Competition: Round 1: Fiction

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Round 1: Fiction

Civil War has befallen the Brotherhood. The Clans have split into three factions: the Loyalists, who have rallied behind Grand Master Ashen; the Rebels, following the banner of Jac Cotelin; and the New Order, led by the mysterious Sith Lord Esoteric. Each faction has stormed the surface of Korriban, establishing impressive fortifications and moving towards the Valley of the Dark Lords. Loyalists, Rebels, and the New Order clash across Korriban's surface, but almost nowhere more important than the ruins of the ancient Sith Academy, a site of dark power since the days before the Great Sith War...

One of the bloodiest days in the Brotherhood’s Civil War took place early, at the ruins of the ancient Sith Academy, where the three opposing forces met beneath the towering structure’s pyramids... Now is your chance to tell the tale of what transpired there.

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Rules:

  • Your story can be written in any narrative style and from any perspective you choose, provided the chosen perspective is realistic in this circumstance.
  • Your character's allegiances need not follow those of your unit if you so choose.
  • All entries will be graded based on the fiction rubric - realism grade will include any NPCs used.
  • All entries must be a minimum length of 750 words and may not exceed 20,000 words, +/- 25 words in each case.
Competition Information
Parent Competition
Great Jedi War XI
Organized by
Ascendant James Lucius Entar, Lord Muz Ashen Keibatsu, Grand Master Declan Roark, Zanet Xox, Lord Dacien Victae, General Socorra Tenebrosa Nhar’qual Erinos, Valhavoc, Telaris "Mav" Cantor, Driftan Balephor
Running time
2015-01-10 until 2015-01-23 (14 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Novae
Participants
142 subscribers, of which 81 have participated.
Results
1st place
Lord Halcyon
Member
Lord Halcyon
File submission
GJWXI-Round1-Fiction.pdf
Placement
1st place
Member
Legorii Arconae
File submission
GJWXII.docx.pdf
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2nd place
3rd place
Rathus Marr
Member
Rathus Marr
Submission
Rathus Marr opted out of publishing his submission.
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3rd place
4th place
Sala Fe
Member
Sala Fe
File submission
gjwfiction.doc
Placement
4th place
Member
Lord Marick Tyris Arconae
File submission
MarickArconae_Week1Fiction.pdf
Textual submission

Runs in distant parallel to Legorii's fiction.

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5th place
6th place
Jac Cotelin
Member
Jac Cotelin
File submission
GJW1Fiction.docx
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6th place
7th place
Troutrooper
Member
Troutrooper
File submission
GJW_XI_wk1_fic_7656.doc
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7th place
Member
Colonel Shanree Argentin
File submission
Fiction_Vodo_Biask_Taldrya_3729.docx
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8th place
Member
Lord Nevan Taelyan
File submission
GJWXIFictionRound1_-_Evant_Taelyan_-9118.pdf
Placement
9th place
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Lord Idris Adenn
File submission
3783Fiction.pdf
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10th place
Member
Koryn Palpatine Thraagus
Submission
Koryn Palpatine Thraagus opted out of publishing his submission.
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No placement
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Blade Mistress Shadow Nighthunter
Submission
Blade Mistress Shadow Nighthunter opted out of publishing her submission.
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No placement
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Maximus Alvinius
File submission
JH_Landon_Cruise_13876.docx
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No placement
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Obelisk Adherent Rrogon Skar Agrona
Submission
Obelisk Adherent Rrogon Skar Agrona opted out of publishing his submission.
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No placement
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Vivibelle Baenre
Submission
Vivibelle Baenre opted out of publishing her submission.
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No placement
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Zomboie
Submission
Zomboie opted out of publishing his submission.
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No placement
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Anshar Kahn Tarentae
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Anshar Kahn Tarentae opted out of publishing his submission.
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No placement
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Councillor Turel Sorenn
File submission
GJW_XI_-_Fiction_Round_1_-_13830.pdf
Textual submission

4674 words

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Bal Demona
File submission
GJW_XI_Week_1_Fiction_for_Bal_Demona__10059.odt
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Cethgus Tiberius Entar
Textual submission

The fighting around the Academy was fierce, but it seemed that the forces of the Iron throne had begun to get their footing on this situation. Cethgus had been given instructions to help them on this front with most of the Brotherhood backing, this was in order to try and take the Academy from the enemy and secure it for the sake of the Brotherhood. The sand swept across the battle lines of the Iron Throne, as the troops continued to work on reinforcing their position, it seemed that the Jedi Hunter in charge knew what he was doing and if this was correct then he would be left to continue doing his work.

“Cethgus, your small task force is ready to go. I left you a small force of troops to take under your command just head out when you are ready and good luck,” the voice of the Human crept threw his helmet as he spoke to the Quaestor.

“Understood and thank you for your cooperation lieutenant” the Iridonian allowed his eyes to follow the man as he walked away before turning his gaze back to those that had been given to him to command. It was only a small lot but still, this group would be better than nothing in the end and that was the key. This mission was one that most of them would not return from it was still something they had to take seriously as this was the fate that would fall everyone if their mission failed.

Cethgus allowed himself to spin onto his heels as the group packed up their gear and headed out to see what this mission would have in store for them, though it was safe to say that it would be challenging at the least. As the Primarch began the journey they soon found themselves entering one of the small entrances of the Academy that had been secured, it was here that the sound of movement and infighting had began. It was clear that this team was not alone any more, as their weapons raised up the Iridonian brought his saber hilts to hand as he advanced through the corridors of this one magnificent building, his eyes glancing and scanning the terrain around him.

“Move quick, move silent and kill anything that stands in our way clear?” The order allowed the troops little time to nod before they found themselves once more on the move, weapons sunk into their shoulders ready to squeeze the trigger at the slightest sign of hostile movement.

The attack inside of the Academy was a well organised attack from the Iron Throne, each team breached the building with ease clearing the insides with devastating efficiency, it was clear that this fight was one that held no quarter, brother on brother, force users at their prime it was something that saw the Iridonian challenged by his opponents. It was an honourable and worthy cause to fight for the Iron Throne and the Equite wasn’t about to miss his turn on some action.

As the group encountered their first opponents, a small squad that patrolled the section of the Academy, setting up for the high ground and the element of surprise the Iridonian readied his team with ease. It was brief but the eruption of blaster fire, and shouting and screams as the patrol hit the floor was as satisfying as ever to the Iridonian who knew he had just come out of this better than he had gone into it. Something with ease was hardly worth the groups time, but as they pushed on the fighting became what could be considered a stalemate, neither side budging but each one desperate for control of the Academy.

“Sir, we have them on the back foot, forces are making a final push around the Academy to force them out of the area, at least we can hold the Academy” the communications officers voice echoed throughout the corridors as blaster bolts shattered into the walls.

