Competition: Monstrosity: Fall of the Ancient

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Monstrosity: Fall of the Ancient

The Old Gods are wreaking havoc upon the Cocytus System. But as the saying goes, the taller you grow, the harder you fall, and nothing can be taller than that of these engineered monstrosities.

When the dust settles, we will be forced to reflect back upon this terrifying, but mighty creatures. For this, you have been tasked by the Emperor to capture the dual nature of relief in seeing the Old Gods fall, and the melancholy of such magnificent beings falling.

Minimum of 15 lines of poetry required. Free prose is not allowed, must follow some form of rhyme or poetry style (e.g. 5 Haiku, or an ABAB Rhyme style).

Grading will be based upon poetic composition, adherence to the prompt, and creativity of the poem.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Forgotten: Monstrosity
Organized by
Lord Idris Adenn
Running time
2015-11-15 until 2015-11-30 (16 days)
Target Unit
Clan Scholae Palatinae
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Third Level Crescents
Participants
7 subscribers, of which 6 have participated.
Results
1st place
Mauro Wynter
Member
Mauro Wynter
Textual submission

Old Cocytus
Lonesome gem
Demonic or angelic who can say?

Gods, gods, arisen from below
Older than time itself
Destined to transcend
Setting the tale of truth

Destroyed, sadly before their time
Infinite power and horrid strength
Enough to turn the tide, it was not

Ending before it began
Tormented by the unified front
Empire resurgent from the depths
Remnant but not broken
Now and always
As always until death
Lie in waiting, for another era

Placement
1st place
2nd place
Sage Enzo Dek
Member
Sage Enzo Dek
Textual submission

Ode to life and ode to death,
Free from strife, befallen breath,
Hard to see the future is,
But when the dust settles, again strife begins.

Heart and mind will come and go,
Rise from the grave, pitiful souls,
To drop again at the hand of God,
The Emperor's wrath and the soldiers' odds.

Darkness come forth from your graves,
Death, a beautiful dismay,
Free the might of the ancient hell,
But for who does death toll the bell?

And when you fall upon the dust,
No more power for you to lust,
Break the spell of your dignity,
Old chained chained so easily.

Everything is said and done,
Unite the Empire as a solid one,
Cast the doubts of the ancient sods,
Emperor; his sole property is God.

Placement
2nd place
Member
General Zentru'la
Textual submission

Roaring sound of rushing water
The herald of unbound slaughter
The crest of a deadly wave
As the Abyssal rises to send us to the grave

Legions of Scholae arise!
We fight till each of us dies,
Until the beast is defeated,
Or our ammunition depleted!

Fire! Bring full force to bare!
Show this creature that it should beware
The strategy is sound,
The bombs are inbound!

Thunderous volleys from a thousand tanks strike the beast. Fwec!
They'll turn a Abyssal to a crippled wreck!
We will emerge victorious,
It's death shall be glorious

The fateful moment passes in slow motion
An eerie calm follows the commotion
Like a fountain, black blood spurts to the skies
A crash to the ground as the Abyssal finally dies

Placement
3rd place
Member
Archangel Palpatine
File submission
7589-Monstrosity-FalloftheAncient.doc
Placement
4th place
5th place
Qor Kith
Member
Qor Kith
File submission
FalloftheAncient.pdf
Placement
5th place
Member
Lucyeth
File submission
fall_of_the_ancient.docx
Textual submission

Lucyeth
#13700

Placement
No placement