Competition: Are You Even Listening To Me?

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Are You Even Listening To Me?

“Are you even listening to me?”

Using the dialogue quoted above as the opening line, write a fiction using the pov of one of your Brotherhood characters. Whatever scene that plays out is free to the wilds of your imagination, but it must be relevant to star wars, the Brotherhood’s universe, and your characters. Have fun and get creative with it!

  • Note: The dialogue does not need to be said by your character. An NPC or another djb character is perfectly valid to use as the utteree of the quote.

Rules

  • All entries must be at least 250 words, no maximum(Micro-Fiction friendly). Entries of 500 words or more will guarantee at least 1 Cluster of Ice.
  • No character snapshot needed! Sheeted, wiki, any npc is welcome for the focus of this fiction. Be sure to get permission first before writing anyone else’s character.
  • Entries must be submitted in .doc, .pdf, .txt format, or by using the competition text submission box. No GoogleDoc links, please.

Grading

Series Points Scores

Participation and Placement in this comp rewards the following points towards the Series total.

  • First Place: 4 pts.
  • Second Place: 3 pts.
  • Third Place: 2 pts.
  • Participation: 1 pt.
Competition Information
Parent Competition
[Fiction] Just Say It!
Organized by
Proconsul Diyrian "Diy" Grivna
Running time
2025-01-20 until 2025-01-27 (8 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Second Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
11 subscribers, of which 6 have participated.
Results
Member
Blade Mistress Shadow Nighthunter
File submission
Are You Even Listening To Me_.pdf
Textual submission

Set in the future when the kids are older.

Placement
1st place
Member
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
Textual submission

"Are you even listening to me?"

Not even a grunt was given in response to that, red eyes not moving from their focus on shaping yet another molten sugar-glass petal of vibrant pink.

"Foxen. Foxbro. Broseph. Brosiden. I know you're listening. You're not sneaky, man, c'mon, that's some lame lying."

Finishing two more petals, only then did he pause to roll his eyes extravagantly at the Zabrak — who was banned from this kitchen, besides — 0.4 m away.

*I am not listening to this drivel. Because it is drivel. And unlike you, I value my remaining brian cells.*

Bril snorted and waved a hand at him as if he was not a career assassin, a living weapon, as if he could not break that hand into all 27 of its component parts and grind the bones into dust with his bare hands. He could produce sufficient force and precision.

And yet.

"Yeah, yeah, act aloof all you want, big head, I know you could repeat back everything I just said word for word, coz your memory and Flyndt isn't here." Eg he can't be distracted by staring at his Home, which Bril is not wrong about. Just lik he is not wrong that Foxen could repeat back every word of the last 26.4 minutes in which Bril has recounted in wandering and tangential detail how one particular post he and Minnow made on Xinstagram 'went viral' and all about his newfound and ephemeral 'fame.' "Soooo you busted. Anyway, do you think I should post this one or this one—"

He turned his datapad to display another two holos of them making ridiculous pinched lips expressions at the camera in front of some Iridonian landmark. The photos were near identical.

*I fraking hate you. The second. The chiaroscuro quality is superior.*

"The…what?"

Sigh.

*I'm not spelling it. Just the second one.*

"Nooooo, brohiemien Rhapsody, tell me. Tell meeee, bro, bro please."

*Kicking you out in 3 2 1…*

"Okay okay sheesh." 4.67 precious seconds of silence, the space of one Zabrak inhale. "Anyway then we went to the next dune…"

Foxen went back to constructing the caramel bouquet for the top of Minnow's welcome home cake. Bril was only allowed to be present because his dessert was already done and hidden and because Foxen had, somehow, missed him.

Ugh.

Placement
2nd place
Member
Sith Eternal Rasilvenaira StormRaven
File submission
Are you even listening to me_.pdf
Placement
3rd place
Member
Mandalorian Malodin'Tater
File submission
“Are you even listening to me.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Envoy Zuza Lottson
File submission
Blurred Senses - Zuza.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Andan Taldrya Marshall
File submission
Are You Listening to Me.docx
Placement
No placement