“Understood, move quickly I will take lead” with that the Iridionian allowed his blades to hiss into life as he darted from cover heading the charge directly at his opponents. His blades were swift as they slammed into their mark, catching the other squad moving with haste from the corner of his eye he watched as they raised their weapons letting the bolts slam into the retreating rebels and what seemed like an entire army ran threw the Academy, hunting down everything that stood in its way, catching and killing the rebels and one sith with ease as they forced them from the ruined and ran down temple towards its outskirts.

“They are retreating sir, reports are that the Brotherhood forces have seized control of the Academy, we are setting up outposts around the Academy to hold this position. Our Forces completed their mission,” the comms officer delivered the news that the Iridonian wanted to hear, it seemed that for what resistance they expected sheer number of force had driven them from the Academy.

Tonight, at least, the Academy belonged to the Brotherhood.

By: Cethgus Tiberius Entar Arconae (6705)

Placement
No placement
Member
Dralin Fortea
File submission
The_Academy_-_Dralin_Fortea_PIN_9485.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Qor Kith
Textual submission

The harsh and scorching winds bolstered against the Zelosian’s back as he raced towards the Valley from his shuttle. He preciously covered his eyes from the glaring sun and the beating down sandstorm he was in. His heavy and plated boots scrapped and dragged across the sandy floors, his robes were shredded and whipped by the sands, and his dignity was slowly dissipating. Sjl peered above a treasured piece of cloth that he held near his face, to notice the spire of the academy close to him. He must press on, to make it to the academy is an imperative for the Krath. The vast collection of mysterious, darkened and forbidden knowledge that lay between the walls was like a drug for the Krath Priest. His body was met by the soft whipping inside of an alcove he accidentally walked into, it was dimmer on his eyes, and the warm breeze welcomed by his skin. However, as the Zelosian pressed further onwards, his boots crunched at the sound of numerous inaccessible Sith Scrolls under the sand. Looking further ahead, Sjl could noticed piles of datapads, holocrons and even a random Lavonrak.

Curiously, Sjl delved deeper into the alcove as it turned into a tunnel with torches and floodlights propped across the edges for guidance.His mind wandered to questionings about the occupant of the treasure cove that he just entered. The logic behind entering this place was farfetched, yet Sjl did not agree with the idea of stepping back outside to die in the hands of the weather. Sjl grew more intrigued about the of all the lost secrets inside this cave, he rushed into action and jogged deeper into the cave.

His eyes were blinded by the sun’s glare from the pillar of the vast room that Sjl entered, and as he turned his eyes towards the lower levels he saw a settlement pitched into the ground. New boots sat outside the entrance and a backpack was left beside the crackling fire and sandstone used for a stool. East of the settlement, he could see an old and rusted cruiser, it’s appearance was lost to time however Sjl could sense it meant more than looks for the owner. Sjl dared himself to enter and decided to follow a ramp that was attached to the south-western wall, slowly walking down with his hand near his lightsaber. It wasn’t the preferred weapon of choice for the Zelosian right now, but the prospect of finding a man-eating beast out here were slim. Then Sjl froze, his head remained still as the cold metal of something circular was softly placed onto the temple of his head, a hand slowly crept across his shoulder and neck to secure him in place, and the heavy breathing of a man slithered against his ear.

“Move and you die, stranger.”

Nervous and panting slightly, Sjl slowly removed his hands from his sides and raised them into clear view for the unknown to see. They were then quickly taken behind Sjl’s back and linked together by restrainers. Sjl wanted to reassure the man he was not here to steal, however a doubt in the back of his mind warned him that this might be a Taldryan, Odanite or a Plagueis member.

“I take nothing but answers; I leave nothing but questions.” Sjl whispered, keeping his head forward in fear of losing it.

The unknown man slowly pushed Sjl to edge him forward and forced him to move down the ramp. His boots felt heavier by the second as he was led towards the campfire, still crackling and burning. With a heavy hand, the Zelosian was pushed onto his rear and onto the ground infront of his captor. The Priest now began to recognise the person from his Quaestor’s report; bleach blonde hair, dark brown and droopy eyes, and the signature cigarette from his weathered lips. The smoke of such device flooded the chambers and forced Sjl to gain a chesty cough.

“Connor Grey?” Sjl questioned the Sith.

“How do you know me, wimp?” He furiously stood and stormed towards the Krath, grabbing his neck and yanking him onto his feet.

“We--we were looking for you. My superiors spoke of you highly--said that you knew this place better than the dead Sith Lords. You have a treasure worth buying too.”

“Did he now?” The Sith gritted his cigarette and his teeth, thinking of ideas as the precipice of darkness crept over the Kuati’s face. He patted Sjl’s pants down and prodded around, then yanked the Priest’s lightsaber away and smirked at the design.

“Ah, a brotherhood weapon. This will go nicely in my collection, I’m sorry bud. The war isn’t for you.”

Sjl’s expression fell pale, he tried to wriggle from the restrainers as Grey reached for his pistol once more. His firm grip on the Krath’s neck slipped, causing the Zelosian to slam onto his back and whack his head against a sharp rock. His blurred vision struggled to focus as Grey aimed his pistol at the Zelosian’s face, then fired twice. The cold blackness greeted Sjl for the last time.

Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Brimstone aka Seabr'imsto'nedansr
Textual submission

Brimstone watched as Plagueis commanders bombard the surface of Korriban to thin out most of the enemy entrenchments that they had rebuilt. As he sat on top of a distant mountain side, with binoculars to his eyes, he relayed coordinates to the Transcendent, which in turn, fired at precise locations of anti-personnel batteries.

After about thirty minutes of destruction raining down on the enemies parades, the firing ceased and Brimstone and his entourage of droids and fellow Plagueians prepared to head down and take the assault within the confines of the Sith Academy. The holo transmission they received earlier, no one knew who it was. But being loyal to Plagueis, Brim knew what it was to follow orders.

Fires and smoke from the charred remains of batteries smoldered in the air. The high temperatures of the planet surface made the trek unbearable. Dust flew through the valley and got into everything, including the droids, which caused some to short circuit. Still, they continued to march on towards their goal.

As they gotten closer, two people, looking like twin jedi, sprang out in their path and proceeded to tear into the front line of droids that were the initial scout teams.The two Twileks with their blue-bladed lightsabers, were causing mass chaos. But as Brimstone and other dark jedi ignited their lightsabers, ready for the attack, the twins leapt out of the area and disappeared into the dust storm.

"What the kriefing was that for" yelled one of the Plagueians. "I don't think they want us to enter fully prepared" replied the Chiss.

Stepping over the newly destroyed front line of droids, Brimstone felt through the dust shroud and could sense another in their path. As they made their way through, they came across a tall Bpfasshi with 2 droids, a ASN-121 hovering over his head behind him, and a YVH 1, or Yuuzhan Vong Hunter One combat droid. He stood there with his purple lightsaber ignited. "You will not pass." he said clearly in basic.

