Competition: Fiction Event (SF)

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Fiction Event (SF)

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Competition Information
Parent Competition
Dromund Kaas
Organized by
Master Windos, Lord Muz Ashen Keibatsu, Raken, Ascendant James Lucius Entar, Orv Dessrx, Master Gavriel Kadesh, Grand Master Declan Roark, Valhavoc, Howlader Taldrya
Running time
2013-11-09 until 2013-11-23 (15 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Novae
Participants
26 subscribers, of which 20 have participated.
Results
1st place
Aidan Kincaid
Member
Aidan Kincaid
File submission
Dromund_Kass_Fiction_SF_-_Shadow_Taldrya_84.pdf
Textual submission

Shadow Taldra
House Taldrya
84
etc.

Placement
1st place
2nd place
Jac Cotelin
Member
Jac Cotelin
File submission
Jac_Cotelin_PIN_6_Dromund_Kaas.docx
Textual submission

Cheers!

Placement
2nd place
Member
Seer A'lora Kituri
File submission
Crusade.docx
Placement
3rd place
Member
Keirdagh Taldrya Cantor
File submission
Month_06_83_PlayingWithFire.docx
Placement
4th place
Member
Archangel Palpatine
File submission
7589-DC6-Fiction.docx
Textual submission

File is attached!

Placement
5th place
Member
General Kell Palpatine Dante
File submission
DK_Fiction_-_SF_-_Dante_-_HSP_-_2407.docx
Placement
5th place
Member
Kaz Raith
Submission
Kaz Raith opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Koryn Palpatine Thraagus
File submission
A_Crusader's_Reflections.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Brigadier General Revak K'Urr
Submission
Brigadier General Revak K'Urr opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Lord Nevan Taelyan
File submission
DromundKaas-FictionEvent.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Xantros
File submission
KP_Xantros__11518__Fiction_Event_(SF).doc
Placement
No placement
Member
Vosiri Lightscrest
File submission
Kaayn_4993__Crusade_Fiction.docx
Textual submission

Kaayn sat in a meditative state. Slowly taking a breath in, and exhaling sharply he tried to shake the image from his memory. It had been over a year since his master was killed by the Dark Jedi Garik Burren and almost a year since he took Gariks life. He reflected on the emotion that poured into that tragic event.

Kaayn opened his eyes and looked at the barren world before him. The cobalt blade instantly hissed to life as he hit the activation plate on his lightsaber. As he cautiously walked past the broken bodies, Jedi and soldier alike their lives snuffed out like the fire of a candle in a gust of wind, a flood of sadness and despair resonated through his every being.

Reaching out for any signs of life, he felt nothing. Suddenly a flash of red light screamed toward him. He felt the heat of the blaster bolt in his chest. His heart felt as if it was on fire. Then all was black.

Kaayn awoke screaming and in a cold sweat. Taking in a few deep breaths and slowly exhaling. Visions flashed through his mind of death, destruction, torture, sadness. He cringed as the pain of the events bubbled to the surface. He rose from his bed and dressed himself. Retreating to the common area of his living quarters, he looked picked up his datapad and looked at the current published list of casualties. Dropping the datapad on the counter, Kaayn returned to his meditation chamber. He had only returned to House Odan Urr a few weeks ago, sent to investigate a Krath Cult, but he was called back early to help with the Crusade. House Odan Urr was doing well, but since his return he had repeated visions of the destruction of the entire Dark Jedi Brotherhood.

Closing his eyes, he reached out through the force. Again, he saw the barren world more vividly than before. Far off in the distance he saw something... a large image. He approached the image. The local star was beating on his bare back, the heat searing his skin, the pain sapping his strength as if it was a beast
consuming his energy, tearing his ability to use the force from him. What seemed like days passed before he reached the ruins of a city. Reaching out with his feelings, he searched for signs of life. Again, he felt nothing. The pain and lack of energy took its toll on him. Kaayn collapsed in his meditation chambers.

Days passed before Kaayn awoke. The stress of the meditation took a physical toll on his body. He tried to climb to his feet, but his body protested. Drawing on the little strength that remained, he clamored to his feet. Disturbed by the visions, he sought the guidance of Liam Torun, the Quaster of House Odan Urr.

As he began towards the Quasters chambers, he thought to himself “Why would the Grand Master order the Dark Jedi Brotherhood to invade the Sith?” “What did the Grand Master feel the Dark Jedi Brotherhood would gain from all of this?” Kaayn shook his head in disapproval. “I don’t agree with any of this… none of it.” Kaayn continued down the long corridor. “But even is House Odan Urr is doing so well.. why do I keep having visions that House Odan Urr and the Dark Jedi Brotherhood are going to be destroyed?”

Continuing down the corridor, Kaayn stopped and looked at a painting. It appeared to have been created sometime around the Clone Wars. He carefully studied it in almost obsessive detail Every curve, every color, every shade and shadow committed to his memory. The picture detailed a battle. A squad of clone troopers led by a Jedi. They looked weary from the war, but were still fighting. How it survived the Jedi Purge, Kaayn did not know. What seemed like hours passed before Kaayn gave a nod to the painting. He felt a reassurance that everything would be okay. A renewed sense of motivation game over him. He resumed his mission down the corridor to meet with the Quaster of House Odan Urr. Running his fingers over the cold walls, he grabbed his comlink and contacted his apprentice, T’Espera.

