reasonably be scavenged from the Venator. The prototype can be any item that can be realistically found within the ship.

Rules

  • Entries must be submitted in .pdf or .txt format or using the submission box on the Brotherhood website. ** No GoogleDoc links, please download as a .pdf using "File" -> "Download as" -> "PDF Document (.pdf)" and submit through the website, or submit via a .DOC.
  • Entries should be written as if they were for use by the whole Brotherhood, not a single clan or house.
  • Must use all of the criteria listed in the Item Prototype Approval Policy
    • Item Prototype Name
    • Example Item Image
    • Item Prototype Proposed Rarity
    • Item Prototype Proposed Cost
    • Item Prototype Description (It is highly recommended you look at existing item prototypes for correct format)

Grading

All entries will be graded on the following criteria:

  • Adherence to the Item Prototype Creation Policy/Full prototype completion - 50%
  • Creativity - 20%
  • Realism - 20%
  • Spelling/Grammar of entry - 10%

Note: Only submissions from members of Clan Plagueis and Clan Taldryan will be considered.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
[Plagueis Vs Taldryan: Raiders of the lost Ark] Week One
Organized by
Master Selika Roh di Plagia, Supreme Chancellor Cassandra Oriana Taldrya
Running time
2023-04-17 until 2023-04-23 (7 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Other
Awards
First Level Crescents
Participants
18 subscribers, of which 15 have participated.
Results
Member
Adept Alaris Jinn
File submission
AICCC.pdf
Placement
1st place
Member
Malfearak Asvraal
File submission
Neuromechanical Inhibitor.pdf
Textual submission

Per fair use, base image of a bounty puck downloaded from google images and modified in Photoshop

Placement
2nd place
Member
Warlord Furios Morega di Plagia
File submission
furios_prototype.pdf
Placement
3rd place
Member
Captain Aryn "Jade" Erinos-Magnuri
File submission
ARK Reactor Prototype.pdf
Placement
4th place
5th place
Nora Olen
Member
Nora Olen
Submission
Nora Olen opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
5th place
Member
Master Seraine "Erinyes" Taldrya Ténama
Textual submission

Item name: Officer's Hip Flask
Item category: Equipment
Proposed shop: Ornamental Oddments
Proposed rarity: Common or Uncommon
Item description: A hip flask carried by officers of any number of galactic militaries and mercenary units. Normally engraved with the unit's crest. May also include blaster spalling if it has saved the owner's life.
Item image: https://manofmany.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/Best-Hip-Flasks-and-Drink-Ideas-Things-Remembered-Gunmetal-Flask.jpg
Justification: It's about as justified as some of the other stuff stocked at Ornamental Oddments, like the Nerf-Wool Towel.

Placement
No placement
Member
Seer Eiko
File submission
Item Prototype_ The Backpat.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Teylas Ramar
Submission
Teylas Ramar opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Raiheaux
Textual submission

Item name: Amban Pistol
Item category: Pistol
Proposed shop: Antei Aramaments
Proposed rarity: Legendary
Item description: Based on the same technology as the Amban Sniper Rifle, the Amban Pistol is a capable of vaporizing enemy targets. Unlike it's larger counterpart, it does not have a double-pronged taser barrel. It is able to fire in both regular blaster mode as well as use the same single-shot gas cartridges of the rifle variant to disintegrates a target on contact. This weapon uses large quantities of blaster or Tibanna gas, many more times than a standard blaster weapon.
Cost: 58,000 credits

Placement
No placement
Member
Koda Kendis
File submission
Chaingun.png
Textual submission

Name: Z-6 Heavy Chaingun
Rarity: Epic
Item Cost: 12,000
Description:
The Z-6 Heavy Chaingun is a shoulder mounted rotary blaster that fired small blaster bolts at extremely high speeds. While similar to the Z-6 Rotary Blaster Cannon, the Heavy Chaingun fires at a faster rate, at the cost of overheating quickly. It can make short work of large groups of enemies, but due to it's size and weight, it makes it unwieldy to those without the strength to handle it.

Placement
No placement
Member
Ric "Blade" Hunter
File submission
PrototypeRic3160.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
TuQ’uan Varick di Plagia
File submission
Porta-Deka.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Kai Movar
Textual submission

Item Prototype Name: Experimental Shield Generator
Example Item Image: https://darkjedibrotherhood.nyc3.digitaloceanspaces.com/files/daf9brv6ewwvwmaqo91r74wk2hkv?response-content-disposition=inline%3B%20filename%3D%22enhancement-adv-basic.png%22%3B%20filename%2A%3DUTF-8%27%27enhancement-adv-basic.png&response-content-type=image%2Fpng&X-Amz-Algorithm=AWS4-HMAC-SHA256&X-Amz-Credential=HEC2XVML6N227VGM7BC2%2F20230417%2FNYC3%2Fs3%2Faws4_request&X-Amz-Date=20230417T220154Z&X-Amz-Expires=300&X-Amz-SignedHeaders=host&X-Amz-Signature=bcc4b85a7f0897aee9a4d169d5dcc03812c307521eb6fe40dc3a0b7e1d2ee3d7
Item Prototype Proposed Rarity: Epic
Item Prototype Proposed Cost: 57,607
Item Prototype Description: This shield generator appears at first glance to be of standard design, but closer inspection shows that it has an uncanny ability to effectively block all kinetic weapons, even proton torpedoes.

Placement
No placement
Member
Bryar Bowl Champion Benevolent Taldrya Whiner
File submission
PXL_20230418_021347522.jpg
Textual submission

Name: Commemorative Star Destroyer Toy
Image: (See Attached)
Rarity: Common
Cost: $19.99
Description: COMPNOR, in collaboration with the Imperial Navy, commissioned a series of toy Star Destroyers to hand out to children on field trips to Imperial Navy facilities. The thought was to paint the Imperial Navy in a positive light for potential future recruits. The program was scrapped when it was pointed out the lack of safety railings in most - if not all - Imperial facilities posed a risk to students and teachers alike. Unfortunately, this was only realized after these building block toys had already been manufactured and delivered.

Placement
No placement