"And you expect us to just back down and call it a day?" retorted Plagueian Callus.

"No, I expect you to die, and without your front droids, I have no problem with dealing with you now" smiled Synin Torin as he with lightning speed tossed out thermal grenades, at the same time, his ASN droid opened fire with his flamethrower. All the dark jedi dove out of the way of the grenades, which went off by the rest of the droid troops they had, destroying them immediately.

Brimstone, and 3 others took the battle towards the Yuuzhan Vong Hunter droid, 4 Elders and Equites went after Synin Torin, and 2 tried to shoot down the ASN as it continued to lay down a blanket of flames. The battle raged on for what seemed to be a few hours, and was only short. The Yuuzhan Vong Hunter droid fell into pieces, the ASN was blown out of the air, and Synin Torin lost his right arm and was defeated. None of the Plagueis Elders wanted to hear his pleas so one of them lopped off his head, killing him quickly.

Now after the quick skirmish, it was time for them to head towards the Valley so they can try to lay claim to the tombs for Plagueis. As they made a sprinted run for the valley entrance, they noticed multiple groups of other clans headed towards the same location as them. The fight was about to get intense. The Valley of the Dark Lords was full of dark energies. Ghosts of the past called out to everyone that could hear them. Korriban was hostile to all life.

As they made their way, K'lor'slugs and Sithspawn of different types stood in their way and started attacking. The only good thing was the other clans were dealing with the same creatures. A member of Tarentum tried to make his way towards the Plagueians to hopefully get a easy kill, but Brimstone recognized him from his days with the clan and telekinetically attacked him. As the Dark Jedi Knight hurled backwards, the Chiss jumped towards him and drove his crimson blade straight into his chest cavity, killing him instantly.

*"Hurry towards the entrance"* bellowed Callus. The Plagueians made their way to the openings and got within its secured walls. *"Set up quick perimeter and open fire on anything not Plagueis"* yelled Kz'set. Multiple shots rang outwards and enemy forces fell back for cover and tried to assess the situations. Brimstone pulled out his dual charric blasters and took a covered positions, releasing multiple shots of blue lasers at anyone that tried to approach or invade. Plagueis won the first battle to reach the Academy first, soon it will be the Tombs, probably when night fall hit.

Placement
No placement
Member
Drake Starfire
Textual submission

Drake was just sitting in his TIE, just relaxing. Perfect evening in the hangar of an epic star destroyer. Then, all of the sudden, Landon came on his commlink “Drake we need you down here at the shadow academy! Some serious stuff is going on!” Cruise yelled. Drake almost ignored it as he was too busy sipping at his cup of blue milk. Quality fine, quality fresh. He thought, but he then heard an explosion over the comm. “Cruise is everything all right?” he asked. Landon replied “yeah just hurry over, And ditch the blue milk this time.”

Drake turned on his TIE, kept the blue milk, and flew off to help his friends. It took Drake a long while, he started reading his own autobiography on how he went from farm boy to legendary poster boy for his blue milk empire. On his way to saving his friends he spotted a blue milk caravan, and it wasn't one of his. Enraged by the fact that another company would dare sell blue milk he went to investigate. He immediately drew his lightsaber and pointed it at the moving caravan over by the market near the shadow academy. The caravan stopped in its tracks, the driver jumped out.

“Whats the problem mister jedi?” The driver said. “PROBLEM!? problem you say? Well ive got one, why are YOU selling blue milk, its MY industry, and only I can sell it. Also I hear that you call me a Jedi. Do you know what color this lightsaber is? Its red bozo, i'm a sith.” The angered sith said with an irritated voice.

The driver then pulled out his blaster and fired immediately, Drake dodged, avoiding the attack before it ever happened. “Did you just pistol whip me?” Drake said, scoffing. The driver was now in the process of soiling his pants, he had just made an attack on an armed sith, and will pay the ultimate price… An atomic wedgie. Drake made a leap and the driver, spun behind him, and reached for his undergarments, and proceeded to give the greatest atomic wedgie the galaxy has ever seen. Drake pulled and pulled at the underwear, the more he pulled the more the driver screamed like a little girl. Drake managed to pull the underwear over the head,down to the crotch, under his legs, and back to the head again and placed it their. Drake had now performed the legendary and almost impossible double atomic wedgie.

After about ten minutes of the driver yelping in horrible pain Drake ended the life of the scum who drove the product of knock off blue milk. Drake moved to the back of the caravan. He sliced the lock off of the back to open the cargo bay. Surprised at what he found, not blue milk, but a whole strike team of loyalist forces ready to attack him! Immediately after opening the door he was barraged with blaster fire, he was successful at retreating (running away.) and continued to his TIE fighter. Even though he was being shot at, he was able to lift off and fire at the soldiers. One by one he was able to pick off, eventually he destroyed about 20 soldiers. Not before long though a group of special units came in with a rocket launcher. Drake followed up with hitting the eject button before the missile was shot, but the TIE was completely destroyed.

Drake rushed in at the troops and swung at them. The first soldier to die was to the left of the rocketeer, sadly to say, he will not be having children anytime soon, even if he did survive. The second was to the right of the rocketeer, who was in fact a women, but, Drake still slaughtered her like a little piggie. Finally was the rocketeer. Drake followed through with a strike severing both of his legs. The soldier screamed in pain, shocked even by the fact that he was going to die. Drake proceed with cutting off the right arm, then the left, and then a final strike ending the soldiers miserable life.

Landon’s voice came on the comlink “Drake, where are you?” Cruise asked. “Um, nowhere specific, im just gonna need an evac…” Drake replied.

Drake sat, waiting patiently like before, and waited for an angered landon to come pick him up. Landon had already told Drake they fixed the problem at the academy. But Drake didn't care, e was just glad the caravan didn't have blue milk in it.

Landon smirked “I thought I told you to leave the blue milk?”

Drake turned to see landon, they walked towards each other and headed towards a troop transport. They then left to head back to their star destroyer.

“By the way, I kinda had one the the TIEs get blown up…” Drake said. There was no answer from cruise, just a pat on the back and a sigh.

Placement
No placement
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Callus Bo'amar
File submission
GJW11Fiction1.pdf
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No placement
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Grand Inquisitor Arden Karn di Plagia
File submission
GJW11Fic1-13299.pdf
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No placement
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Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
File submission
GJW_Wk1_Fiction_-_Retelling.pdf
Textual submission

Atyiru Entar
Dossier #13486

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No placement
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Rodimus Morell
File submission
Nicolai_Rodell_14052_Round_1_Fiction.docx
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Rian Taldrya
File submission
GJW_fiction_-_OE_Rian_Taldrya_10701.doc
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Nobilus
Submission
Nobilus opted out of publishing his submission.
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No placement
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Keirdagh Taldrya Cantor
Submission
Keirdagh Taldrya Cantor opted out of publishing his submission.
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No placement
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Archangel Palpatine
Textual submission

GJW XI: Round 1: Fiction
By SBL Archangel
#7589

SBL Archangel (Sith) / PROF / Battle Team Dorimad Sol of House Scholae Palatinae [GMRG: IX] [SA: V] [ACC: Q]

Mind over Matter

“Clear!”

