Competition: [Parabellum Cycle 1] Fiction - Missing Shipments

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[Parabellum Cycle 1] Fiction - Missing Shipments
This competition is in the [Parabellum Cycle 1] Fiction Bin.

Participation Type: Low Impact

Sitrep

Reports have reached the Justicar that shipments from Antei Armaments have not been arriving at their intended destination and are suspected to be stolen.

Options

Participants must use one of the following prompts to craft their entry:

  1. You have been tasked with tracking the latest shipment from Antei Armaments to its destination. While escorting the shipment it is hijacked. Who is involved and what you do is up to you.
  2. You have been hired to hijack a recent shipment from Antei Armaments. How do you identify the target, hijack it, and what (if anything) do you make off with?

Rules

  • Entries must be submitted as a static file (e.g. .pdf, .txt, .docx) or using the submission box on the Brotherhood website. Google Docs links and other ‘live’ documents that can be edited after submission will be ineligible for placement.
    • If your entry is not PG-13, please make sure to hide your entry by unchecking the “Allow people to view your submission after the competition has been judged” box
  • Entries must be a minimum of 500 words. Any entries that are under 500 words will be ineligible for placement.
  • Your story must be centered on your main character or one of your alternative characters. Wikipedia NPCs, or other characters that you create or invent to tell your story are encouraged. However, your narrative should focus around either your main character or alternative character.
  • You must select and submit a snapshot of your main character or alternative character with your entry.
  • This competition will award up to four (4) bonus Clusters of Ice at a rate of 1 per 500 words, in addition to the normal clusters awarded for fiction competitions

Grading

Submitted entries will be graded using the Voice Fiction Rubric

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Season 1: Parabellum - Cycle 1 - Fiction Pillar
Organized by
Master Kamjin "Maverick" Lap'lamiz, Thran Occasus-Palpatine
Running time
2025-02-03 until 2025-03-02 (28 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
First Level Crescents and regular and bonus Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
39 subscribers, of which 16 have participated.
Results
Member
Master Selika Roh di Plagia
File submission
Fiction - Missing Shipments.pdf
Placement
1st place
Member
Mandalorian Malodin'Tater
File submission
Mission Report.pdf
Placement
2nd place
Member
Knight Remalia Manvar
File submission
A Space-Train Re-Robbery (1).pdf
Textual submission

Some gore, but I think it should still be pg13?

Placement
5th place
Member
Combat Master "Aequitas" Anderson
File submission
Button.pdf
Placement
Participation only
Member
Sage Cassandra Oriana Taldrya
File submission
Hijacking the Hijacker.pdf
Placement
Participation only
Member
Ashia Kagan Keibatsu
Submission
Ashia Kagan Keibatsu opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
Participation only
Member
TuQ’uan Varick di Plagia
File submission
[Parabellum Cycle 1] Fiction - No Shame.pdf
Placement
Participation only
Member
Master Seraine "Erinyes" Taldrya Ténama
File submission
Missing Shipments.docx
Placement
Participation only
Member
Lord Muz Ashen Keibatsu
File submission
Too much credit.pdf
Placement
Participation only
Member
Mandalorian Fenris Skagg
File submission
MissingShipmentStory1.docx
Placement
Participation only
Member
High Inquisitor Hector Von Ricmore
Textual submission

Hector Von Ricmore
Gozanti Listener Ship: Midnight Mynock
Designated Rendezvous, Wild Space

The situation was problematic to say the least. Hector Von Ricmore was many things; an alchemist, scholar, Force wielding combatant. But he liked to consider himself a professional. Which made the current situation all the more troublesome.

The hybrid stood in front of his transparisteel view port, helmet stashed on a console beside him and a frown visible upon his face.

“Run that by me again if you please.”

“Of course sir. Scans aren’t picking up any sign of other hyperspace capable craft in the vicinity. Cargo loaders and the space station are the only things visible on scope.”

“Navigation. You are certain that this is the agreed upon meeting place?”

“Triple checked the charts. We are where we need to be.”

A vexing situation indeed. Hector sat himself down in his command chair and began to ponder. A shipment large enough to require a dedicated transport did not just vanish into the void. There was a reason for it.

He closed his eyes and imagined himself sinking down into a cold, dark, river. He could feel the currents of the Force flowing around him, eager to guide him towards yet another conflict.

With sight beyond sight he began to travel the path laid for him by the Force.

Metallic walls surrounded him. Crates and boxes of various merchandise filled a large cavernous room. An open crate was visible in the center of the room, a variety of blaster weaponry contained within. A variety of creatures could be seen moving the items within. They would pick up and spend time checking over the weapons, then proceed to place the item within a separate crate.

Upon this box was etched a familiar sigil. A W like shape overlapped a circle and I like symbol. The Brotherhood knew this symbol well. The calling card of the Tenixir Revenants.

Hector was pulled back to the present with a gasp. The Force had showed him the group responsible for the theft but further investigation was needed to find where the group had gone. It should not have come as a surprise that they were the group responsible. The Revenants were remnants of a prison riot, whom held the Principate accountable for their sentencing and suffering. They held a deep hatred for the group and would be more than willing to take action against them. Furthermore, the Revenants had been weakened by Brotherhood actions. Seeking weapons and equipment to rearm would be a desirable goal for the former prisoners.

They had the motive to pull this off. And certainly the skills to do it. But how had they accomplished this task?

Hector would have to travel to the station to investigate.

They arrived at the Antei Armaments station without any issues. A momentary pause to show and verify Brotherhood credentials followed by a standard docking procedure. The Stationmaster was not happy to have additional investigators running about, but resolving the issue with the inventory would be worth it.

The Kiffar was ushered to the hangar where the merchandise had been stored. Nothing seemed out of place. No disturbed boxes, no extra ships, no sign of forced entry. The thieves had been professionals. But even professionals left a signature in the Force, and if the stepped into the hangar, Hector could track them.

He placed his hand upon the ground and focused. Worldly distractions were put aside as he allowed the pull of the Force to guide him. Ghostly apparitions appeared in front of him. The Revenants. Dressed as Antei workers they loaded the shipment onto what appeared to be a regular cargo ship. But the Force showed him otherwise. It took him farther back. The Revenants had painted over the ship and falsified its records. A fake name and fake identification. But that did not fool the Force.

Burning Vengeance.

That was the true name of the vessel. And he could see a series of numbers flash by his view. The vessel’s chain code. With those two things the ship could be tracked by the Brotherhood. Hector relayed the information to the Inquisitorious. They would send a team to deal with the matter. His part in this was done, for now.

Placement
Participation only
Member
Grand Inquisitor Morax Darkblade
Submission
Grand Inquisitor Morax Darkblade opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
Participation only
Member
Ghost Edgar Drachen
File submission
[Parabellum Cycle 1] Fiction - Missing Shipments.pdf
Placement
Participation only