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Specifics

The Jedi secured each other to the perimeter wall, then repelled down to a landing pad set on the west side of the compound. The T-4a Shuttle’s shiny white hull never looked so good as first light cast over the mountains.

Ji and Rhiann, upon seeing the Jedi, began warming up the engines. As the Jedi approached, a roar filled the air. A rocket flew over their heads and collided with the rear of the shuttle sending it tumbling like a paper ball. Rangel and Seridan run over and pull the two disoriented Jedi out of the rubble.

Carrying an injured Harakoan, you see the Knights going for a mine shaft and know that is you’re only other way out. With Thuron forces closing in fast, this is your only chance to rescue all the Jedi, Harakoans and Colonists that had been tortured in this prison.

Platform

Any writing program including GDoc.

Details

Write a fiction, as brutal as you wish, describing how you cover the Knights escape to the mine as well as your team and the Harakoan/Colonist prisoners.

Be as descriptive as you can; use all five senses.

One page minimum, Single Spaced, 11 Point Font

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Liberation: Tides of Freedom
Organized by
Brigadier General Revak K'Urr, Liam Torun-Urr, Governor Tierra Suha'sen
Running time
2014-03-31 until 2014-04-06 (7 days)
Target Unit
Clan Odan-Urr
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Fourth Level Crescents
Participants
3 subscribers, of which 2 have participated.
Results
Member
Battlelord Mateus Kelborn
Textual submission

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-AU4zbtGYAHBZIRMib6whEaUL4UnfxjHPrkjrbVVzsw/edit?usp=sharing

Placement
1st place
2nd place
Corvus Corax
Member
Corvus Corax
Submission
Corvus Corax opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
2nd place