The sun was high in the sky, birds sang, and a gentle breeze passed through the courtyard. Water could be heard splashing in the nearby fountain, a quiet sound that still managed to fill the otherwise silent space. Kordath Bleu sat in the grass below one of the walls that enclosed the courtyard, his back leaning against the cool stone. Various species of ivy crawled across the rocks above him towards the patrolling marksman that marched up and down the length. It was a pleasant day on Selen, though the Ryn would have preferred to not ruin it with the task ahead of him. Next to the lounging Rollmaster was a bottle of whiskey, a good quarter of it already gone as he sat and enjoyed the peace and quiet.
He first saw his obligation approaching when the Zabrak stopped near the fountain, his crimson eyes scanning the yard. Kord sighed, Thorn had been Knighted only months before, he’d stood at the base of the Consul’s dias as she spoke the words affirming his title. None of them were certain where the former slave had popped off to afterwards, usually a newly christened Knight of Arcona would join in the festivities surrounding their ascension, not Thorn. He’d given the entire idea of ‘beers at the Rancor’ a sneer and left the Citadel, and his fellows, behind. Now with war looming, he’d shown back up, which meant Blinky had given Bleu the unpleasant job of checking up on the Sith.
With a wave of the bottle, he greeted the Zabrak and got his feet under himself, standing and stretching in the shade of the wall.
“Oi, Thorny boy.”
The Knight approached slowly, hands inside his black and red robes. His back was ramrod straight, his face impassive except for just a hint of boredom, as if the entire situation was beneath him.
“Please do not call me that. A messenger told me I was to meet someone here, upon the Consul’s orders. There are battles being fought across the system, Bleu, why would she have me waste time with you? Our journey ended when I attained my Knighthood.”
There’s that bloody haughty tone, just as cold as I recall as well, eh.
“Ya went dark on us, lad, Shadow Lady just wants ta make sure yer good ta go before ya go out, yeah?”
Kord relished the look of confusion that passed over the Sith’s face as he tried to piece together what had just been said. It was true he could speak better than that, but it was just so much more fun. The warm, fuzzy sensation from the whiskey might have been egging him on though.
“She wants you of all people to insure I’m fit for combat?” asked the Knight with incredulity. “Your about as threatening as a Loth-cat.”
Bleu shrugged in response, gently placing his bottle on the grass before stepping towards the Zabrak.
“As it is, mate, we’re at the Citadel, that means the med droids ain’t far. So, ya get ta come at me like yer serious.”
Thorn’s lip curled in disdain, “It’s beneath me to fight you, Ryn, there’s no gain in it for me.”
“Suit yerself,” Kord responded with a shrug, “you’ll find ya won’t be able ta get on a shuttle ta join the war effort though. Not until I clear ya or ya put me in tha medbay.”
Kordath reached up and gave the tall, pale man a pat on the cheek and a smirk before turning his back to him. He made it two steps towards the wall before the Force screamed it’s warning at him. Content that he’d angered the Knight well enough, the Ryn casually bent forward and scooped his bottle up from the ground. The sound of something cutting the air above him, the faint ripple of cloth moving as well, told him what the Knight had tried to do. When he turned, he took in a flushed looking Thorn, hands balled into fists and his footing unsteady, as if he’d just failed to connect with a kick.
The Ryn lifted his bottle in salute before bringing it to his lips, eyes nearly closed as he took a strong pull from it. As he wiped his mouth and mustache clean, Thorn struck, lashing out with palms set rigid seeking his throat and midsection. Kordath stumbled sideways and spun past the Zabrak, belching slightly as the whiskey settled. The next round of blows that came in were driven more by anger and frustration. With erratic, seemingly random movement more akin to drunken fumbling, Bleu evaded most of the strikes. He turned his head slightly in an attempt to avoid one of the blows and found himself a touch too slow as a pale skinned fist grazed his jaw.
There was a bit of power behind that, he get’s a solid hit in and I could be in trouble, heh.
“Oh, I’m sorry, did we start?” he asked, grinning at the taller alien.
Thorn wasted no time on words, his right forearm twisting to release the blade hidden within his bracer before charging at the Rollmaster. The intoxicated Arconan yawned as he fell backwards towards the grass, watching with seemingly idle interest as the thin dagger stabbed the air where he’d been. His tail acting as a counter weight, Kordath was bent back almost parallel to the ground. It was with great amusement that he saw the color rise further in the pale Zabrak’s face before, with a deep and sad sigh, he swung his bottle up to smack the Knight in the face with it.
He righted himself, inspecting his bottle for cracks with one squinted eye as the Sith rolled away from him. A bruise could be seen already forming on the ghostly face and his red eyes screamed for blood. Kordath gave him a little mock bow, bottle still firmly held in his hand, pleased that it hadn’t broken yet. As he straightened and took another pull from it, the signature snap-hiss of a lightsaber filled the quiet courtyard.
“Oh, gettin’ serious now, are we? Good, hate ta see ya miss out on tha whole bleedin’ war.”
Syntax:
A few small errors:
There were a few places here where commas were being asked to do more than they could. This is one way to tighten the punctuation up, though of course there are others. One thing to keep in mind is that a comma alone isn't enough to join two independent clauses, i.e. bits that could be complete sentences on their own. A semicolon, colon, or dash can do that, or you can add a conjunction.
Your = belonging to you; you're = you are. Also Loth-cats are scary, man. One time I saw one take out a probe droid.
It's = it is; its = belonging to it.
Story:
Kord's a first-rate troll and it's a lot of fun to read. The premise for the fight is plausible enough, and seems to reflect the OOC situation a bit. This was a nice set- and it handed a lot of momentum over to Thorn, so I hope to see that carry through the rest of the posts.
Realism:
Drunken Boxing at its finest.
Continuity:
No errors spotted.