Competition: 1 - The Path of Love

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1 - The Path of Love

In the spirit of Tales of the Jedi and Tales of the Empire, here's a series of quick and fun fiction prompts with a lot of variation for an inspiration outlet!

These competitions will only have a short duration, so write away without restraint.

The prompt will show up below once you are subscribed!

Rules:

  • Each week there will be a new prompt that will show up once you are subscribed. There's a total of six fiction competitions!

  • Participation gets you 1 point, fourth place gets you 2 points, third place 3, second place 4 and first place gets you 5 points

  • The one with the most points wins! Potential ties can be broken by the amount of times the participants have placed in each competition

  • Minimum is 500 words for participation, there is no set maximum

  • Competitions will be graded with the Fiction Rubric 3.0

  • Submissions must be done in .pdf, .word, or in the submit text box below

  • Please uncheck "publish entry" if your entry contains above "PG-13" level content.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Tales of the Brotherhood
Organized by
Alaisy "Aphotis" Tir'eivra
Running time
2024-05-15 until 2024-05-21 (7 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Second Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
31 subscribers, of which 17 have participated.
Results
Member
Malfearak Asvraal
File submission
TotB - The Path of Love.pdf
Placement
1st place
Member
Combat Master "Aequitas" Anderson
Submission
Combat Master "Aequitas" Anderson opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
2nd place
Member
Master Seraine "Erinyes" Taldrya Ténama
File submission
Path of Love.pdf
Placement
3rd place
Member
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
Submission
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
4th place
Member
General Stres'tron'garmis
File submission
Path of Love.pdf
Placement
5th place
Member
Sofila "Sagitta" Douve Armis
File submission
Evelyn's Dilemma (1).pdf
Placement
6th place
Member
Consul Ikarri Itinen
Submission
Consul Ikarri Itinen opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
7th place
Member
Lord Marick Tyris Arconae
Submission
Lord Marick Tyris Arconae opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
8th place
Member
Doctor Avery Erinos Watson
File submission
The Path of Love.pdf
Placement
9th place
Member
Sivall Tenbriss Ya-ir Zoria
Submission
Sivall Tenbriss Ya-ir Zoria opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
10th place
Member
Padawan Tisto Kingang
File submission
Love Lost In Space.pdf
Placement
Participation only
Member
Ghost Sythe
Textual submission

Gui sat in his chamber, on the edge of his bed. His cybernetics were on full display as he sat there shirtless, his head between his hands as he was focused on a display case directly across from him. His heart sank every time he looked at it. Upon further inspection, one would see an Aurodium hair clip, a few strands of raven colored hair, and a piece of stone.

“Force be with me.” He whispered to himself as he stood from the bed and opened the case. He reached out with his organic left hand but paused before touching the first of the items. There were collectors throughout the Galaxy that were attached to their items. But there were few that collected trinkets for the reason that Gui did. A Kiffar, he was more attracted to the memories stored within, so to many, what he collected could be viewed as junk. To Gui, they were treasures.

Finally his fingers pressed against the hair clip and his eyelids slid shut.

“Hello my son,” He smiled a little bit, “I brought you a gift. It belonged to my father and his father before him.” His heart was heavy as he heard the voice of his father. The day he received the heirloom was the same day his father was gunned down in the streets of Menat Ombo. “Your of age now, take it. I'm so proud of you, what you've become, I love you.” Tears lingered in his eyes as his hand trailed to the lock of hair.

Soft, it smelled sweet. It still smelled like her. Like Oku flowers after the rain. He saw her porcelain skin and could feel her touch as her hand rested on his adolescent cheek. “My son, I know you've experienced a great loss. But this man, Liam, wants to give you a new life at the temple.” The tears rolled down his cheek. “You are destined for great things. You, my son. I can't go with you. This is your journey. But I will always be with you.” He saw her cut the hair from her head. “I will love you, always.”

It was almost too much to bear but He was always comforted by the happiness on their faces. The love in their eyes.

“The Force is with me.” He said again, his fingertips sweeping over to the stone.

He could hear laughter, the hums of lightsabers, the lessons from the old Masters. The grumpiness of Sa Ool was particularly recognizable as the Kel Dor was wary of humans but always seemed to motivate Gui whether it was his intention or not. “Kid, Kid, where are you, GUI!” A heavy Cathar accent caused him to flinch in the present as he heard his Master's voice. The Temple began to shake and crumble and fire broke out which caused him to open his eyes, his heavy breathing and the sound of his heart pounding in his ears reminded him of what he was fighting for. His family, for Odan-Urr. The Force.

He sank back onto his bed but at the door was a luxury droid he called Deeva.

“Master, forgive the intrusion, but the rest of the Council is waiting for you.”

“Thanks, D. Tell them I'm on my way.”

Placement
Participation only
Member
Duke Alex Draconis
File submission
Not Forgotten.doc
Placement
Participation only
Member
Dr. Bril Teg Arga
Submission
Dr. Bril Teg Arga opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
Participation only
Member
Proconsul Mihoshi Yukiko Keibatsu
File submission
Broken Strings.pdf
Placement
Participation only
Member
Nora Olen
File submission
Nora Love Short Story.pdf
Placement
Participation only
Member
Proconsul Diyrian "Diy" Grivna
Submission
Proconsul Diyrian "Diy" Grivna opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
Participation only