“T’Espera, please accompany me to the chambers of the Quaster.”

A simple “Yes Master” crackled over the comlink.

As Kaayn approached the chambers of the Quaster, T’Espera was already waiting.

“Master is everything alright?” She asked.

Kaayn simply nodded and knocked on the door.

“Master Torun, may I speak with you…..”

Placement
No placement
Member
Issamuel Kin'Droth
File submission
Final_Crusade_Fiction.docx
Textual submission

Thanks for taking the time to read it :) Can someone please send me an email if this is received? I want to make sure it was sent in correctly :)

Placement
No placement
Member
Lord Halcyon
File submission
FictionEvent-Halcyon-43-DromundKaasSF.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Rathus Marr
Submission
Rathus Marr opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Valkish Ebonvar
Submission
Valkish Ebonvar opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Inquisitor Shaz'air Taldrya
File submission
Fiction_Event_-_Special_Forces.docx
Textual submission

“In the end, we’re all just chalk lines on the concrete, ready to be washed away…
For the time that I’ve been given,
I am what I am.”
- Ivan Moody

“It’s simple, Shaz’air. Document what you remember. You were a vital to victory at the beginning of Taldryan’s Core operations from the start of this madman’s command. And you continue to prove yourself to your namesake.”

“This has been a disaster.” Said Shaz’air in a monotone voice.

“Then write that down… or speak it to the careless piece of mechanical equipment in the library that will undoubtedly record it. I don’t care. But someone does. I am doing my job, they are doing theirs. Now do yours.” Keirdagh said collectively. The Dark Jedi Master was almost surprised – if that was a word that could be used to describe any of the Aedile’s thoughts – at the response he received from the Primarch. But the Sith had seen too many great men rise and fall in the past to become surprised by any reaction. Starring into the Miralukan’s blind eyes he remarked to himself. Perhaps Shaz’air was truly beginning to fit into the shoes of a Taldrya?

Shaz’air stared back, the tidy desk that stood before the two men was illuminated by a small datapad that lay rest beside the Cantor’s hand.

“This was a power play. A plight of over indulgence by the strategist that we have sitting on the Iron Throne. I relieved myself from the position that you now sit in because I would not see myself under the pressure of a sadistic overlord who only takes pleasure in toying with our resources. There was nothing to come of this dubbed ‘crusade’ except to dwindle Taldryan’s forces so that we might be more easily manageable.”

“The same reason that he pitted each other in the war for ‘dominance’ between the Orders. I do not wear these blue marks upon my armor for a certain belief system. I wear them to maintain order and discipline amongst our ranks. If Taldryan were to…” The passion in Shaz’air’s voice trailed off.

“Go on, brother.” Said Keirdagh. “You sit on the Council of Taldryan. You have kept your thoughts to yourself on this matter for too long, I think.”

“Taldryan is her own. We do not need the Dark Council to tell us how we should use our resources or when it is our turn to cut off our arm. Even my lust for blood on the battlefield cannot count for the amount of ground we have lost, and won. The Iron Throne will never give us full reign over the dominions we have taken for ourselves. So why fight for them?”

“From the start of Rhelg my thoughts have been clear: Defeat our opponents and move on. Don’t look back, only forward. Sith Space is all but conquered, just as it has been in the past by The One Sith and many before them. Taldryan has lost many and gained much. But is there anything to show of all this? Time lost seizing planets that have little concrete standing for us as a House. Only when we reclaim our title as Clan could we ever hope to make use of the realms we have won. Where do we go from here? I do not see an end game. Perhaps in time, things will unfold and we will see ourselves at the helm of the Brotherhood and back in our forefather’s good graces.”

The office of Taldryan’s second in command grew quiet in silence, the Primarch’s emotions filling the void.

“We do not fight for the Brotherhood, Shaz’air. We fight for our own. You fight because you are commanded to. Not by the Iron Throne or the Master At Arms; but because if you do not fight, then we will not exist. You gain dominion for the Brotherhood for Taldryan’s glory; not your own.”

“I see that, Brother. Put this down for your record, on my behalf, then.” The tall man shifted his positioning and glared even more steadily at his Aedile. His thoughts reeling with spiteful things to say about the Dark Council. About the loss of good men, women and resources.

“If Taldryan is called upon to defeat more opponents under the banner of the Brotherhood, then I will do so with honor and without regret. I have not made it this far in my career by deciding which battles I wanted to fight. So when the Dark Council calls for aid, I will be there. But know this, dear reader, that Taldryan will look back at this sham and laugh as you drown in our wake of dominance.”

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Special Forces Event Entry – Taldryan, Dromund Kaas

OPM Shaz'air Taldrya (Obelisk) / Battle Team Wardens of Unity of House Taldryan [ACC: II] [GMRG: I]
SB / GC / SC-SoA / AC / DC-BP / GN-AuL / SN-BL / BN-AuL / Cr:1D-1R-4A-3S-12E-15T-9Q / PoB / CF-SF / CI-GC / DSS-BL / SI / SoF / LS-AgL / SoL-TC / S:5Rm-19U-3B-11De-3Ret-21Dec-6Aff-1Rn
{SA: MVPH}
Son of Taldryan
PIN# 9193

Placement
No placement
Member
Lord Idris Adenn
File submission
3783DromundKaas.doc
Placement
No placement
Member
Liam Torun-Urr
File submission
DromundKaasFiction7288.rtf
Placement
No placement