Though the explosive charge was muffled by the surrounding ancient stone and mortar, the concussive wave emanating from it staggered the team, pressing their bodies against the walls they’d taken shelter against. The droids were the first to react, of course. That’s what they were designed to do. Bugcruncher 1 and Bugcruncher 2, affectionately known as the Bees, raised their right arm fixtures, armed the weaponry housed there, and strode through the newly created hole in the doorway ahead of them.

Immediately, blaster fire began ranging the hole, searing dark patches into the sandstone and brick-coloured slabs around them. The incoming attack was not particularly well-aimed or focused, and was most likely suppressed by the sudden compressive force generated by the breaching charge. The Bees’ reply, however, had no such handicap. Their onboard computers picked out their targets from the haze and smoke, and they eliminated the enemy troopers with ease.

The troopers quickly followed droids, eager to taste the thrill of battle once more. The commandos of the legions of House Scholae Palatinae were some of the deadliest and most experienced in the Dark Brotherhood. Most of them had been through situations akin to this, fighting on a dozen different planets during the Grand Master’s campaign to retake Sith worlds. They were cool and focused, their eyes calmly scanning their entire surroundings, as they strode through the breach one at a time.

A huge dark form followed in their wake. With only a little discomfort, he pushed his heavy frame through the breach, splintered masonry tearing at his armor plating. He wore no helmet, discarding it for the ability to smell, hear and taste unimpeded. His hair was cut in a tight crop, thin enough to see the battle scars he had acquired on his scalp. He was an older man, but did not move as such, his steps powerful and determined. His icy white eyes stared through the ozone haze created during the firefight, and he nodded his head.

“Good,” he said, his voice a deep bass, and full of commanding power, “Let’s move.”

--

Colyn “Tusken” Skybender stared at the mirrored surface hung at an imprecise angle in front of him. He stared at the lines and wrinkles which criss-crossed his face. He was only 37, and yet he felt that he had aged a century in service of the Dark Jedi Brotherhood. A model of a career soldier, he had served his masters honourably and he received praise and promotions in response, in spite of his unfortunately weak connection to the Force.

But as he stared, his vision blurred slightly, and the voices started again. At first there at only been one, a silkenwhispering, trickling into his mind like honey. It spoke of glory and victory, of the blood of his enemies on the flagstones, of riches and the spoils of war. It purred as it described the sensations it could provide. And it was incredibly alluring.

Then the second voice began. It explained, in clinical and morbid detail, the worst that comes of war. The cries and lamentation of women as they find their children, broken and discarded below piles of rubble. The men begging as they are dragged from their homes, and shot like dogs in the street. The staring of orphans as they watch their mothers being buried. The rapes, the murders, the looting, all the worst that man can do.

He had wept for days, sequestering himself from his men as well as he could. He could not let him see him in such a state, a depression so deep that he could barely remember how to smile. Then the voices had told him to do things. Little things, like having him read the duty roster in a clear and loud voice. It was completely out of the ordinary for him, but he did it anyways. He didn’t want the voices to start telling him how the cats would eat the flesh of their owners who had been killed during artillery strikes.

Now the voices ask for so much more. He ran a calloused hand against his dry, stubbled cheek slowly, as if trying to remove an impenetrable stain. Though he could feel the sensation against his hand, as the stubble resisted his skin, the movement felt alien to him. Was he the one doing it? Were the voices controlling him in some way? Did he have control over his own actions?

“Sir?” said a voice behind him. It carried a worried, rushed tone, one employed when having to repeat oneself to be heard in an environment which did not warrant it. A young man stood at the doorway to his quarters, a musty, decrepit hovel of a room sequestered in the tunnels under the Academy. He’d been sent, no… left there to defend the Academy. The voices told him so.

“Sir?” the voice repeated, the man taking a step toward Colyn. There was a slight quiver in his voice, as he saw his commander staring unblinking at his own reflection in the mirror. Colyn turned abruptly, a mixture of anger and frustration on his face. He glared at the man who had disrupted his thoughts, and grunted.

“What is it, Private?” he replied, his voice rough, and dripping with barely suppressed venom. The younger man flinched slightly at the tone, but snapped to a neat semblance of attention.

“Sir, scouts have reported explosions in the lower reaches, indicative of entry charges. The squad in that area has not reported in for two hours.”

Colyn smiled, and nodded. So it begins, he thought, as he stepped up to the crate which served as his desk, and retrieved his helmet, blaster, and lightsaber. He clipped his lightsaber to his belt, his blaster rifle slung over his shoulder, and his helmet held firmly under one arm.

“Let us meet the enemy, Private”

--

A grenade clipped the corner’s edge and glanced away from the advancing force, coming to rest against a pile of rubble. The troopers to a man dropped to their bellies, the Bees stepping forward to cover the living members of their team. Archangel, however, strode forward, and with an almost negligent flick of his wrist, sent the grenade careening back the way it came. The explosion was muffled, the concussive shock wave dampened, but the effect was obvious, and the cries of surprise and fear were elixir on his lips.

He stabbed his thumb against the ignition tab of his lightsaber, its veridian blade springing to life. It cast an eerie glow over his blood red armor, a relic of his time in the Grand Master’s Royal Guard. He surged forward, armored boots crunching through the battlefield detritus. A roar rose from within him, his rage fueling his movements, his charge, his muscles, easily outpacing his troops. He rounded the corner, his lightsaber flicking back and forth as the hail of blaster bolts intended to cut him down were sent ricocheting away.

“Oh Sithspit!” shouted an officer, hiding behind a fallen pillar of masonry, an ancient column, now nothing more than debris. He raised his communicator to his mouth, and started to speak. He barely got a word or two out before his throat constricted, his eyes bulging out of their sockets. They stared in fear and shock at the behemoth, whose raised hand was held in a claw, slowly closing. With his air supply shut off, the man collapsed after only a few moments.

The troopers, unaware of their commander’s demise, continued their assault, blaster rifles firing as far as they could. Archangel’s lightsaber deftly batted the blaster bolts away, not aiming them in any direction, but simply keeping them from striking his body. The bolts burnt holes in the eons-old masonry, the sandstone which had stood the test of time as the building blocks of the Academy were now, once again, drenched with blood.

