Competition: Jack's Haiku Extravaganza Week 2

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Jack's Haiku Extravaganza Week 2

It's Jack! It's Haiku! There's 20 of them! Each week will have a topic to form a haiku around. Best entry (based on personal preference, adherence to the weekly theme, and following the standard 5-7-5 build) will take the week! At the end of 20 weeks, the best overall will get an extra bit of shiny!

Placement points as follows:

1st - 6 points

2nd - 5 points

3rd - 4 points

4th - 3 points

5th - 2 points

Participation - 1 points

Ties will be broken based on the number of placements (number of firsts, number of seconds, etc).

Competition Information

Parent Competition: Jack's Haiku Extravaganza
Organized by: Proconsul Mihoshi Keibatsu
Running time: 2025-01-19 until 2025-01-25 (7 days)
Target Unit: Entire DJB
Competition Type: Poetry
Awards: Second Level Crescents
Participants: 13 subscribers, of which 13 have participated.

Results

1st place

Mistress Aphotis

Member: Mistress Aphotis
Textual submission: War-torn universe,
star systems signing treaties,
peace, pausing chaos.
Placement: 1st place

2nd place

Frenek Mausma

Member: Frenek Mausma
Textual submission: Smoke—two sides opposed
Ricochet—react, don’t think
Peace made portable
Placement: 2nd place

3rd place

Team Leader Syrena Valkar

Member: Team Leader Syrena Valkar
Textual submission: I sit and breathe slow, Anger begins to vanish, Retribution paid
Placement: 3rd place

4th place

Nobilus

Member: Nobilus
Textual submission: Clouds dissolve like dreams,
whispering across the sky,
peace in open hands.
Placement: 4th place

5th place

Seer J'Kast

Member: Seer J'Kast
Textual submission: Soft breeze whispers slow,
River water gently walks,
Tranquility reigns.
Placement: 5th place

6th place

Master Seraine "Erinyes" Taldrya Ténama

Member: Master Seraine "Erinyes" Taldrya Ténama
Textual submission: Two weeks of topics
related to chilling out.
Sensing a theme here.
Placement: 6th place

7th place

Dr. Rhylance

Member: Dr. Rhylance
Textual submission: War, need that do not
No blood spilt be worth the fame
split thine soul in twain
Placement: 7th place

8th place

Sith Eternal Rasilvenaira StormRaven

Member: Sith Eternal Rasilvenaira StormRaven
Textual submission: Tranquility found
Gentle breeze over meadow
such peaceful moments
Placement: 8th place

9th place

Ghost Edgar Drachen

Member: Ghost Edgar Drachen
Textual submission: Calmness and being still
Showing Compassion and comfort
Respect for all will bring Peace
Placement: 9th place

10th place

Captain Aryn "Jade" Erinos-Magnuri

Member: Captain Aryn "Jade" Erinos-Magnuri
Textual submission: Peace is a big lie
In a world of tree-huggers
That like their haiku
Placement: 10th place

Lieutenant Colonel Narman Losa

Member: Lieutenant Colonel Narman Losa
Textual submission: Warm cuddle in bed
Crashing of waves upon shore
Five more minutes please
Placement: No placement

Sivall Tenbriss Ya-ir Zoria

Member: Sivall Tenbriss Ya-ir Zoria
Textual submission: Weapons discarded
Ceasefire across the field
No bombs, no blows— peace
Placement: No placement

Adept Tahiri Thorn Morte Tarentae

Member

Adept Tahiri Thorn Morte Tarentae

Textual submission

Be it day or night
Whether it's at dusk or dawn
The feeling is there

No thoughts nor in stress
An oasis in the mind
Or within the heart

It's clear intention
Be together or alone
Peace within the Force

Placement

No placement