Hesitation? Now of all times? Rrogon thought to himself. No. War with Pravus is inevitable at this point, even if Braecen dies. Laughter began bubbling up from within the Kaleesh, causing him to throw his head back, howling in his own laughter.
Reaching up, Rrogon unclipped the straps to his mask, letting it fall freely to the ground below him, revealing the burned remnants of what his face used to be. Reaching out, Rrogon called out to his surroundings; the earth, the sky, and the very stones beneath his feet. He could feel the Dark Side that clung to everything like a second skin.
It was like swimming through a sea of sludge, heavy and thick, but this was what he needed. Even now he could feel the power that laid in the planet, the power that was calling to him. Wanting him to let it in, to fuel him and his rage. Yet in the back of his mind, he could hear the teachings that Atiryu had been showing him over the course of his rehabilitation on Selen.
Darkness holds great power, Skar, and at many times even more then the light ever could. But remember that any power comes with a price. You saw first hand what it can do to the body if left unchecked.
The Templar knew full well that this mission could be his last and he accepted that without hesitation. I die knowing that those I leave behind will live Reaching out once more, the Kaleesh called to the Darkness around him and began pulling it within himself, letting it change him, mold him into what he needed to be, what he was born to be. A Kaleesh God.
Fire ignited in the Templar’s eyes, causing them to glow like a forge as he lowered himself into an archaic battle stance that his father taught him and his brothers long ago. The Dark Side pulsed like a living being within him, as if the heartbeat of the planet now matched his own. Meeting the eyes of the Adept once more, Rrogon’s next words came clear and true in his own native tongue.
“Tonight, we both die in the fires of battle.”
Howling, Rrogon charged once more at the Adept, letting the Force guide his movements and his blade as the very air around him seemed to burn and hiss at his passing. Once more, the two Juggernauts clashed, and their deadly dance commenced once again.
Diving under the white fire of Braecen’s blade as it tried to cleave at his exposed face, Rrogon let his momentum carry him behind the Sith’s legs where Rrogon slammed his open palm into the ground, releasing a wave of telekinetic energy that slammed into the Human from behind and swept the unsuspecting man off his feet, and away from the alien that had hunted him across the planet.
Crashing to the ground a second later, Braecen quickly rose to his feet and whipped his head around to find the Kaleesh charging him once more. Sneering, the Human raised his hand and released another stream of infernal electricity, but was surprised as the Kaleesh seemed to sap the strength from his attack just before it hit him.
Slamming into the waiting lightsaber, Rrogon easily pushed aside the diminished Force Lightning and continued with his charge. He would not let this traitor leave the temple alive. White blades hissing through the air as the Templar made his advance, each blow pushed aside or deflected before they could make contact with the Warrior.
Lashing out with his foot, Rrogon tried to sweep Braecen off his feet, but when it connected, it felt like he had struck a rod of pure iron, and a smug look of victory crossed Braecen’s face as he moved in for the kill on the exposed Gatekeeper. But rather than move out of the way, Rrogon instead moved into the attack, letting both of the white blades stab into his stomach just as his own yellow blade pierced Braecen’s heart.
Horrible pain burned inside the Kaleesh as the lightsaber blades superheated his organs and burning him from the inside out. But he knew that victory was now his as Braecen slumped into his chest, the light of life fading from his eyes. The Adept’s lightsabers deactivated as the Human’s hands fell from them.
Struggling to push the Human off of him, Skar finally heaved the corpse off and slowly moved his hand to his comlink, each second of movement an agonizing eternity. Rasping into the the receiver, Skar tried to stay awake despite the sheer amount of pain and agony he was in.
“Nighthawk… mission completed. end medical teams,” Darkness finally took him as the Kaleesh finally succumbed to the pain, blacking out.
Syntax
You use "Human" and "human" in the same paragraph. Either is technically correct but you must be consistent throughout your writing.
"Awe" is the correct word.
This is a good example of where reading your writing out loud helps catch awkward sentences. This needs some revision for clarity and probably needs to either be two sentences or bolstered with some punctuation.
Should be a comma after transmission.
The period after saved needs to be a comma or ready needs to be capitalized.
Story
You set this up in the first post...then don't do anything with it later. I get that you changed your mind when you wrote your ending, but it at least warranted a mention to tie up the loose end, even if Skar didn't use it.
Story-wise this was a solid first post. You set up the conflict right away and establish the stakes for both characters, especially Skar's willingness to go to extraordinary lengths to complete his mission. You also had a healthy amount of action. Good work.
Realism
While it's good you acknowledge the difficulty here, with +0 Survival and +1 Perception Skar really wouldn't be able to do much tracking at all.