Competition: Fiction Event

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Fiction Event

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Competition Information
Parent Competition
Dromund Kaas
Organized by
Master Windos, Lord Muz Ashen Keibatsu, Raken, Ascendant James Lucius Entar, Orv Dessrx, Master Gavriel Kadesh, Grand Master Declan Roark, Valhavoc, Howlader Taldrya
Running time
2013-11-09 until 2013-11-23 (15 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Novae
Participants
31 subscribers, of which 9 have participated.
Results
Member
Colonel Shanree Argentin
File submission
Fiction_round_3_-_Vodo_Biask_3729.docx
Placement
1st place
Member
Tarax Eosphoros Taldrya Kor
Submission
Tarax Eosphoros Taldrya Kor opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
2nd place
Member
Aerwin Tribwell-Urr
File submission
FictionDCLastweek1.docx
Placement
3rd place
Member
Howlader Taldrya
File submission
8_howlader_fiction_how_it_ends.docx
Textual submission

boop!

Placement
3rd place
Member
Chaosrain Taldrya
File submission
Like_Cold_Water.docx
Textual submission

Chaosrain Taldrya
3931

Placement
4th place
Member
Rian Taldrya
File submission
_Dark_Crusade__Dromund_Kaas__Fiction_Event_(Regular_Forces)_-_by_OP_Rian_Aslar_(10701).doc
Textual submission

please find my fiction attached to this submission.

~OP Rian Aslar
Quaestor of House Taldryan
#10701

Placement
No placement
Member
Lucyeth
File submission
Dark_Crusade_Phase_2_Chapter_3.docx
Textual submission

Lucyeth
#13700

Placement
No placement
Member
Constantine
Textual submission

Benedict Williams House Odan Urr Pin 10484
Drummond Class Fiction Event
Benedict looked at the remains of the dark Crusade and how it affected the House and what was the purpose of this.
Benedict thought long and hard and came up with an answer that he didn’t like, War for fun was the answer was war the part of the dark jedi brother hood, that was fun for all the dark jedi, and was this to destroy the Light side of the house if so this was worrying to him as he just re-ounce his dark jedi force using.
He could not understand why this was a part of the Dark Jedi Brotherhood, to weed out the light siders or was it to get rid of all who were not active enough, so that all active members are here and doing there bit for their house or clan.
The Crusade has bought this House together (Odan Urr), as we as a group are now working to together and getting our act together as a house we are working together and beginning to be a great team.
This Crusade Benedict thought had made him think of his Dark force using and to turn him to the light side with a new beginning and to work hard and do some good for the House and the DJB as a whole.
Benedict saw blood guts and sabers broken on the floor of the battle ground and he saw good men and women killed and wasted and undermined and destroyed by this war and Crusade these were good people who loved and worked for the DJB what a waste this has been for them and their houses and clans.
The Crusade Benedict believed and still believes is the weed out the bad from the good and this is coming home to roost life in the DJB and being a member of the DJB is an honour and should be here for all who are active and want to work hard for the DJB and clan and house.
I would like to see Odan Urr go from a House to Clan and I believe this can be done through this war because we have done the work and we have proved it this Crusade has proven this as well.
The Dark Council has gotten this right and by doing this crusade has brought in this type of comps and have weeded out the week from the strong, and this is a good thing now knowing that the DJB has active members and that the members are here to help their house or clan and that is good for all of us and to move forward with things that should be done with the club for the good of the club.
Now this Crusade is going to a close I believe we can move forward and get things done and have a better time knowing that all the members here are here for fun and a good time this is what I believe the Crusade was all about and the what the Dark Council and the GM wants to do and wanted for the club, I may be wrong but this seems to be the case.
Benedict has become more stronger and keen to get on and help his House Odan Urr and the battle team Knights, to become the most active and best House or Clan within the DJB, a new purpose and a new beginning has help Benedict to became this new member and person within the DJB and will continue his work for the DJB and the House Odan urr.
The Crusade has also bringing ideas for Benedict to bring new comps and new ideas for the house, which I will be discussing with my Summit The Crusade has brought people together and some apart those who want to work to those who don’t and this has been proven time and time again, which as I have said before is a good thing what now needs to happen is that we need new blood within the DJB so that we can move forward and make the numbers up from those who have left the DJB.

The Crusade has been a bloody one and life will never be the same after it then it was before for Benedict as this has proven to him that he needed to move from a Clan as Tiberius di cloud to Benedict Williams going in to the light and becoming a Jedi for a Dark Jedi this is what I have learnt and think what this Crusade is all about.

