Competition: Jack's Haiku Extravaganza Week 13

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Jack's Haiku Extravaganza Week 13

It's Jack! It's Haiku! There's 20 of them! Each week will have a topic to form a haiku around. Best entry (based on personal preference, adherence to the weekly theme, and following the standard 5-7-5 build) will take the week! At the end of 20 weeks, the best overall will get an extra bit of shiny!

Placement points as follows:

1st - 6 points

2nd - 5 points

3rd - 4 points

4th - 3 points

5th - 2 points

Participation - 1 points

Ties will be broken based on the number of placements (number of firsts, number of seconds, etc).

Competition Information

Parent Competition: Jack's Haiku Extravaganza
Organized by: Proconsul Mihoshi Keibatsu
Running time: 2025-04-06 until 2025-04-12 (7 days)
Target Unit: Entire DJB
Competition Type: Poetry
Awards: Second Level Crescents
Participants: 14 subscribers, of which 13 have participated.

Results

1st place

Mistress Aphotis

Member: Mistress Aphotis
Textual submission: Pristine monuments,
Building on the back of slaves,
Reduced to decay.
Placement: 1st place

2nd place

Sith Eternal Rasilvenaira StormRaven

Member: Sith Eternal Rasilvenaira StormRaven
Textual submission: Decay, Forgotten
Weathered, Lost, Destroyed by Time
Withered ruins stand.
Placement: 2nd place

3rd place

Warlord Furios Morega di Plagia

Member: Warlord Furios Morega di Plagia
Textual submission: Fallen fortresses
Broken cities turned to ash
Planets burnt to glass
Placement: 3rd place

4th place

Governor Hugo Siphaar

Member: Governor Hugo Siphaar
Textual submission: Silent walls whisper,
Echoes of a past long gone,
Dreams turned into dust.
Placement: 4th place

5th place

Nikora Rhan

Member: Nikora Rhan
Submission: Nikora Rhan opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement: 5th place

6th place

Master Bentre Stahoes

Member: Master Bentre Stahoes
Textual submission: Harsh words and anger
Thoughtless, selfish acts, passions
Authors our own ruin
Placement: 6th place

7th place

Advisor Reiden Palpatine Karr

Member: Advisor Reiden Palpatine Karr
Textual submission: Smoldering ashes
Creeping vines and howling winds
Time ravages all
Placement: 7th place

8th place

TuQ’uan Varick di Plagia

Member: TuQ’uan Varick di Plagia
Textual submission: My world crumbles down
Everything I've known is gone
Scorched earth, a new path
Placement: 8th place

9th place

Aedile Syrena Valkar

Member: Aedile Syrena Valkar
Submission: Aedile Syrena Valkar opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement: 9th place

10th place

Dr. Bril Teg Erinos

Member: Dr. Bril Teg Erinos
Textual submission: Don't trust the Foxen
He'll ruin your best clothes
And insult them, too
Placement: 10th place

Epis Sato Tarentae

Member: Epis Sato Tarentae
Textual submission: The rains have now ceased,
The river bed lay raw, cracked
Water's song is gone.
Placement: No placement

Fleet Captain Zebina "Ji" Arad

Member: Fleet Captain Zebina "Ji" Arad
Textual submission: Rainbows on my lips
I enjoy the taste of paint
A white potty dyed
Placement: No placement

General Zentru'la

Member: General Zentru'la
Textual submission: Republic is ruined
This is how liberty dies
With thund'rous applause
Placement: No placement