Competition: [IG54] Ode to Darkness (Medium)

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[IG54] Ode to Darkness (Medium)

Platform - Poetry

Subject - You should focus on an event such as the Exodus, a victory in a Great Jedi War, or some other memorable occurrence in the history of the Dark Jedi Brotherhood.

Submission should be poetry as opposed to prose.

A minimum of 50 lines is acceptable.

Writing in a specific meter is not required.

Competition Information

Organized by: General Kell Palpatine Dante, Ascendant James Lucius Entar, Lord Muz Ashen Keibatsu, Master Windos
Running time: 2013-04-13 until 2013-04-26 (14 days)
Target Unit: Entire DJB
Competition Type: Other
Awards: Second Level Crescents
Participants: 3 subscribers, of which 3 have participated.

Results

1st place

Anshar Kahn Tarentae

Member: Anshar Kahn Tarentae
Submission: Anshar Kahn Tarentae opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement: 1st place

2nd place

Legorii Arconae

Member: Legorii Arconae
File submission: Poetry_-_2013_IG_54.doc
Placement: 2nd place

3rd place

General Ood Bnar

Member

General Ood Bnar

Textual submission

Grievances
Power abuse
Atrocities keep occuring
The bucket flows over
A drop, all it took
We are not his servants
We have had enough
The limit reached
No more
Betrayal

Betrayal
A spark
All it takes
Whispers in dark rooms
Prepare, this will be ugly
Seven old friends gather together
An impossible idea rises
Needing much effort
And much
Planning

Planning
Seven whispers
Ringing through space
Darkness hiding all movement
Seven power structures are activated
How much influence have these
Whispers spreading all around
Loyalty is tested
Influence shown
Gathering

Gathering
The call
It rings out
Taking all by shock
The plan, executed on time
Taking the Hammer by surprise
Loyalties already given freely
The time comes
To run
Flight

Flight
Can’t hide
Must keep running
Take the database with
Why not, betrayal already occured
Let’s make it even more
Do they give chase?
Are we safe?
Free even?
Exodus!

Placement

3rd place