The Sith Battlelord pulled his outstretched fist up, and back towards his body, infusing the motion with his connection to the Force, dragging the body of the hapless officer up and away from his barricade. The corpse flailed as it piled into the rear of a trio of troopers, who screamed in revulsion and shock. A pair of them tumbled to the ground as they scrambled to escape the macabre missile, getting caught up in the randomly moving limbs. The third, a burly Sergeant dodged to the side, away from the other two, only to be cut down by a bolt fired by one of the Bees.

“Stand fast!” called a voice from the distant shadows, followed by the ignition hiss of a crimson bladed lightsaber. “Finally,” Archangel thought, “a challenge”, as his men moved up to take positions around the junction he had just taken almost single-handedly.

The men ahead of him had fallen back in a hurry, only to come up short before the newly arrived saber wielder. They moved to the side and away from the newcomer, taking up positions along a new defensive line. It stretched across the edge of a raised platform, jutting up from the floor of a large atrium, and ringed with stairs. It was clearly a prepared position, barricades and battlements in place, along with what looked like heavier weaponry.

“Bees to the fore! Grenades!” Archangel ordered, his voice rising to an urgent shout. He had no problem batting away aimed blaster fire, but a true E-Web emplaced weapon would be difficult, if only for the strain on his muscles. The attention and effort he would waste on blocking those bolts would drain him, and leave him vulnerable while he concentrated. For the first time in as long as he could remember, he was happy he had brought some droids along.

“FIRE!” ordered the enemy commander, his lightsaber raised, its tip aimed down at the Scholaen force. Stone and tile splintered under the sudden barrage, heat shattering the decorative ceramic shell on the columns around the entrance to the atrium. The Scholae troops fell back and away from the opening, attempting to take cover from the salvo of blaster bolts and the hail of shrapnel.

The Bugcruncher droids strode forward, ignoring the incoming fire. Their laminanium armor quickly became strained by the blaster bolts landing on it, heavy dark pock marks appearing almost everywhere over the droid’s chests. In reply, they raised their arm fixtures, toggled to their grenade launchers, and fired three volleys each.

The projectiles arced through the air, each describing a slightly different trajectory. The Bees had synchronized their attack, planning it out with precision and lethal aptitude. Each grenade landed apart from the others, so that the explosions could cover the maximum area, with very little overlap. The barricade erupted in a sudden rush of flame and cries of anguish.

“ON YOUR FEET!” Archangel bellowed, and charged, “FOR THE EMPIRE!”

He surged up the steps, taking three at a time in bounding strides. His chest puffed with the sudden heavy exertion, the armour he wore protecting him, but not from its encumberance. After five heavy strides, he leaped over the barricade, his movement aided by the Force, lightsaber raised above his head in a two-handed grip.

He landed in the midst of the soldiers as they reeled away from the explosive damage, falling over comrades and debris. His lightsaber swept side to side, scything through a pair of men with ease, before snapping up to block a lightsaber thrust. The purported Sith had waded in without reservation, seemingly unworried by the charging crimson juggernaut.

“Ha!” Archangel barked, his lightsaber moving with practiced ease, as the man before him maintained his attack, “No wonder I didn’t sense you! You are little more than an urchin!”

Anger flared in the man’s eyes as he sparred with the larger Sith, his lightsaber not faltering in any way, but unable to strike true . Though the battle raged around them, they focused only on each other. The Bees had waded in as well, drawing wicked bladed weapons from slings on their backs and attacking with vicious abandon, characteristic of their progenitor’s namesake, the Yuuzhan Vong. As they scythed through their enemies, they goaded each other with cries of “Maximum efficiency!”

In spite of the obvious flush of anger on the man’s face, he did not rise to the insult. He lashed out with measured, tempered attacks, mostly intended to keep the Sith Battlelord at bay, not necessarily to actually injure him. It was a moment or two later that Archangel finally realized the plan, the man’s ingenuity actually surprising him for once. He dove to the side, his bulky armor cushioning the roll, slamming his back against a barricade. The man reacted with a furious scowl, just as a pair of sniper bolts zipped through the air where his huge opponent had been.

“Well done!” Archangel taunted, a snarky grin spread across his features, “You are hereby promoted to whelp!”

The sniper bolts continued, targeting the newly arrived Scholaen troops, who took cover, but for little effect. Three men dropped almost instantly, and the armor on Bee 1 was nearly scrap. The lightsaber wielder retreated, his frustration evident in his wild motions. He waved his men back and away from the barricades, through a doorway on the far side of the atrium from the advancing Scholaen forces. What troops remained alive after the onslaught fled in good order, discarding equipment and their fallen comrades.

The snipers continued their volleys for a few more moments before disappearing into the dark recesses. Archangel stood slowly, and grimaced at a sudden sharp jolt of pain his shoulder. He glanced down, only now noticing the blackened armor plating, and the smell of burnt plastic and ozone. A medic appeared at his side, and began inspecting the wound. The medical staff always astonished him with their quick thinking and almost bottomless well of bravery in the face of danger.

“How bad is the damage?” he muttered to the medic, who was now poking at the burnt skin with a foam pad. The medic, a young woman, dark of skin, with bright, oval eyes, looked up at him with a slightly concerned look on her face.

“It may have damaged the ligament in the shoulder, sir. Maybe some bone damage, but I can’t be certain. You need to see a true doctor, or at the very least, do very little with that shoulder until you can.”

Archangel barked out a hearty belly laugh which echoed throughout the atrium. His troopers turned to regard him from their perimeter posts, and allowed a momentary smile to appear on their faces. Many of them at seen the sniper bolt hit their leader, and had feared the worst when he hadn’t risen immediately. The huge Sith Battlelord’s mirth was infectious, and smiles and grins began to spread quickly.

“I’m afraid, Corpsman, that the chances of either of those events occurring are quite small indeed” he replied, a wide smile on his face. The smile reached his eyes, crow’s feet and smile lines appearing around them in bunches. The Corpsman blushed slightly, and grinned, before retrieving a suture kit from her pouch, and set to work on the wound. Archangel turned away from the girl, and looked off in the direction his adversary had fled. The pain was a sideshow to the rage in his mind.

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“My lord,” a voice said in the darkness. The holographic map of the Academy cast the room in a brilliant red hue, creating an almost demonic scene. The shadows seemed to lengthen around the individuals in the room, as if the darkness welled up around them. One figure at the head of the map table turned to regard the voice.

“Yes?” he asked, his voice cultured and tempered. He was no newcomer to such a situation, and war was second nature to him now.

“We have reports from Commander Skybender that he has been repulsed by an assault in the lower corridors. A Scholae Battlelord is at its head, and there are other units and groups in the area”

Lord Ashen turned to his advisors, and nodded to the shortest.

“Go. Destroy these ants, and return to me when you have done so. We have much still to accomplish.”

