Competition: Party on the Yacht!

Finished
Party on the Yacht!

Specifics

Now that Liam is away, its time for the Jedi to play! How, is up to you.

Platform

Any writing platform.

Details

Create a short fiction on what you would do if you had free rein of the Arthos.

Competition Information
Organized by
Brigadier General Revak K'Urr
Running time
2014-02-18 until 2014-03-26 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Clan Odan-Urr
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Fifth Level Crescents
Participants
10 subscribers, of which 4 have participated.
Results
1st place
Sala Fe
Member
Sala Fe
File submission
Kah_Manet.docx
Placement
1st place
Member
Liam Torun-Urr
File submission
PartyOnTheYacht.rtf
Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Edgar Drachen
Member
Edgar Drachen
Submission
Edgar Drachen opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
3rd place
Member
A deleted dossier
File submission
_HOU__Party_on_the_Yacht.docx
Placement
4th place
5th place
Rangel
Member
Rangel
Textual submission

"Now that Liam is gone I am able to practice on my Force lightning". Liam had told Rangel many times not to practice any dark side force abilities with out being supervised. The practices of the dark side has a way of controlling a person. Rangel had went into the deep forest of New Tython. He had stop near the rivers, there he meditated. Hours later he was picking up boulders weighing at least a couple hundred pounds. Having his eyes clothes he opened them and shot out a force lightning to the boulders. Missing his target, it hit a tree and caught it on fire. The fire was small an soon it was spreading.

A couple miles down Ji was out in about and notice smoke in the air. He followed the smoke as it was getting bigger and darker. He ran to where it's location and notice Rangel standing with boulders floating in the air. Rangel was still practicing his shot and was getting better at it, but did not notice that he had started the fire. Ji quickly force pushed Rangel and snapped him back to reality. Rangel notice what was going on and both Ji and Rangel using the force put out the fire with the waters of the river. The fire stop and Ji told Rangel, "you have much to learn still my apprentice meditate on what you have done and be ready in 3 days we leave to take a visit to the Harakoans. I feel a disturbance happening as we speak." Rangel bowed his head, "yes my master".

Rangel, 13387

Placement
5th place