Competition: [Parabellum Cycle 1] Fiction - Operations

Finished
[Parabellum Cycle 1] Fiction - Operations
This competition is in the [Parabellum Cycle 1] Fiction Bin.

Participation Type: Low Impact

Sitrep

Following the massive push for resources, technology, and new forces by the Brotherhood and the Severian Principate, the leadership of both factions came to realize to properly utilize these in a defensive (or offensive) fashion, greater training would be required for all involved.

While aiding the forces of the Brotherhood might mean better defensives and less lives loss should an enemy attack again, many of the Brotherhood question if their skills are best put to use there (or what is in it for them). However as the call for volunteers has been made, word has begun to circulate about a poorly defended storehouse on a remote world, full of great treasures.

Options

Participants must use one of the following prompts to craft their entry:

Operation Saberfall
The most promising new recruits have been placed into a small spec ops squad. While the majority are focused on the most core pieces of military training, this group has proven their capabilities already, dangerous but in need of good practice. Who better than you, one of the Brotherhood’s finest?

Welcome to the Abandoned Mines of Uskil on Arx. A dense maze of interconnecting tunnels long abandoned are to be your battleground. Tasked for dangerous but non-lethal combat, you are to be hunted by this small team of promising soldiers. Neutralize them, or be neutralized yourself.

Operation Shadowkey
A vault, defended by armed droids and automated turrets sits unmonitored on the remote planet of Y’thal. Full of ancient artifacts, rare gemstones, kyber crystals, and holocrons. To the right buyer these vaults mean a payday beyond your wildest dreams, and amongst the goods, items that could also potentially make you as powerful as the Grand Master himself.

Your contact, Dolnat Bir, has provided the access codes and location but needs you to get in and acquire the prize. He already has buyers lined up for the moment you return to the Godless Matron with them.

Get in, take the goods, get out. Seems simple but since when do plans ever happen without a hitch?

Rules

  • Entries must be submitted as a static file (e.g. .pdf, .txt, .docx) or using the submission box on the Brotherhood website. Google Docs links and other ‘live’ documents that can be edited after submission will be ineligible for placement.
    • If your entry is not PG-13, please make sure to hide your entry by unchecking the “Allow people to view your submission after the competition has been judged” box
  • Entries must be a minimum of 500 words. Any entries that are under 500 words will be ineligible for placement.
  • Your story must be centered on your main character or one of your alternative characters. Wikipedia NPCs, or other characters that you create or invent to tell your story are encouraged. However, your narrative should focus around either your main character or alternative character.
  • You must select and submit a snapshot of your main character or alternative character with your entry.
  • This competition will award up to four (4) bonus Clusters of Ice at a rate of 1 per 500 words, in addition to the normal clusters awarded for fiction competitions

Grading

Submitted entries will be graded using the Voice Fiction Rubric

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Season 1: Parabellum - Cycle 1
Organized by
Lord Idris Adenn, Lord Dacien Victae
Running time
2025-02-03 until 2025-03-02 (28 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
First Level Crescents and regular and bonus Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
38 subscribers, of which 18 have participated.
Results
Member
Lord Muz Ashen Keibatsu
File submission
Operation Shadowkey.pdf
Placement
2nd place
Member
Combat Master "Aequitas" Anderson
File submission
Victory Conditions -1.pdf
Placement
3rd place
Member
Adept DarkHawk Sadow
Submission
Adept DarkHawk Sadow opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
5th place
Member
Knight Jovian Grey
Submission
Knight Jovian Grey opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
6th place
8th place
Mako Henymory
Member
Mako Henymory
File submission
Parabellum Operation Saberfall.pdf
Placement
8th place
Member
Padawan Remalia Manvar
File submission
A Small Battle.pdf
Textual submission

Operation Saberfall

Placement
9th place
Member
Mandalorian Malodin'Tater
File submission
Operation_ Shadowkey.pdf
Placement
10th place
Member
Bale Andros
File submission
Shadowkey.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Darth Renatus
Submission
Darth Renatus opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Sage Cassandra Oriana Taldrya
File submission
The Mines.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Esen Dulle
File submission
Operation Saberfall .pdf
Textual submission

Operation Saberfall.

Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Xantros
File submission
Xantros, 11518, Operations.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Master Bentre Stahoes
File submission
Parabellum_14185.PDF
Placement
No placement
Member
Duke Alex Draconis
File submission
Operation Saberfall - Alex Draconis.docx
Placement
No placement