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His fist slammed into the mirror, shattering it. Shards fell to the floor like jagged tears, but he paid them no heed. He had gambled, and lost a dozen men in the process. The enemy was more ferocious than he had expected. He had thought that he could cow them from a superior position, with heavy weaponry, but instead was driven away like a mewling kitten.

“Come now, Colyn,” a silky voice said, “No need for that”

His eyes shot open, staring at the fragmented reflection of himself with horror. The voice, the one he had feared and cowered from, was speaking to him again. Was there no way he could escape this torment? How could he live with such a fiend at his heels? It was after a moment or two when he realized that the voice was not in his head.

“Ah…” the voice continued, a mere inch from his ear, “He understands.”

The dagger slipped through his kidney, and up into his chest cavity. He died, without grace, without glory, and without honor. The Krath Pontifex cleaned her blade off on the dead man’s tunic, and let out a quiet sigh.

“Such a waste of a well-prepared puppet.”

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“You look awful.”

The voice was warm, and genial, one filled with mirth and kinship. Archangel had heard the voice many times before, and had counted it among that of his friends, if not his allies. It was too bad that, in this conflict, the man was on the wrong side of the line.

“At least I don’t scare the ladies off like you, Korvyn,” he replied, looking down at the Jedi from the top of the perch he’d wrested from his last opponent. The Odan-Urr Sentinel had brought a little retinue of jungle fighters and natives with him, a paltry display of power which gave Archangel only the barest moment of worry. They did not compare to the battle hardened troops of House Scholae Palatinae, and Korvyn was easily his junior in power and skill.

“What are you doing here, Battlelord?” Korvyn said, looking up at Archangel, his eyes wary, his tone losing its joviality and slipping into one of suspicion. His arms were held tight across his chest, his hands in close proximity to his weapons.

“I could ask the same of you, boy,” Archangel replied, a stern smile set on his face. Korvyn’s eyes hardened, not appreciating the slight, but did not rise to it. So, he had learned something since deserting the Scholae Palatinae.

“I am here to take this facility in the name of Odan-Urr,” he replied, and gestured with his head, “You have been in a fight already, I see.”

“Aye, lad, I have. More than you at the very least. Shall I come down there and show you?” Archangel replied, his smile spreading into a grin. The natives behind Korvyn started getting restless and were muttering in a myriad of languages. Korvyn’s hand dropped to his lightsaber and drew it with obvious motion.

“Bring it on” he replied, and threw a grenade towards his former Housemate.

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Her clipped footsteps echoed throughout the derelict halls of the Academy. She wore simple nerf leather boots, with sturdy heels which landed with a definitiveness she appreciated. It was the kind of woman she was, keen, intelligent, and always seeking the advantage. She had used her vast array of knowledge to make her way through the ranks of the Krath, often over the dead body of her ‘betters’. Now she stood along side only two others of similar power as the primary advisors to the Grand Master. There was no greater honor in the Dark Brotherhood, except for perhaps the Iron Throne itself.

She couldn’t let that kind of thought well up inside her mind too often. The Grand Master had an eerie intuition when it comes to treason, and did not respond well when found within the ranks. The last man who had come under his scrutiny was still nominally alive, though in that state he currently existed, perhaps death was his only escape.

Sounds of battle filtered down the hallway ahead of her, and she slowed her pace. She could hear blaster fire, and the dull thuds of grenades displaced ancient dust on the floor around her feet. It appeared that her quarry had found a friend to play with. She licked her lips in a predatory manner, and dropped to a couch, listening intently. She needed to wait for the most opportune moment to strike.

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“Come on, boy!” Archangel jeered, his lightsaber holding Korvyn’s back from his face, the blue-green light gleaming off his grinning teeth, “Dante taught you better than that!”

The smaller man grimaced with exertion, under the pressure of the behemoth Battlelord’s strength. The biceps on the man’s arms bulge with strain as Archangel pressed the advantage. Korvyn pushed off, taking a few steps back and sweeping his blade across in front of him, a classic maneuver to keep an opponent at bay. It didn’t even slow the juggernaut in front of him, who blocked the sweep with one of his own, and slugged Korvyn across the face with an armored fist.

Korvyn staggered back, his lip split and swelling. He tripped over a severed leg, and rolled down the side of the rise, bouncing awkwardly on the steps. Archangel swatted down a lobbed grenade, and with a twist of his wrist, sent the severed leg down at the grenadier. The leg connected heel first into the man’s nose, toppling him out of sight behind his makeshift cover.

“Did you see that, Korvyn?” he shouted after the fallen Jedi, who lay dazed near the bottom of the staircase, “I bet he got a kick out of that one!”

Above the din of battle, a slow, rhythmic clapping rang out like the tolling of a church bell. It seemed to cut through the barrage of sound rising from the furor below, and each man seemed to slow in his actions, turning to face the new invasive sound. After a few moments, a small pool of shadows stirred, and a lightsaber, magenta and brilliant, burst to life. It illuminated a hooded figure, with a smile on her face.

“Touche, Battelord,” she said, her voice somehow cold and melodic at the same time. She was shorter than average height, certainly below that of the two Jedi combatants before her, but she stood with her head high, with determination which could only be borne from rigorous training and confidence in one’s own skills.

“Who are you?” Archangel replied, dropping his usual act of jabs and taunts. He’d learned long ago that the vanity of his opponents was always one of his greatest weapons. The right prod in the correct direction will push someone over the edge, sometimes literally. This newcomer immediately struck him as the kind of person such jeers would have little effect on. He decided to try the blunt and dumb approach. Never hurts to have the enemy underestimate him.

“I am Lord Ashen’s Pontifex,” she explained simply, with a slow flourish of her lightsaber and a deep bow at the waist. Her robes, though pulled tight around her, opened slightly as she moved, revealing her nudity below them. She’d come prepared to fight then, Archangel decided, not allowing his eyes to be distracted. She knew every trick in the book he did, and probably more besides. This was not looking good.

“You punched me…” murmured Korvyn groggily from below, being helped to his feet by one of his troopers. He still had a dazed expression on his face, but was slowly regaining his faculties as he began to note the change to the situation. He turned to the Pontifex, and bowed his head respectfully. Archangel did no such thing. Though he was not as high a rank as this woman, he was more than a match for any Krath in martial matters.

“Come now, Sith,” the Pontifex purred, stepping slowly into the dim light of the atrium, “You cannot best me. Take your little rabble, and leave this Jedi to me. You need not die by my hand this day”

“I should think not, Krath,” he replied, ignoring her rank and the status it provided her. But he had little in the way of leverage in this situation, and nothing to bluff with. If she jumped him, it’d be a massacre one way or another.

