Competition: Create an NPC - Iron Legion Commander

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Create an NPC - Iron Legion Commander

Objective

Damon Nix will no longer be the leader of the Iron Legion, and we need a new one. Create an NPC to serve as the new commander of the Iron Legion (ground forces of the council). The format of this competition will be submitting a character sheet for the NPC you create.

Resources

  • Anubis' Character Sheet Template - You are not required to use this template but it is a very useful tool for crafting an entry. Don't forget to create a copy of the template before starting.

  • Character Sheet Reference Tool (C-D4WG) - This is where you look up information on powers, feats, etc. You can see the pre-written aspects here if you need inspiration.

  • Character Sheet Sandbox — Enables you to experiment with builds/skills. You can take a screenshot and attach the build, or transcribe for your template submission. You can find it on your admin page at the bottom of the "Character Sheet Administration" page.

Rules

  • Entries must be submitted in a .PDF or .DOC/.DOCX format through the site. No links to Google drive or other file hosting services will be accepted.
  • Attaching character art is optional and will not affect scoring in any way. It will neither help you to have it nor hurt you to not have it.
  • Use of pre-written aspects are allowed but cite that you used them either in the submission itself or as a comment to the site submission.

Scoring

Entries will be scored based on 1-5 in the following categories:

  • Character Sheet Completeness / Thoroughness - 40%
  • Creativity - 50%
  • Spelling/Grammar - 10%

Score ties will be broken based on the subjective interpretation of the grader as to which entry is a better fit for the role of Iron Legion Commander.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
GMRG Rebirth - A Lore Expansion Mini-Event
Organized by
Councillor Turel Sorenn
Running time
2024-05-24 until 2024-06-30 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Other
Awards
First Level Crescents
Participants
18 subscribers, of which 7 have participated.
Results
Member
Lord Marick Tyris Arconae
File submission
Keta'hanan Zakora.pdf
Textual submission

AI Heaedshot by Ideaogram prompting

Placement
1st place
Member
General Zentru'la
File submission
Shawcross CS.docx
Textual submission

The more I worked on this the more I really started to like the character. If you don't use him, I will find another use for him.

Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Creon Neverse
Member
Creon Neverse
File submission
General Karn Opha.pdf
Placement
3rd place
Member
Alaisy "Aphotis" Tir'eivra
Submission
Alaisy "Aphotis" Tir'eivra opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
4th place
Member
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
File submission
Iron Legion Commander .pdf
Placement
5th place
Member
Grand Master Declan Roark
File submission
Damon Nix.pdf
Placement
6th place
Member
Battlelord Katrila
Textual submission

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1U-AyvtpCjZcWLiX9f3ZlPi4wWOh4dEzF9wpqo8wew1Q/edit?usp=sharing

Placement
Participation only