Competition: Week 1 Haiku: Tatooine

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Week 1 Haiku: Tatooine

Haiki Topic: Tatooine

A haiku consists of a triplet that is organized by syllables:

  • Stanza 1 must contain 5 syllables
  • Stanza 2 must contain 7 syllables
  • Stanza 3 must contain 5 syllables

Best haiku will win!

Participants must adhere to the rules of a Haiku. Poems with inaccurate syllables will be disqualified.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
So Hai-Cool: A Haiku Series
Organized by
Daro Vane
Running time
2025-03-10 until 2025-03-17 (8 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Third Level Crescents
Participants
14 subscribers, of which 11 have participated.
Results
1st place
Sato Tarentae
Member
Sato Tarentae
Textual submission

Twin suns blaze above,
Eternal seas of parched sand,
Torrid dust chokes all

Placement
1st place
Member
Priest Azler Wilder
Submission
Priest Azler Wilder opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Nikora Rhan
Member
Nikora Rhan
Submission
Nikora Rhan opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
3rd place
Member
Warlord Furios Morega di Plagia
Textual submission

Got sand in my hair
In my shirt and in my pants
Got sand ev'rywhere

Placement
4th place
Member
Mistress Aphotis
Textual submission

I do not like sand,
it's coarse, rough, irritating,
and gets everywhere.

Placement
5th place
6th place
Dr. Rhylance
Member
Dr. Rhylance
Textual submission

Sand gets everywhere
The heat of two suns bares down
Moisture farms abound

Placement
6th place
Member
Advisor Reiden Palpatine Karr
Textual submission

Twin suns blaze above
Water is nowhere in sight
I do not like sand

Placement
7th place
Member
Proconsul Mihoshi Keibatsu
Submission
Proconsul Mihoshi Keibatsu opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
8th place
Member
Lieutenant Colonel Narman Losa
Textual submission

The Bantha poodoo
As far as the eye can see
Watch where you're walking

Placement
9th place
10th place
Lontra Boglach
Member
Lontra Boglach
Textual submission

Tatooine - Lontra Boglach

Memorable place
Galactic pivotal point
Forgotten by most

Placement
10th place
Member
Ghost Edgar Drachen
Textual submission

Tatoonie is hot
There is scum and villainy
but hope resides here

Placement
No placement