“A gallant Sith?” she quipped, her hand rising to beckon at Korvyn, whose eyes were glazed, and staring blankly at her, “Your Jedi friend here seems to have no compunction with me. Perhaps I can persuade you to join me in serving Lord Ashen’s will”

As she spoke, a searing pain ripped through his head, from temple to temple. HIs vision darkened and blurred, and his sense of balance faltered. He closed his eyes with a grimace, clenching them tight as he tried to orientate himself. And with his eyes closed and his senses focused inward to defend against the mental assault, he didn’t notice the block of masonry until it slammed into the center of his chest.

He toppled backward, like an ancient tree cut down. HIs armored back slammed into the paving, and his breath huffed out in one gust. The Scholan troops responded as quickly as they were able, firing their blasters at the newcomer and Odan-Urr troops, and falling back to cover their fallen leader. The Bees, battered and worn already, dropped their melee weapons and moved to protect Archangel with their bodies and what was left into the ammunition reserves.

The last thing Archangel heard before passing out was the Pontifex’s warm, bubbly laughter, twinged with glee and lustful victory.

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Korriban did not change much in Nath’s opinion, this had been the second time she had the pleasure of visiting the desolate planet. This time she had to confess was far more enjoyable than the first, this time she could travel where she wished, she could explore and vanish into tombs for weeks at a time and nothing bad would come of it. The last time had not been so enjoyable or free with her whims.

She recalled the war.

The Iridonian would never say that she was pivotal within it, or contributed greatly to it’s success, her ego was far too small for such boasts. If she had to say anything she would describe herself as a force of chaos within a ball of organised chaos.

Slowly she walked her way through the sands, pulling up the balaklava higher, she could feel a storm brewing as the winds picked up on the normally mild desert planet. The last time she had been here she recalled the sands had been turned crimson with the fighting, now not even a body remained. Everything had been swept away, no doubt the bodies had made excellent snacks for the flora and fauna all of which had evolved a ruthless attitude to prey.

As quickly as she could manage she caught up with her counterpart for this little excursion. He stood several inches taller than her and in muscle mass was probably the equivalent of three of her under nourished selves.

“Storm’s coming in.” He turned and glanced skywards a small frown gracing his expression.

“How can you tell?” The sky still seemed calm enough to him, there was nothing unusual or even remotely hinting to stormy weather. Nath knew better, knew what would come and the results of not finding sufficient shelter.

“I lived on Iridonia, the environment was similar.” It was the only expatiation she could think to give the Mandalorian. He thought about it for a long while as they walked down towards the heart of the Valley of Kings.

“We could use that tomb we met in last time.” Nath gave a nod, knowing they had plenty of time to reach it and it would not be caved in like many of the tombs they would pass along the way.

She kept pace with Kalon without difficulty, she could have walked faster but there was no rush, no target to kill or artefact to capture now. No, that had all happened a few months prior and she had seen how it had effected them. How it had changed people to become monstrous creatures that easily turned on friend as quickly as foe.

Nath wondered if Muz was happy now he had the answer to his question, she hadn’t been there when he had breached the hidden tomb but she wasn’t heard pressed to imagine his expression as the large stone blocks turned to rubble. Or how his fingers grasped at the holocron as though it was as fragile as glass.

The pair walked in silence, no doubt Kalon was reliving memories of his own, she did not wish to pry, some things where better left in the memory. For herself she recalled bodies being piled along the narrow path between the rows of tombs, having to climb over fallen Sith to reach her next opponent uncaring if they were friend (not that Nath had many of them) or enemy.

As they continued she fell deeper into her musings, she could smell the metallic tang of the crimson viscous bodily fluids that had soaked so deeply into the sands that it had almost made a paste with the repeated churning of boots that had worked it’s way through it. She felt the itch of dead eyes glaring up at her silently asking her why she had not bothered to save them.

Nath was forced to clench her fists and was thankful her kind did not perspire as much as a Human. It was far more difficult to read that she was in truth recalling these memories far more vividly than the previous battles she had participated in. Slowly her hands came to rest upon the the hilts of her Durasteel daggers, The motion was one of comfort, knowing they were there was reassuring in a more primitive part of her mind.

Nausea bubbled in the pit of her stomach, she took a quiet deep breath to try and repress the acidic contents of her stomach. She wished to go home, wished she could forget it all and pretend this damned war had never happened.

Her hands trembled now too...

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Octavia sighed as her transport shuttle touched down. She looked at her team and wondered how many of them would survive the combat. She had seen too many of these wars, knew that Plagueis would lose too many troops and too many lives. To be honest she was sick of it. These wars had torn The Brotherhood apart, she just hoped that this time the lives lost were finally not going to be in vain.
“Octavia” Callus almost whispered to her as the doors to the shuttle opened. “This war is not like the others. There will be people on this battle field that you care about, and they will be against you. “ He rested his large hand on her shoulder’ “It is up to you to decide what you do about them, but be aware, they are not as kind as you, and may try to end your life. Be strong and look out for yourself”. She quickly processed his words and then smiled as she lowered her goggles to protect her eyes from the whipping sands they were about to walk into,” You mean Cethgus? Please, Callus. He will be lucky if he survives my wrath.”
She walked out onto the red sands of Korriban and took in the sight. The sand seemed to dance along the surface of the planet, and it would have been a beautiful sight had it not been for the Brotherhood tearing itself apart. She had gotten her mission, she knew what to do, and for once in her life the fear she always felt seemed to dissipate. The Dark Jedi Knight felt that in her heart of hearts the New Order would overcome, and would bring the Brotherhood back together again, but this time, Plagueis would Rule.
Octavia made haste to the ruins of the Sith Academy. Lightsaber in hand she quickly cut her way through the crowd. It was a strange feeling to be fighting against the very same people she had fought a long side only years before, almost a sad feeling, but she pushed it aside as she quickly made her way through a group of Arconian fighters and came across a familiar Zabrak. She knew him instantly, and even though he had his back turned to her, Cethgus knew she was there. She was annoyed that she had to deal with him so early on in combat, but he stood in the way between her and the entrance to the ruins, and she refused to let her husband be her downfall again.
The Zabrak turned around and licked his lips. He was in his fighting mode, but to say he was surprised to see his wife was an understatement. “You” He spoke with both surprise and venom in his voice” What are you doing here?” Octavia smiled at his discomfort and took a step closer. “Surprised to see me? You shouldn’t be, Darling. You know I always come back. Now, I don’t have time to fight with you, so you’re going to let me pass.. And I will let you live another day. Test me and I will chop off your limbs and leave you to die on the sands of this forsaken planet. He barely had time to protest before Octavia raised her saber and brought it down on his arm, not severing it, but defiantly leaving a wound. She smiled ad the zabrak howled in pain and she walked past. “Don’t fuck with a woman scorned, Cethgus.”
She quickly ran off before he could chase after her and entered the ruins. It was quiet in here, only the sounds of her foot steps and the echoes of the battle outside were to be heard. She dusted herself off quickly and lifted up her goggles so she could see better. To say she was in awe was an understatement. She felt such a connection to this place, and she had never even been here.
Using her Lightsaber for light she used her powers to feel what she could not see. She could feel a human presence, and made her way silently too it. It was deep in the ruins, but she couldn’t tell if it was a Jedi or not, even though it had a force signature. She peered around a corner and quickly ducked away when shots were fired at her. She sighed and spoke quietly to the person shooting.
“I’m not here to harm you. But you are in the rightful place of Clan Plagueis.” She waited for a response and all she got was a gruff chuckle. “Darlin,” the voice spoke out loudly “You have no idea what you’re fighting for, do you?” Octavia came out from hiding and looked at the man. He seemed a little weathered, defiantly no worse for wear and she thought he was actually attractive. He seemed to have a force signature, but didn’t seem to detect light or dark.
“Who are you?” The dark Jedi knight spoke to the Stranger. “I’m Dark Jedi Knight Octavia Obrie”.She had to duck quickly because now shots were being fired from behind her. She ran next to the stranger and both took cover. “I’m Connor Grey. Friends of yours?” He quickly stood up and shot back at the intruders that had followed her in. “Would I be hiding if they were?”
The two held off the fighters for a bit until no others came in. They had been talking when Conner decided he needed to leave. He began to pick up his things, including some relics from the ruins. “You can’t take those!” Tavi tried to stop him but he also fought her off.
No worries, Darlin, you’ll get them back I have a feeling ‘ll see you again.” He smiled a charming smile and ran deeper into the ruins. She sighed deeply and lt Callus know she had the ruins secured. And she hoped Connor was right.

