Lashing out, he felt the anger buildings inside of him. The Rollmaster always had an answer, well no more this time. He would fall from the pillar of lies he had build up. Cethgus brought his sabers up, cutting out at the Knight, his anger threatening to boil over at the lack of respect Marcus showed to the Clan. Forcing his weapons up as warning bells rang through his mind he deflected the attack, fighting in the side streets really did limit the two combatants. Cethgus used his strength to batter away the yellow saber blade with ease, rotating his secondary blade to come out in a brutal slash.
Marcus was forced onto his back foot, unable to hold himself equal to the combat prowess of the Proconsul. He had to move away from the oncoming attack, dodging it as he struggled to keep his balance. Using the influence of the Force, the Iridonian’s muscles strained out as he spun on his heel bringing his saber across the man’s cheek, the tip of the blade causing the skin to burn and send Marcus reeling backwards from the intense heat. His hand instantly came up to his face, feeling the burn. Though it was nothing major it was enough to cause him to flinch at the touch of the sensitive cut. Smelling the bitterly sweet smell of burning flesh, Marcus instantly raised his saber back up.
The Knight noted the gaze that had never left him, it seemed the Iridonian was slipping into a focus that would not see any form of reason taken against it. What had once been a crowded street now became empty of all signs of public, leaving it to be sorted out by the two of them. Pressing the attack the Iridonian drove himself towards the Rollmaster once more his blades lashing out with lethal precision. The pace of the fight was clearly taking its toll on the Knight, his blade coming to block the vicious amount of slashes that were rained down upon him.
With the assistance of the Force the muscles of the Iridonian pushed further than possible, his strikes landing heavy blows onto the yellow blade. As the opening came up Cethgus bartered away his opponents defence, unable to land the kick as Marcus ducked under it, sensing the incoming danger. He was unable to avoid the follow up attack however. Spining around the Iridonian slammed the butt of his saber hilt into the Human’s neck, sending him stumbling forward. Unable to recover from the impact he felt the intense pain as his opponent's white blade sliced through the back of his legs, cutting the ligaments and bone that held him up, sending him sprawling to the ground with a dull thud.
Screams of agony rippled down the small street as Marcus’ mind was clouded with intense pain, the figure of the Iridonian loomed over him and glanced down. His eyes full of hate and anger as he circled the man coming to the front of the Human.
“I told Locke we should have killed you after the stunt you pulled. Trying to overthrow your Consul and take the power, you forget your place and you made a grave error. By attempting to spy for others on us you broke the only chains that held me in check. Shame, you had potential, and you trained our new knights with passion, something I do admire. But now, Marcus, your end has come about at my hands. I apologize for this, you were of use to the Clan. I take no pride in stripping that away, but what choice have I got?” Cethgus allowed the ice cold voice to echo into the downed man’s ears.
Raising himself up to his feet he glanced down knowing that his hand had been forced, but still the Knight deserved a quick end to the suffering that his body was currently under. In one slash the fight was over, the man's head rolled on the street floor, seeing the traitor slain for his crimes. Deactivating his blade the Proconsul quickly sprinted into the streets, grabbing Marcus' lightsaber as he went, heading towards the heavy crowds to conceal himself once more. The noise of the fight and commission would surely gather attention quickly, now it was the Iridonians hope that it was not traced back to Clan Naga Sadow.
You're invoking some beautiful imagery, Ceth..! Smells, crowds of people, a labyrinth of streets, twists and turns. You managed to invoke the setting really nicely..!
You do repeat words here and there, but not too much to make everything confusing. I'm not removing points for it, just suggesting some edits that would avoid using repetitious words:
Syntax