Placement
No placement
Member
Draco Maligo
File submission
Dark_Crusade.docx
Textual submission

Dark Crusade
Dromund Kaas
Fiction

The shuttle carrying what was left of my battalion slipped through the atmospheric containment field and onto the hangar deck of the Warspite. The pilot, as bone-tired as any of us, put down hard enough to crack a landing strut and educe pained grunts from us. The shock seats took nearly all of the jolt, but the sudden stop still bounced our vital organs up and down in our gut sacks. All I wanted to do was strip out of my muddy, sweaty, torn robes and grab a thorough sanistream before I went to the mess for a rare nerf steak, Corellian ale, and perhaps a dish of candied jewel fruit for dessert. Most of our meals in the field consisted of protein paste on crackers, and I was anxious for something to eat that was actually appetizing.

I led the precession of beings wearing bloodied and scorched armor, many of them limping or clutching injured limbs. My group was one of the last off Dromund Kaas, and consequently one of the last to report in on the Star Destroyer. “Sergeant Dryer, get the men fed and cleaned up. Your official report can wait a bit,” I said. All the commissioned officers were dead on the field, and the sarge was the senior NCO in the battalion. Which wasn’t saying much. He was a Devaronian, twenty-six standard years old, and had been in the Scholae military for five years. He was a good fighter, and might be a lieutenant next time I saw him.

“Yes sir,” he said, snapped off a quick salute, and chivvied the men out of the hangar bay.

I felt my superior’s presence in the Force, turned, and strode toward Evant Taelyan. The human, a member of the Sith order, stood with his fists on his hips and a scowl on his boyish face. Taelyan was the leader of battle team Caliburnus, and a member of Scholae’s special forces team.

“Maligo!” he barked.

I sauntered up and gazed at him with my eyebrows raised. “You bellowed, my lord?”

A wave of anger swelled up in him and I suppressed a smirk.

“What was the delay? Your shuttle should have been back twenty minutes ago. I want an answer.”

I shrugged. “I didn’t make up the flight schedule, and I saw no need to order the pilot to jump ahead in line. If the others were dawdling and caused a delay you should talk to them about it. I’m sure flight control logged in each ship and can pinpoint who’s to blame for the cascading time delays. Besides, it’s not like we were carrying any of the artifacts that were recovered.”

“Are you sure you didn’t stop to take care of a few things?” the menace clear in his voice.

“Don’t make me out to be the scapegoat. My shuttle followed the preceding one in as close as military doctrine allows.” He was trying to make me angry, but I wouldn’t rise to his bait. Anger was a very useful tool for a dark sider, but it was my tool, not my master.

“The flight schedule was calculated precisely, and it got thrown off. I won’t stand for that. We need to act like a well-oiled machine. This situation is intolerable,” he growled.

I laughed. “Good luck with that. Maybe you can go to Xen and have him give you a division of battle droids to command.” I turned and walked away.

“Krath!” he shouted.

“You’ll have my report when it’s done,” I said and kept walking.

* * *

After I cleaned up and ate I sat in my small compartment, datapad in front of me. I put my face in my hands and inhaled deeply. I supposed that the crusade was finally over, at least I took it for granted that the powers that be were telling the truth. Which was perhaps foolish of me. Truth meant nothing to them, only the acquisition of more power did. But did I gain anything?

Sure, the Brotherhood gained a slew of new planets with millions of beings as slaves, and untold billions or trillions of credits. But with the increased power and affluence came new dangers. Whereas we were flying under the sensors of most of the rest of the galaxy, we were now on the screens of new dark side enemies. Enemies, who like us, would not forget and give up. Foes who would take any opportunity to slide a vibroshiv in our backs whilst our attentions were somewhere else.

Most of the dark siders only cared to understand the Force deeply enough to accumulate power, and sometimes wealth. I was different. I wanted to understand the Force at its deepest levels, and until I found what I wanted to know I could do without control over others and material comforts. I didn’t mind fighting in a war, but it was, frankly, a useless exercise since it brought me no new knowledge. Sure, I got to practice my saber techniques against live targets and use the Force to destroy, but compared to what I believe the Force can do I was merely scraping the surface.

Scholae got a new planet to play with, its inhabitants now slaves to the empire. But compared to the other clans and houses, we got little. The Dark Council got what it wanted, a victory and vast new riches. And of course it kept the underlings focused on external threats and kept us from the in-fighting which was usually our downfall. From their perspective I suppose the Crusade was a rousing success. Heroes to cheer, riches to share, and continued iron-fisted control of the Brotherhood.

I didn’t even get to see any of the artifacts my house had retrieved. I’d never been to Dromund Kaas before, and the unit I led acted in a support capacity. Oh, the fighting was fierce, the battalion decimated, but the glory of the day went to others. I wouldn’t even get to study the finds for the foreseeable future. I suppose you could say the only thing I got out of the Crusade was exercise.

KP Draco Maligo Scholae Palatinae 8521

Placement
No placement