Competition: [RotL] Week Three - Thuronians! Come and get them!

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[RotL] Week Three - Thuronians! Come and get them!

Specifics

The Battle for Menat Ombo is underway! Where do you feature in it? Do your heroics help us take a quadrant of the city, or crush an enemy line? Does your work in a starfighter stop an enemy bomber? Perhaps you free civilians, or rescue prisoners, or take down an elite enemy.

Perhaps you even give your life for the cause. What happens is up to you - this is your story to tell.

Write a fiction detailing where you are in the battle; quiet or explosive, dramatic or comedic, hopeful or desperate, it's all up to you. Include whoever you want to, do whatever you want, and may the best story win!

Platform

Fiction, Minimum 2 Pages. Proper format includes a title.

Details

Participants are to write a two-page fiction. Entries will be graded on Spelling/Grammar, Continuity, Description, Plot Structure, and Creativity. Each of these items will be worth a five-point score, with all five scores being added up and the highest point placement winning the competition. First, second, and third place recieve Fourth-Level Crescents.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Return of the Light
Organized by
Liam Torun-Urr
Running time
2014-05-20 until 2014-05-25 (6 days)
Target Unit
Clan Odan-Urr
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Fourth Level Crescents
Participants
4 subscribers, of which 2 have participated.
Results
Member
Battlelord Mateus Kelborn
Textual submission

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UK-tDY0Yq6avKReIqDsGiioYwX3VMO2DvZWdlxaHc8g/edit?usp=sharing

Placement
1st place
2nd place
Corvus Corax
Member
Corvus Corax
Submission
Corvus Corax opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
2nd place