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by: Calvo #13922

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Calvo, a maroon skinned Elomin, paced around. Calvo was tall for his race, and had a distinct six blood drop tattoo on his chest. He had amber eyes, and short nose tusks. His horns were arranged in a crown structure. He wore his robe, which showed his tattoo, and was blue in the color of the obelisk.
The Jedi war was getting on his nerves. He hadn’t done anything yet. He moved around a corner in the temple. He came here without telling his master. He feared running into a Jedi Master who long vexed him, Jared. He Turned another corner and entered a room he hadn’t know existed. As soon as he stepped in a pre recorded Holo popped up.
"The importance of the ruins of the Academy cannot be understated. While precious artifacts still reside there and places of great darkness abound - including the tomb of Darth Bane - of utmost importance to our current predicament is its strategic value. Whoever controls the academy will control one of the few, primary access corridors directly to the Valley of the Dark Lords." The figure cranes its head, pausing for a moment as if considering what to say next. “The battles there are fierce, and a victory here would surely aid our forces tremendously.”
"You will find both friend and foe here amongst the warring factions - the One Sith, Synin Torin, seeks ancient weapons buried with Darth Bane, while Colyn "Tusken" Skybender has holed up near the Academy with a force of loyalists, attempting to establish a perimeter and await reinforcements. Twin sisters Rhiaen and Nalia Ust'essi, known Jedi operatives, were sighted in the area well before the conflict began, and undoubtedly still remain. Finally, there is a rogue Jedi, smuggler, and relic hunter - Connor Grey - that knows this area best, camped near the academy. He is unlikely to join any cause, but he would be a valuable ally were he to do so... or a dangerous enemy."
"Secure the Academy through any means at your disposal. Reinforcements for all parties are enroute - secure the facility prior to their arrival, and do what you can to ensure the strategic value of the site does not fall into enemy hands."
Yes, Thought Calvo, this war was different. Three faction of us have split and are at war. I side with Jac Cotelin. Leader of the rebels. Muz Ashen has been around too long. Rhiaen and Nalia Ust'essi, seem like my best bet. Though, I should kill some loyalists.
Calvo ignited his blade. The blue beam illuminated his face. “Yes. It will be done.” Calvo exited the room, and looked around. There was no one there. “Come out come out little loyalists.”
Calvo ran around, looking for the loyalists. Only when he looked back did he realized he was lost. He looked around again, and saw a red light, a saber much like his own. It was then joined by three more lights.
“Is that Colyn?” Called out Calvo. “If so come and face me Loyalist. Ashen shall fall.”
“It is Colyn and you, rebel, Shall fall.” Coyln cried out. “Charge!”
Calvo was swarmed by the four loyalists. He pulled out his chain as well and started fighting back against Colyn and his loyalists. As the First saber came toward him, Calvo lashed out his spike chain, catching the loyalists arm. He swung his saber severing the arm, and then head butted the man, cracking his skull. Again he Lashed with the chain and the spiked chain cut into a second loyalists neck, as Calvo killed another. Then it was just Colyn and Calvo.
Colyn slashed forward, and disarmed Calvo of his saber. “Bring it rebel. You shall die.”
Calvo pulled a knife out. “Are you so certain!”
Calvo lashed with the chain, and caught Colyn’s leg, tripping him. He slashed down with his knife cutting Colyns thigh. Colyn Swung his hand back, and smashed Calvo’s jaw, breaking it. Calvo reeled back, realising the chain. Calvo slammed his horns into Colyn’s head, a blow even stronger than that Calvo used to kill the previous loyalist, but Colyn just shrugged it off, and threw Calvo off of him.
“I said you would die rebel!” Colyn said. “But before you die, Who are you?”
Calvo felt the force flow through him and his jaw began to heal. “I am your death, Colyn. My name is Calvo.” Using the force, Calvo reached out, his lightsaber coming back to him. He ignited the blade, and stood up to match Colyn.
The two clashed, and blade locked. Calvo disengaged and rolled to grab his chain again. As he grabbed it Colyn slashed and Calvo, and missed, though he did hit the wall, causing dust to fall on Calvo.
“What! I just cleaned you Nerf Herder!” said Calvo. He felt his blood heat up, and his eyes began to unnerve Colyn. He lashed with his chain, catching Colyn's shoulder, and flipped Colyn, before plunging his blade into Colyn’s heart.
As the rage he felt subsided, Calvo spotted two Twi’leks. They approached him, and he blacked out. He woke up later, on the battlefield, injured and battered, the day almost over. A rebel commander came over and took him off the battlefield.
“You did good today. I don’t know why but the two Twi’leks found you and brought you to here. They mind tricked you into thinking you were still fighting that Loyalist Colin. You killed a total of 10 Loyalists in the battle today, in addition to Colyn and the four you fought before the battle. We may win this war yet.”
Calvo looked at the Commander. “ I remember none of that. How did I have that power?”
The commander looked at the battle field. “You showed skill with beast control, a good ability. You used your ability to get control of a Hssiss, and did some good damage. It was amazing. Had you not been out numbered you may have got away without such injuries.”

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