Competition: Serenity - Dark Jedi Brotherhood

Competition: Serenity

Finished

Serenity

Haiki Topic: Serenity

A haiku consists of a triplet that is organized by syllables:

Stanza 1 must contain 5 syllables
Stanza 2 must contain 7 syllables
Stanza 3 must contain 5 syllables

Best haiku will win!

Participants must adhere to the rules of a Haiku. Poems with inaccurate syllables will be disqualified.

Competition Information

Parent Competition: Haiku: Examining The Code
Organized by: Daro Vane
Running time: 2024-04-07 until 2024-04-13 (7 days)
Target Unit: Entire DJB
Competition Type: Poetry
Awards: Second Level Crescents
Participants: 11 subscribers, of which 7 have participated.

Results

1st place

Member: Dr. Rhylance
Textual submission: The sun break at dawn
A gentle breeze whistles by
Mind, like the air, calm
Placement: 1st place

2nd place

Adept Tahiri Thorn Morte Tarentae

Member: Adept Tahiri Thorn Morte Tarentae
Textual submission: Seek serenity,
Forever searching after,
Be calm your essence.
Placement: 2nd place

3rd place

Dr. Bril Teg Arga

Member: Dr. Bril Teg Arga
Submission: Dr. Bril Teg Arga opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement: 3rd place

4th place

Magistrate Titius Osseus

Member: Magistrate Titius Osseus
Textual submission: Level within seen;
Roiling wave drop to still;
Peace upon the mind.
Placement: 4th place

5th place

Member: Fenrir
Textual submission: Koi creates ripples,
Glowworms fly when pine trees dance,
Serene and divine
Placement: 5th place

6th place

Member: Edgar Drachen
Textual submission: Grey Jedi don't stress
We find the light and the Dark
In Serenity
Placement: 6th place

7th place

Combat Master "Aequitas" Anderson

Member: Combat Master "Aequitas" Anderson
Textual submission: Serenity calls,
Backed by the waves of time,
The Force in the light.
Placement: 7th place