Competition: [Life Day Celebration II] Part 1: Celebration Store Item

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[Life Day Celebration II] Part 1: Celebration Store Item

Objective

Create a new item prototype you wish to see in the Celebration Store. The Celebration Store is the home of special edition items - your item should be no different.

The top 3 submissions from this competition will be workshopped by the Regent Staff for addition to the Celebration Store. While some changes may be required for balancing reasons, every effort will be taken to ensure the entry is honored.

Rules

  • Submissions should be special in nature given they're for the Celebration Store
  • Submissions are recommended to make use of at least part of the Item Prototype Approval Policy requirements as they will be used for grading, but it is not mandatory for participation:
    • Item Name: Name of the prototype
    • Item Image: An image representation of the item
    • Proposed Rarity: Epic or Legendary
    • Item Description: A full description of the item, it is recommended participants look at existing item prototypes of the same type/category as the item they are writing to match the language.

Grading

Entries will be graded on the following:

  • Adherence to the Item Prototype Approval Policy/Creation of a full and detailed prototype - 50%
  • Creativity - 20%
  • Realism - 20%
  • Spelling/Grammar of entry - 10%
Competition Information
Parent Competition
[DB] Life Day Celebration II
Organized by
Supreme Chancellor Cassandra Oriana Taldrya, General Zxyl Bes'uliik
Running time
2023-11-17 until 2023-11-29 (13 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Other
Awards
First Level Crescents
Participants
24 subscribers, of which 12 have participated.
Results
Member
Malfearak Asvraal
File submission
Ohnaka _Captain Edition_ Pirate Armor.pdf
Placement
1st place
Member
Advisor Reiden Palpatine Karr
Textual submission

Item Name: VCX-series "Phoenix Edition" Auxiliary Starfighter
Item Image: https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/starwars/images/f/fe/Phantom_with_astromech_socket.png/revision/latest?cb=20151114125211
Proposed Rarity: Epic
Item Description:
The VCX-series “Phoenix Edition” Auxiliary Starfighter is a modified version of the VCX-series Auxiliary Starfighter. Improvements over the original include upgraded engines, enhanced armor plating, and a more robust shielding system, as well as the installation of an aftermarket hyperdrive and an astromech socket. Hyperdrive capable, this vessel has great maneuverability and speed, with good armor and heavy shielding.

Armament
1 dual laser cannon (forward)
1 laser turret (rear)
Complement
1 pilot and 1 gunner for full effectiveness
6 passengers

Placement
2nd place
Member
General Zentru'la
File submission
Supreme.pdf
Textual submission

All of the freighters in the celebration store were 540,000 so I went with that cost, a 135,000 increase over the original model. The name comes from being used by 'Supreme Leader' Kylo Ren. Wording and style inspired by https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/item_prototypes/yt-1300-smuggler-edition-light-freighter.
The artwork is my own, but was not created for this competition and is a component of an image that can be found here https://wiki.darkjedibrotherhood.com/view/File:Harbinger.png

Placement
3rd place
4th place
Dr. Rhylance
Member
Dr. Rhylance
File submission
Nightsister (Kyber Edition) Energy Bow.pdf
Placement
4th place
Member
Lord Muz Ashen Keibatsu
File submission
Imperial War Droid.pdf
Placement
5th place
Member
Nora Olen
Submission
Nora Olen opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Dr. Work't
File submission
Soup please.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Kai Movar
Submission
Warlord Kai Movar opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Combat Master "Aequitas" Anderson
File submission
Serennian High Nobility Cloak.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Xantros
Submission
Adept Xantros opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Battlelord Haro Zylrun
Textual submission

Beskar-Weave Cloak:
Category: Cover
Type: Back
Rarity: Legendary
Cost: ~50,000 credits
The Beskar-Weave Cloak is a loose garment with an attached hood that is worn over existing armor or clothing to protect someone from the elements, or to hide someone's appearance that is made from armorweave cloth material with discreet Beskar threads that provide good protection against any form of direct damage, but will break if hit several times in the same spot.
Aspect/Upgrade slots: 1 slot allowing Aspects of type Back Cover Cosmetic
Image URL: https://darkjedibrotherhood.nyc3.digitaloceanspaces.com/files/YM1Zp7jeqRhskQfac6dt3W12?response-content-disposition=inline%3B%20filename%3D%22back_armorweavecloak.png%22%3B%20filename%2A%3DUTF-8%27%27back_armorweavecloak.png&response-content-type=image%2Fpng&X-Amz-Algorithm=AWS4-HMAC-SHA256&X-Amz-Credential=HEC2XVML6N227VGM7BC2%2F20231118%2FNYC3%2Fs3%2Faws4_request&X-Amz-Date=20231118T000514Z&X-Amz-Expires=300&X-Amz-SignedHeaders=host&X-Amz-Signature=7240f2c3c732d18ed841c2bfa75736f21a91fa60239d6f11c4efffd0fe6582f7

Placement
No placement
Member
Adem Bol'era
Textual submission

“Survivor Edition” Split-saber
Category
Lightsaber
Type
Weapon (Lightsaber)
Size
2 slots
Rarity
Epic
Base price
45,000
Description
The “Survivor Edition” Split-saber is a variant of the lightsaber weapon. Based on a paired lightsaber design developed by Cal Kestis during his years fighting the Empire, it is made up of a larger standard-size lightsaber hilt and a thinner shoto hilt, which connect at the pommels with a unique coupling mechanism. For storage, the shoto hilt can telescope inside the larger standard hilt. While connected to the standard hilt, the shoto hilt can emit a full-length blade but otherwise shortens while detached. This allows a user to combine the hilts into a double-bladed lightsaber configuration or detach the standard hilt from the shoto to use a single blade, as well as dual-wield the shoto in the off-hand. Lightsaber blades are powered by crystals in the hilt that determine their characteristics and color. These blades are capable of cutting through virtually anything, including blast doors, given enough time.

Item Slots
1 Lightsaber Focusing Crystal slot of capacity 1, allowing items of type Lightsaber Focusing Crystal - I or Lightsaber Focusing Crystal - II
Source
Aspect/Upgrade Slots
1 slot allowing Aspects of type Advanced Lightsaber Cosmetic or Double-bladed Lightsaber Cosmetic
1 slot allowing Upgrades of type Lightsaber Structural Upgrade - I or Lightsaber Structural Upgrade - II
1 slot allowing Upgrades of type Lightsaber Enhancement - I or Lightsaber Enhancement - II
Granted Item Aspects
None
Purchase Restrictions
None

Placement
No placement