Competition: Battle Poetry

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Battle Poetry

It's time to test your skills in poetry! Write a poem about a particular battle/duel your character has been involved in. It can be funny to serious or any where in between. No minimum word count and no maximum. Winners will be graded on spelling, grammar, flow and story. Good Luck!

Competition Information
Organized by
Warlord Hades
Running time
2015-03-09 until 2015-03-16 (8 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Fourth Level Crescents
Participants
12 subscribers, of which 10 have participated.
Results
Member
Liam Torun-Urr
File submission
BattlePoetryLiam7288.rtf
Placement
1st place
2nd place
Athrun Zala
Member
Athrun Zala
Textual submission

The day had started bleak and dreary,
the sun in the sky seemed rather weary,
of casting its rays upon the ground,
while the planet roared like a tortured hound.

The air was filled with the ashes of death,
that burned in my lungs as I took a deep breath.
I took a leap down from the rocky ridge,
down to the platform that formed a large bridge.

I took a short moment to contemplate,
why the lava did whirl in such a state,
when out of the sky a figure did fly,
and landed in front in the blink of an eye.

Had I not been prepared I'd surely have missed,
the bright yellow beam as his lightsaber hissed,
its battle call as it twirled through the air,
performing a flourish with a great deal of flair.

The opponent before me was a clan brother,
in a duel we'd agreed to fight one another.
A bow we both gave as a sign of respect,
for the rules of combat we both were subject.

The force flowed throughout me, giving me power,
my blade clashed with his and sparks did they shower.
A dozen swings passed before the first strike,
stabbed through my arm with the speed of a pike.

The pain came in waves as I fought to keep hold,
of my sight, while my arm had gone numb with cold.
With a small gust of wind my red saber jumped,
to the other hand while my right arm slumped.

My saber secure, I jumped through the air,
and brought my blade down, no time could I spare.
My opponent leaped up to meet me midway,
as our blades clashed together in a fiery display.

With a violent push we broke from the lock,
as I landed, the state of my rival I took stock.
His tunic was torn and beneath was a gash,
the burned length as long as a whipman's lash.

While a smirk crossed my face, I had no time to celebrate.
With a decorative twirl and a spin he did penetrate,
my line of defense that separated me,
from being sprawled out like a withering tree.

My lightsaber clattered a distance away,
and I felt a sense of dismal dismay.
My body was burned and totally beat,
and I now knew the taste of bitter defeat.

Vaguely I sensed my opponent approach,
I couldn't help giving him a look of reproach.
With a strong arm he'd lifted me back to my feet,
and we walked off in search of the medical street.

Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Mauro Wynter
Member
Mauro Wynter
File submission
Endless_Struggle_Poetry.docx
Placement
3rd place
3rd place
Egregious
Member
Egregious
File submission
snaphiss.docx
Placement
3rd place
Member
General Kell Palpatine Dante
Textual submission

The Battle of Trent

Rain fell down all around
Death was a constant companion
Many fell with nary a sound

Into the fray did the Hammer's Fist land
Out of the transport they did jump
Soon their blood mixed in the beach's sand

Pushing into the jungle's darkness
Enemy fighters hiding in pits and bunkers
Many troopers met the eternal blackness

The monsoons poured down day upon day
Hell was the wetness of blood, sweat, and rain
Until one day the commander did say

Pack up your gear my inglorious men
The battle has ended with our victory
Time to rest until it is time again.

Placement
4th place
Member
Ashura Isradia Sadow
File submission
Battle_Poetry_Haiku_Ashura_4782.rtf
Textual submission

Hi, I have written uo a haiku for my battle poetry, I hope you enjoy.

Ashura

Placement
5th place
6th place
Mayda Ferium
Member
Mayda Ferium
Submission
Mayda Ferium opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
6th place
7th place
Artorias
Member
Artorias
Textual submission

Blood is red
Vacuum makes Blue
Your in a Puddle,
And your face is really Blue
Death loves you!

Placement
7th place
Member
Ranger Krandon Lucian Firebringer
Textual submission

Title: End result, a Haiku.

Lightsaber combat
I got into a battle
I have no eye now

By: Krandon :D

Placement
8th place
Member
A deleted dossier
Textual submission

There was a battle above Hoth.
Cough Cough.

Placement
9th place
Member
Keirdagh Taldrya Cantor
Textual submission

He went at him hard,
His blows were swift and deadly,
So ended Tarax.

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Not about me, but a Haiku about Tarax's Death :P

Placement
9th place